Gum

[liveinnothing]

Aatey hain gum
jindgi mein
haseen ke din
yaad dilaaney ke liye

Pal hum bhool na jayen
jinhey
woh haasin pal
yaad dilaney ke liye

Har kisi se nahi
rakhtey jawaab mohababt ka
umeed tau hoti hai
toot janey ke liye

Log rakh detey hain
rastey mein sang 'haseen'
RAHA-GEER terey
sambhal janey ke liye

'Insaan' tau pathaar ki
pooja kartey hain
sheeshey ke dil kahan
insaano ke liye

Waajid nahi hogaa
usey khatawaar kehnaa
khudaa ne diyaa yeh dil
beemaar honey ke liye



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[Gabbar singh]

'Insaan' tau pathaar ki
pooja kartey hain
sheeshey ke dil kahan
insaano ke liye

hhnnnnn
bahoooooooot naainsaafi hai...bahoot naainsaafi hai...
gabbar

[soni_sonal]

hi

bahut khoob likha hai aapne
humari daad kubul kijiye

sonal

[mayu]

hi,


Aatey hain gum
jindgi mein
haseen ke din
yaad dilaaney ke liye

Pal hum bhool na jayen
jinhey
woh haasin pal
yaad dilaney ke liye

Har kisi se nahi
rakhtey jawaab mohababt ka
umeed tau hoti hai
toot janey ke liye

Log rakh detey hain
rastey mein sang 'haseen'
RAHA-GEER terey
sambhal janey ke liye

'Insaan' tau pathaar ki
pooja kartey hain
sheeshey ke dil kahan
insaano ke liye

bahut khub , kya kahu shabdo ke jaal mai sachhai ka aaaina khubsurti se dikha diya aapne.

aapka her sher apne aap mai kai bate samete hue hai, ummido ki , rishto ki, bhavishava ki,
sapno ki, ishwar ki , thokro ki, ishq ki ,
tadap ki , yadoon ki,

bahut kuch kah gaye aap in chand lines mai.

keep writing

tc

mayuri

[liveinnothing]

Hi gabbar

i would say impressive name good to hear u were happy
thanks because u read it


LIVEINNOTHING

[liveinnothing]

HI SONAL

shukriya apney in chand alfazon ko apney daad ke layak samjhaa achaa lagaa ki aapko pasand aaye ek baar phir shukriyaa yahan aaney ka

Liveinnothing

[liveinnothing]

HI Mayuri

jub mainey apnaa likhaa padhaa tau mujhey kuch bhi khaas nahi lagaa per jo aapney is ke barey mein apna ahsaas likhaaa aur woh bhi is khoobsoorti se aapney is ghazal ke barey mein likhaa usey padh kar ab mein hi soch taa hoon shayad kuch achaa likhaa hai per kehtey hain khoobsoorti dekhney waley ki aankhon mein hoti hai shayad mujhey kehnaa padegaa yeh aapkaa ahsaas hai jo is tarah saaf aur paak hai ki aap ney yeh sab kuch mehsoos kiyaa shukriyaa meraa hoslaa afjai ke liye

aap meri aur bhi gazlein padhengey yahi umeed rakhtaa hoon
shukriyaa

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