Kaha Tum Ne Achay Ho Tum<<<<

[banjara'''']

hazar dard, hazar nale, hazar ansoo , hazar ahain
rah main ate kai muqam hain, ishq nagar se pehle

meri jaan mera har kadam, waise to teri rah main tha
makada tha banaya hwa,kisi raqeeb ne tere ghar se pehle

ae chand abhi ruk to zara,tujhe takne ki hay kwahish abhi
mera wada hay nahin aye ga woh----------- sehar se pehle

dekar kandhon ka sahara mujhay, un ki gali zara le chalo
hay tamana kuch pal tanha rahon,tanhaiy-e-qabar se pehle

kaha ham ne kaise hain ham,kaha tum ne achay ho tum
ik lehar si dil main tarap gai,magar,teri magar se pehle,,,,

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i hope u all like it,,
khan banjara''''
<mohabbat ka maza to judai main hay>

[musharrafhusain]

Bohat khoob khan
bohat achcha kalam keh rahe ho aaj kal.

"dekar kandhon ka sahara mujhay, un ki gali zara le chalo
"hay tamana kuch pal tanha rahon,tanhaiy-e-qabar se pehle"

mujhe tumhare kalam mein hamari riwayeti shayeri ki bohat jhalak nazar aati hai aur mein zaati tor per bohat pasand karta hoon ise. tum bhi mujhe us qabeel se mutaaliq lagte ho
"Voh naqsh e paa mere pesh ro jo chor gaey"
barhana paa unhi kaanton pe chal raha hoon main"

well said . God bless you.

musharrafhusain

[banjara'''']

hi musharaff shab
how r u?
first of all i m really great full that u apprisiated me in
that fashion,,aap ka bohat shukria,,
baki dear is dil main jo bhi khiyala aya
use koshish hoti hay k sheron ki zuban de dain
aap ki reply se laga k shayad kisi had tak apni
koshish main kamyab hwe chahte hain
thanks dear
thnaks a lot
khan banjara''''

[Afshan]

Khan sahab! Kaise ho??

Kya baat hai, aaj kal bohat achha likh rahe ho aap.. waise to humesha se hi achha likhte ho, magar aaj kal kuchh khaas baat hai... kabhi miloge to baat karenge..

Filhal to yahi kahenge ki apka kalaam dard bhara hi sahi, magar hai bohat khubsoorat.. Likhte raho, aur muskuraate raho.

[banjara'''']

hi banno g
how r u sis?
are jnab insan achay logon ki suhbat main rahe to achi batain
sekhta hay,or achay shayron ki suhbat main rahe to achi shayri sekh leta hay,,or shayri.com aik aisi mehfil hay jahan dukh sukh share karne k sath sath ham ne bohat kuch sekha,,baki jo acha kam kiya bakol apke woh aap ki suhbaton ka natijah hay ,,
umeed hay aap isi tarah hosla afzai karti rahain gin hamari
thansk n thanks alot
khan banjara''''

[akant]

Khan bhai,

vaise to saare kalaam aapke bahoot achchhe hain, unmein se yea sheyr ne dil ko chhu liya. likhate rahiye.

ae chand abhi ruk to zara,tujhe takne ki hay kwahish abhi
mera wada hay nahin aye ga woh----------- sehar se pehle


Akant...

[banjara'''']

hi akant sahab
how r u?
aap ki dad ka behad shukria
aap hamesha ham jaise nachiz logon ki
achay andaz main hosla afzai karte hain
behad mashkor hain
khan banjara''''

[romana]

hi moon

hw r u

wah wah bhut hi acha likha hai tum ne koi to baat hai itni dard bari nazam aur itne piyaare alfaaz lagta hai aaj dil ko khool ke rakh diya hai aapne. its really a georgeous peom

keep on writing
bye

[banjara'''']

hi romana g
aap ki dad bhi kabile dad hay
thanks dear
khan banjara''''

[Zeba]

aap ke khayalat bohot khoobsoorat hai,likte rahiye.

zeba

[zeeshaan]

Dear Moon,,
kaya Hall Ha tumhara,,
Samajh Nahi aata ha ka Kis Share ka Bara Ma Kahoo,,,,
Yasa Insan bhi kaya ajeeb chez ha OR aagar us ko Muhabbat ho gay to phir to kaya hi bat ha,,,Dear Moon,,is qadar na soocha kar or is qadar na chaha kar,,,
keep smiling,,
b happy , b brave and B ALIVE,
zs

[banjara'''']

hi zeba g
how r u?
bphat khushi hui aap se apni is
adna koshish ki dad pa kar
aap ki hosla afzai ki zarorat rahe gi ainda bhi
khan banjara'''
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hi zeshan sahab
how r u sir ji?
aap ne itne khob sorat andaz main dad di hay
malom hi nahin hota k dad de rahe hain yah
nasehat kar rahe hain..
khair aap ne kaha k is qadar na socha karon
sir agar itna bhi na sochon to meri jana ki yadain mere begair
udass ho jain or main nahin cahata k woh mujh se naraz hon..
aap ne kaha k is kadar na chaha karo
to sir ji,,hmain to chahna ata hi nahin,bas aise hi kabhi kabhar hazrte INSHA k rahon per chalne ki koshish kar k dil ko sakoon
dila dete hain..waise QATEEL SHIFAI (marhoom)sahab ka aik sher hmain yad a raha hay chahte hain k aap k sath share karin,,jo k shayad unhon ne meri taraf se aap ko jawab diya hay,arz hay
"ISHQ KI INTAHA KISE MALOOM
JAAN KAFI HAY IBTIDAA K LIYE"
thanks again
khan banjara''''

[zeeshaan]

Dear Moon,,
Kaya Hall ha,,or Kaha hO aaj kal,,,
;;;;Bhola Nahi Ma Aaj Bhi Aadab-e-Jawani;;;;;
;;;;Ma Aaj Bhi Ooron Ko Nasehat Nahi Kerta;;;;

or Jo Share Ma Na likha tha wo Aak Shayer ki Ghazal Ka Misra ha,,,,kisi time complete likh kar post kar don ga,,,
Rahi bat Payar ki,,Dear Ya Payar Bhi Ajeeb chez hota ha,,,Maloon hi nahi hota ha Ka insan kisi sa kitni Muhabbat kerta ha,,,Per if u love some one Tell me that u love her,,,how much,,,& how ,,
Keep it up,,,
take care,
keep smiling,
b happy, b brave & b ALIVE
zs

[diwanaaa]

WAKH KHAN SAAHAB WAH,

AAPAKI IS GAJAL KO PADHAKE TO KOI BHI GAM KE DARIYA ME DOOB JAAYEGA, KAMAAL KA LIKHA HE APANE. DIL KO KUCHH HO GAYA.
LIKHATE RAHENA.
HOPE FOR THE BEST
TAKE CARE
BYE.

[banjara'''']

hi zeshan sahab
how r u sir ji?
infact i was bzy in some work
sorry for that,,
aap ne poch liya k agar ksi se piyarr karte ho to
batao kitna karte ho?
zeshan sahab
is swal ne mujhay aap k bare main
herat main dal diya ,,,k aap?
jnab koi kiya bata sakta hay k
woh kisi ko kitna chahta hay,,ham ne bhi aaj tak
apne piyar ki sarhad ka visit nahin kiya
or pata nahin k kahan hay
magar sir g aik baat jo ham jante hain woh
yeh hay k piyaar to dil main basta hay
lekin akhir KHUDA piyar dalne k liye dil ko muntakhib kiyon kiya
bata sakte hain aap..may b?
magar main batata hon
hazrat SULTAN BAHOO ne is baat ka jwab diya hay
DIL DARIYA SAMANDROON DONGE
TE KON DILAAN DIYAN JANRE ,,,,HOO
umeed hay k aap samajh gaye hon gain k piyar k had nahin hoti
main bhi nahin janta k mere piyar ki had kahan
tak hay ,,how ever thanks again
khan banjara''''

[banjara'''']

hi dewaana sahab
how r u?
aap ne hamari is adna kawish ko pasand kiya
thanks alot
dard main dobe hwe logon ko bahana chahiye ansoo bahane ka
shayri likhna yah parhna to aik bahana hay
am i right sir
thanks alot
khan banjara''''

[zeeshaan]

Dear Moon,,,
Aak Share Yad Aa raha ha,,I dont Know kis Ka HA,
""Izhar-e-Ishq Ma GO ka Hazar Zilatan Hoin'''''
''''Likan Uasa Bata To Deaya WO Jan to Gai'''''
Dear Moon,,,
Yes We can explain that how can we love others,,,by our words, by our behavior,,,etc...
If our words true,,,others are also feel it,,,,Rah gay Payar ki Sarhad to dear Moon u r rite,,,Payar ki sarhad to insan ka aapna aandar hoti ha,,,aapna dil or Demajh ka undar,,,,
Wasa aak oor share yad aa raha ha,,,Bad ma Kisi time sanoo ga bez ma jub bhi us ko yad kerta ho,buhat hurt hota ho,,or aagar tum ko bhi suna deya to tum bhi hurt ho ga,,,
Take care,,,
Allah Hafiz,
Keep writing,
b happy, b brave & B ALIVE
zs
(u received my mail)

[banjara'''']

hi zeshan sahab
how r u?
bohat shukria aap hamare liye kuch waqt nikal to lete
hain,,ap ne jo sher sunaya bohat acha hay,,hamare dard ki parwa kiye bagair hurt karne wala bhi suna hi dijiye
i'll b great full
khan banjara''''

[zeeshaan]

Dear Moon,,
Share pasand aaya,,,shukraya,,,Buhat buhat shukaraya,,,
;;;;Onec ...Aak Shayar Kisi Mehfal Ma Ghazal Suna Raha Hota ha,,,Log Buhat Bazar Ho Raha Hota ha, or Wo Ghazal Khatam Kerna Ka Nam Hi Nahi La Raha Hota Ha,,,Kehata Ha,,,,,Mujhaa Aaphi Ghazal Ka Ya Shar Zati Toor Per Buhat Pasand Ha,,,Shar Sunata Ha"'''Hazareen Ma Sa Aak Sahib Uth kar Kehata Ha::::Hazoor-e-Wala Zarr-a-Nawazi Ha AAP ki Warna SHAR kis Kabal,,,
Take care,
Keep Smiling,,,
B happy yar,,B happy,,
zs

[banjara'''']

hi zeshan sahaib
how r u?
are jnab bohat khob kaha aap ne
waise isi kam per lagae rahain bohat ajar
kamain gain aap,,
khan banjara''''

[zeeshaan]

Dear Moon,,
Bus Yar Dua Kerna,,Allah isi agar per Beksh Da aap ka bahi ko,
zs

[Sanjana]

Banjara ji,
Pehle hi sabne itni tarif kar di hai ki mein kya kahu..... anyway very nicely written....
Sanjana

[banjara'''']

hi sanjana g
how r u?
aap ne kuch na kah kar bhi bohat
achay ndaz main dad de di hay
thanks n thanks a lot
khan banjara''''