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Tere Baad - 29th September 2004, 08:18 PM

Teri tasveer.... dil mein reh jayegi.
Tere Baad....Ye Zindagi Na Jee Jayegi.

Dhoondhenge tujhe....tanhaiyon mein.
Sab baatein ....khamosh ho jayengi.

Tere Baad ....Ye Zindagi Na Jee Jayegi.

Raaste pe....nazar reh jayegi.
Manjil .... na kabhi aayegi.

Tere Baad Ye Zindagi Na Jee Jayegi.

Nadiyaan....tarasti reh jayengi.
Phoolon se....khushboo chali jayegi.

Tere Baad.... Ye Zindagi Naa Jee Jayegi.

Hum chahte hain tumhein..
Dil ki ye baat....dil hi mein reh jayegi.

Shayad....tum laut kar aaoge kabhi..
Jiyenge zindagi....teri raah mein.
Humein maut bhi na aayegi.

Par Tere Baad....Ye Zindagi Naa Jee Jayegi.


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29th September 2004, 08:20 PM

roopaliji bahoot khoob.....

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29th September 2004, 08:58 PM

Teri tasveer.... dil mein reh jayegi.
Tere Baad....Ye Zindagi Na Jee Jayegi.

..is kadar dil main na kisi ko basao...
tumhara liye dhadke bhi na ye
aise nam na ispe likh jao...

Dhoondhenge tujhe....tanhaiyon mein.
Sab baatein ....khamosh ho jayengi.

..woh kya tumhe milega tahai main...
jo tumhe taha chor gaya...
yun na apne ko khamoshi me le jao...

Tere Baad ....Ye Zindagi Na Jee Jayegi.

..sath jinda kya ... juda jinda jee ke dikhao...

Raaste pe....nazar reh jayegi.
Manjil .... na kabhi aayegi.

..rasta to harjayi hai...
ret se dhak jayega....
yun na ret ke liye manjil ko thukrao...

Tere Baad Ye Zindagi Na Jee Jayegi.

..sath jinda kya ... juda jinda jee ke dikhao...

Nadiyaan....tarasti reh jayengi.
Phoolon se....khushboo chali jayegi.

..nadiyon ko ashkoN se bhar ...
dil ke phoolon ko mehkana
dekho kaise dil ke mehak se mehak jaoge

Tere Baad.... Ye Zindagi Naa Jee Jayegi.

..sath jinda kya ... juda jinda jee ke dikhao...

Hum chahte hain tumhein..
Dil ki ye baat....dil hi mein reh jayegi.

..dil main rekhar bhi jaloge...
na jalo shayad kehkar...
ek bar kehkar hi tadap jao

Shayad....tum laut kar aaoge kabhi..
Jiyenge zindagi....teri raah mein.
Humein maut bhi na aayegi.

..sach hai maut na yun aati hai...
jane walon ko anjanon ki yaad kahan aati hai
is na khatam hone wale intzar se nizat pao..!

Par Tere Baad....Ye Zindagi Naa Jee Jayegi.

..sath jinda kya ... juda jinda jee ke dikhao...


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jo likhna tha likh chuka .... samjho baki ke maun ko....


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30th September 2004, 05:49 PM

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roopaliji bahoot khoob.....

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Pappu ji...

bahut bahut shukriya aapka yahan aane ke liye..mera kalaam aapko pasand aaya...tx a lot

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nice one - 30th September 2004, 10:53 PM

ROOPALI JI,

Bahot khub likha hai aapne . Dard e judaai ke ehsaas se bhi dar lagta hai . Ek sher arz kiya hai

YUN TO DUNIYA MEIN KOI BHI TANHA NAHI HOTA
CHAH KAR BHI KOI KISISE JUDA NAHI HOTA

MOHABBAT KO SIRF MAJBURI HI LE DUBTI HAI
WARNA KHUSHI SE KOI BEWAFA NAHI HOTA


ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE

BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE

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TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA RAHE HAR WAQT YEHI DUA HAI
APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE
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PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI
PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN
WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI
KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN
WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI
UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM
WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE
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Re: Tere Baad - 1st October 2004, 03:43 PM

hi rooopaaaliiiiiiiiiii..tumko aaj padh kar mujhe bahut khushi mili.mein is site par nai hoon,,aur yeh site mujhe bahoot achi lagi...tumhari kavita bhi bahoot achi hai...i realy love ur poems..keep writing and be happy....


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Re: Tere Baad - 1st October 2004, 04:21 PM

bahooot karari gazal hai...yeh aajkal ke shayar log kaun si chakki ka pisa aata khate hai...gabbar khush hua...
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2nd October 2004, 03:48 PM

..is kadar dil main na kisi ko basao...
tumhara liye dhadke bhi na ye
aise nam na ispe likh jao

..woh kya tumhe milega tahai main...
jo tumhe taha chor gaya...
yun na apne ko khamoshi me le jao...

..sath jinda kya ... juda jinda jee ke dikhao...

..rasta to harjayi hai...
ret se dhak jayega....
yun na ret ke liye manjil ko thukrao...

..sath jinda kya ... juda jinda jee ke dikhao...

..nadiyon ko ashkoN se bhar ...
dil ke phoolon ko mehkana
dekho kaise dil ke mehak se mehak jaoge

..sath jinda kya ... juda jinda jee ke dikhao...

..dil main rekhar bhi jaloge...
na jalo shayad kehkar...
ek bar kehkar hi tadap jao

..sach hai maut na yun aati hai...
jane walon ko anjanon ki yaad kahan aati hai
is na khatam hone wale intzar se nizat pao..!

..sath jinda kya ... juda jinda jee ke dikhao...


Kunal…

Bahut khoob..sach bahut khoob…main samajhi jo tum samjhana chah rahe ho…acha laga tumhe yahan dekhakr..aur tumhara reply..toh bas kya kahoon…70 gm mujhse bhi le lo issi baat pe…lol

Tx a lot….tx a lot..4 coming.

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Re: Tere Baad - 2nd October 2004, 04:27 PM

ROOPALI JI
ek baar phir hamari daad kubool kijiye,,itne sundar aur saral kalaam ke liye...bahoot pasand aayi yeh rachna bhi..
meri daad kubool kijiye,,,likhte rahiye..aapke kalaam ka sada intezaar rehta hai...khush rahiye

JINDAGI JINDAGI NA RAHEGI TERE JAANE KE BAAD
TASVEER KOI DIL MEIN NA BASEGI TERE JAANE KE BAAD
KHO JAUNGI MEIN TANHAIYON KE ANDHERON MEIN...
AANDHIYAN GAM KI CHALENGI TERE JAANE KE BAAD

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Re: nice one - 3rd October 2004, 08:03 PM

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ROOPALI JI,

Bahot khub likha hai aapne . Dard e judaai ke ehsaas se bhi dar lagta hai . Ek sher arz kiya hai

YUN TO DUNIYA MEIN KOI BHI TANHA NAHI HOTA
CHAH KAR BHI KOI KISISE JUDA NAHI HOTA

MOHABBAT KO SIRF MAJBURI HI LE DUBTI HAI
WARNA KHUSHI SE KOI BEWAFA NAHI HOTA


ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE

BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE

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Pyaasa ji….

Nice sher..tx a lot 4 coming…..aapko kalam pasand aaya uske liye bahut bahut shukriya..

Well aise kyon likha aapne “ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE”….don’t say like tht…ok?

Chalti hoon..take care


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Re: Re: Tere Baad - 3rd October 2004, 08:04 PM

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hi rooopaaaliiiiiiiiiii..tumko aaj padh kar mujhe bahut khushi mili.mein is site par nai hoon,,aur yeh site mujhe bahoot achi lagi...tumhari kavita bhi bahoot achi hai...i realy love ur poems..keep writing and be happy....
hello Suniiiiiittaaaaa…..

arey yaar tumhe kitni khushi mili ..wo toh pata lag raha hai jiss tarahs e tumne mera naam liya hai….poora khinch diya bechare ko…lol.

So u r new…u r welcum Sunita….aur rahi baat iss site ki toh yahna poems bhi achi ahin aur yahan ke log bhi….

Anyways tx a lot 4 coming……

Take care


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Re: Re: Tere Baad - 3rd October 2004, 08:12 PM

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bahooot karari gazal hai...yeh aajkal ke shayar log kaun si chakki ka pisa aata khate hai...gabbar khush hua...
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aap yahan?....oh lagta hai jai aur veeru se bhaag rahe hain

aur kaunsi chakki ka aatta khate hain..well ye toh hum nahin batayenge aapko

anyways tx 4 coming

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Re: Re: Tere Baad - 3rd October 2004, 08:15 PM

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ROOPALI JI
ek baar phir hamari daad kubool kijiye,,itne sundar aur saral kalaam ke liye...bahoot pasand aayi yeh rachna bhi..
meri daad kubool kijiye,,,likhte rahiye..aapke kalaam ka sada intezaar rehta hai...khush rahiye

JINDAGI JINDAGI NA RAHEGI TERE JAANE KE BAAD
TASVEER KOI DIL MEIN NA BASEGI TERE JAANE KE BAAD
KHO JAUNGI MEIN TANHAIYON KE ANDHERON MEIN...
AANDHIYAN GAM KI CHALENGI TERE JAANE KE BAAD

-MANOJ
wah kya khoob sher arz kya hai....bahut khoob Manoj ji...

aur aapki daad bilkul kabool hai..hausla afzai ke liye bahut abhut shukriya..bas aapka reply aata rahe..koshish bhi jari rahegi likhte rehne ki...tx once again

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Kunal…

Bahut khoob..sach bahut khoob…main samajhi jo tum samjhana chah rahe ho…acha laga tumhe yahan dekhakr..aur tumhara reply..toh bas kya kahoon…70 gm mujhse bhi le lo issi baat pe…lol

Tx a lot….tx a lot..4 coming.

Take care
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