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Red face aaj main MARNE ja raha hun.... - 19th November 2004, 12:07 AM

Andheron se hath mila.. ujale se door ja raha hun...
Honton se jam gira, ashko main milne ja raha hun...

Safar-e-jindgi qaliil*sa, tanhai ki umra tawiil** mili...
Tufuuliyat-o-khurd** chor, kabra main sajne ja raha hun ...

* chota, **lambi, *** bachpan aur jawani..


Sehra-e-gham main angaron pe thande sukoon ki chah...
Bhagh-o-bahar* se ajnabi, haar tasweer pe jadne ja raha hun...

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Pyar-o-ranj-e-mehfil bhula, jhakmon ko silne ja raha hun...

Mehboob se umeeden rakh thi, yaagnaah* kab peeche rahe...
Dard-o-gham se karah*, rakh main khilne ja raha hun ..

* rishtedaar **cheekh,


Kaazib* aawazon se na roko mujhe ey kaazib duniya walon...
“saccha_pyar”-e-jahan dekh, aaj main marne ja raha hun...

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19th November 2004, 09:39 AM

kunal bhai.....

kaise ho ab..... vakiye main umda kalam hai......

Andheron se hath mila.. ujale se door ja raha hun...
Honton se jam gira, ashko main milne ja raha hun...

Sehra-e-gham main angaron pe thande sukoon ki chah...
Bhagh-o-bahar* se ajnabi, haar tasweer pe jadne ja raha hun

wah -bhai-wah.....

kuch aage jo likha paya.....


*tawafat to rishton mein tere thi ae bewafa.....
phir apni hi kyun main *saakh bachata phir raha hoon.....

na sataoo ae *kaazib-e-dahar ke logon.....
chita ko apni main aag lagane jaa raha hoon.....

ae khuda tu bhi chood de ^AMAN^-e-daaman.....
*tiraagi ke *tawill-e-safar pe main jaa raha hoon....


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19th November 2004, 12:28 PM

Mere Pyare Kunal,

Hmmmmm, bhai kalaam to bilkul hi lajawaab hai aapka is mein koi shak nahi, Lekin phir bhi kehna Chahunga KYA HUA TUMHE KUNAL. Mere bhai, kyu itne sad ho. Tum pe yeh bilkul hi nahi jajta. Hum to bas sadaa yehi chahenge ke tum humesha muskurate nazar aao. So cheer up my lil bro.

Bohot hi umda kalaam. Chalo tumhe ab seedha 50grams daad.

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bhai kaise ho - 19th November 2004, 01:05 PM

kunal bhai

kaise ho.Itna dard bhara likha hay.Phir kabhi aisa mat likhna ki aaj main marne ja raha huun.Tum to sabko khushian date ho.........aaj itne udas.Kush raho bhai..........tum to sabko hasate ho.

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19th November 2004, 02:09 PM

sukanya.... aur Candyboy.....

kutch nahi hua mere bhai ko...... aise kaise jayega......hume.n chood ke.....

dard kayi baar poorane nikal jaate hai.N .....
aur aap sabse share kar lete hai.N.....

bus yahi haal hai mere bhai ka......

aur Kunal dekhooo kitna pareshaan karte ho tum logon ko......

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hi - 19th November 2004, 02:22 PM

hi kunalji kitna dard bhra likha hai aapne lekin aapki ye marne wali baat hume bilkul achi nahi lagi plz aap aaindna kabi ase baate na kare aapki is shayri pariwar ko or aapke sab dosto ko aapki jarurt hai are life me to kushi or gum to chlte rhate hai bas hume to unse ladna hai hai na na ki ase baate sochni hai ok ab se aap kush rhege pllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Re: aaj main MARNE ja raha hun.... - 19th November 2004, 03:23 PM

marne ja raho ho.....bas yehi kahunga khana kha kar jana


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19th November 2004, 06:07 PM

bhai kunal....


kya hai ye sab .... kuch aur nahi mila tha likhne ko ..... mujhe gusa aa rahi hai bohat ... aisa kyun likha ... aise hi chale jaoge aap ... na jane kya bat hai ... chal diye ... mera mood mat hilaya karo ... mujhe wakai rona aa raha hai bohat .... itna sad kyun likha ... bhai kya hua hai ho sake to batana mujhe... khair ispe wah to kar hi nahi sakta main ,... chah kar bhi ... kyunki kuch samajh nahi aa raha kya kahun bhai aisa mat likhna kabhi aage se...

umeed hai aap sabki baton pe gaur karoge ....

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19th November 2004, 06:13 PM

KunaaL Bhaaii…

Kaafi bhaari bhaari shbdoN ka istemaal kiya hai dost aap ne.. Par Nazam la-jawaab hai.. Bekaaraa dil ko karaar mile isi duaaoN ke saath…


[color=dark red]Jab chale gaye wo tanha chhor kar..
Hame sab tanhaa kahte haiN..
Tanha nahi ham ab bhi yaaroN ..
Apne ashqoN ki shaaye mai rahte haiN..

Ek Aur sher haiN janaab ham shayaroN ke liye…

Mat Soch ki tum bin ham mar jaayenge..
Jinda rah kar bhi tujhe badnaam kar jaayenge..
Koyi chikhe..koyi chillaye.. Koyi kare mukaddama
Magar ham sheroN mai hi yah kaam kar jaayenge..
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19th November 2004, 07:36 PM

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KunaaL Bhaaii…

Kaafi bhaari bhaari shbdoN ka istemaal kiya hai dost aap ne.. Par Nazam la-jawaab hai.. Bekaaraa dil ko karaar mile isi duaaoN ke saath…


[color=dark red]Jab chale gaye wo tanha chhor kar..
Hame sab tanhaa kahte haiN..
Tanha nahi ham ab bhi yaaroN ..
Apne ashqoN ki shaaye mai rahte haiN..

Ek Aur sher haiN janaab ham shayaroN ke liye…

Mat Soch ki tum bin ham mar jaayenge..
Jinda rah kar bhi tujhe badnaam kar jaayenge..
Koyi chikhe..koyi chillaye.. Koyi kare mukaddama
Magar ham sheroN mai hi yah kaam kar jaayenge..
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20th November 2004, 12:52 PM

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kunal bhai.....

kaise ho ab..... vakiye main umda kalam hai......

Andheron se hath mila.. ujale se door ja raha hun...
Honton se jam gira, ashko main milne ja raha hun...

Sehra-e-gham main angaron pe thande sukoon ki chah...
Bhagh-o-bahar* se ajnabi, haar tasweer pe jadne ja raha hun

wah -bhai-wah.....

kuch aage jo likha paya.....


*tawafat to rishton mein tere thi ae bewafa.....
phir apni hi kyun main *saakh bachata phir raha hoon.....

na sataoo ae *kaazib-e-dahar ke logon.....
chita ko apni main aag lagane jaa raha hoon.....

ae khuda tu bhi chood de ^AMAN^-e-daaman.....
*tiraagi ke *tawill-e-safar pe main jaa raha hoon....


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20th November 2004, 01:03 PM

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Mere Pyare Kunal,

Hmmmmm, bhai kalaam to bilkul hi lajawaab hai aapka is mein koi shak nahi, Lekin phir bhi kehna Chahunga KYA HUA TUMHE KUNAL. Mere bhai, kyu itne sad ho. Tum pe yeh bilkul hi nahi jajta. Hum to bas sadaa yehi chahenge ke tum humesha muskurate nazar aao. So cheer up my lil bro.

Bohot hi umda kalaam. Chalo tumhe ab seedha 50grams daad.

Khayal Rakhna.
bhai salim

shukriya kalam pasand karne ke liye ... aur isme lajawabi ye hai ki shayad dil ke kisi kone ne manjoori di is e post karne ke liye ... khair kabhi kabhi kabhi gam ke badal ghir hi aate hai ... to aise kalam bane chale jate hai ... well shukriya aapne itna pyar diya .. koshish karounga ki humesa khush rahun

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Re: bhai kaise ho - 20th November 2004, 01:10 PM

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kaise ho.Itna dard bhara likha hay.Phir kabhi aisa mat likhna ki aaj main marne ja raha huun.Tum to sabko khushian date ho.........aaj itne udas.Kush raho bhai..........tum to sabko hasate ho.

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kutch nahi hua mere bhai ko...... aise kaise jayega......hume.n chood ke.....

dard kayi baar poorane nikal jaate hai.N .....
aur aap sabse share kar lete hai.N.....

bus yahi haal hai mere bhai ka......

aur Kunal dekhooo kitna pareshaan karte ho tum logon ko......

khayal rakhna.....
aman bhai ...

bas kya kahun ... aapne to bade hone ka farz bakhobi nibhaya hai... kaise samjha mere bhai aur meri di ko ... sach aapka shukriya .. aur han main kahin nahi jane wala ... .. yahin sabka sir khaunga ...

aur bhai pareshan karne ka apna hi maja hai ...

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hi kunalji kitna dard bhra likha hai aapne lekin aapki ye marne wali baat hume bilkul achi nahi lagi plz aap aaindna kabi ase baate na kare aapki is shayri pariwar ko or aapke sab dosto ko aapki jarurt hai are life me to kushi or gum to chlte rhate hai bas hume to unse ladna hai hai na na ki ase baate sochni hai ok ab se aap kush rhege pllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Re: Re: aaj main MARNE ja raha hun.... - 20th November 2004, 03:55 PM

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marne ja raho ho.....bas yehi kahunga khana kha kar jana
kyun aapka restaurent hai ... arre kabhi to kamai ki choro


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20th November 2004, 04:01 PM

viase to Gabbar singh ne bhi sahi kaha....

aur mere bhai tumne jawab bhi aacha diya.....

darasal baat ye hai....
ki restaurant to hai.....
lekin tumhare liye free main khaana hai.....
ek yaad rahegi tumhare saath isliye bulaya hai....

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Re: aaj main MARNE ja raha hun.... - 20th November 2004, 04:18 PM

HI KUNAAL
BAHOOT BAHOOOT KHOOB...!!! KYA BAAT HAI...."DARD" PAR ":WAH"


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Re: aaj main MARNE ja raha hun.... - 20th November 2004, 04:22 PM

HI KUNAAL
BAHOOT BAHOOOT KHOOB...!!! KYA BAAT HAI...."DARD" PAR "WAH" KEHNE KA GUNAAH KARWA DIYA TUMNE....magar yeh MARNE KI BAAT KYUN KARTE HO??????? TUM JAISE NAUJAWAN KE LIYE NAAMUMKIN KYA HAI BHALA JO AISE NIRASHA KI BAATEIN KEHTE HO....ek gazal ke lihaaz se bahoot acha likha hai,,,khaas kar tumhari urdu dekh kar khushi hui,,,har kalaam ke saath tumhara hunar aur behtar hota ja raha hai.....likhte rahiye...aur khush rahiye...marne ki baatein buzdil karte hai,,aur mujhe yakeen hai aap aise nahin hai..jindadili se musibaton ka saamna karna hi jindagi hai.
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21st November 2004, 10:34 AM

kya expect karte ho reply main????tarif kare tumhari kya????beshaq shayri ke mizaz se dekhe to asardar lafz istemal kiya hain tumne ..par theme bilkul galat pasand ki hain tumne....kisi aur theme main use karte to shayad bahut khushi hoti..............kunal maut koi mazak nahin hoti.......bahut bhayanak haqeeqat hoti hain........kehne ko bahut asan hota hain yeh sab...[bahut dukhi hoon.main...mujhe marjaana hain aaaj...aur kabhi kabhi josh main karjaana bhi asaan hota hain]par uske baad ke consquences auro ke liye kya hote hain shayad marnewala nahin jaanta...dukh hote hain sabke liye par koi dukh itna bada bhi nahin hota ki uskeliye hamare bahut se apno ko takleef pohchaye....shayad aaj sanju ki khabar padhke bahut mayus ho gayi hoon ..yakeen nahin ho raha ki woh ab kabhi mujhse baat nahin karega aur us par se tumhari yeh post....na karo aise maut ke saaath khel........zindagi sirf ek hi baar milti hain...chahe kaisi bhi ho par zindagi to bitani hain........chahe acchi ho ya buri par hain bahut khubsurat sach...maut bhi haqeeqat hain par zindagi to pehle jeele....bhagwan ki di hui is cheez ko haske gale to laga le...aaaj tumse kuch jyada hi keh gayi par aaj man hi aisa hain..buri lagi ho koi baat to maaf kardena par ahinda se maut ko puri ghazal na banana..puri ghazal main ekad fakhra kabhi accha lagta hain par aise nahin...........

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21st November 2004, 10:58 AM

Mausam I agree isse jyada daant ise tab padhi thi jab isne yeh post kiya tha..aacha kiya jo tumne bhi aaj ise haqeqat se waaqif karvaa diya

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kya hai ye sab .... kuch aur nahi mila tha likhne ko ..... mujhe gusa aa rahi hai bohat ... aisa kyun likha ... aise hi chale jaoge aap ... na jane kya bat hai ... chal diye ... mera mood mat hilaya karo ... mujhe wakai rona aa raha hai bohat .... itna sad kyun likha ... bhai kya hua hai ho sake to batana mujhe... khair ispe wah to kar hi nahi sakta main ,... chah kar bhi ... kyunki kuch samajh nahi aa raha kya kahun bhai aisa mat likhna kabhi aage se...

umeed hai aap sabki baton pe gaur karoge ....

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aap bhi ... bhai mila to bohat kuchlikhne ko ... par ek sacchai bayan karna chahta tha bas .... bhai tum gussa mat ho .. main aap logon ko chor ke kahin nahi ja raha ... koi apni marji se nahi jata ... bhai aaj sajnu bhai ki death ke bad jo maijn feel kar raha hun wo yahi hai ... ki chahat se koi farq nahi padta .. bas bhagwaan ki marji sab maine rakhti hai ....ro mat bhai ... aur main sach main aapke sath hin hun itne pyare bhai ko chor ke koi kaise jaye ....

kosish rahegi ki aisa phir na likhun ...

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shukriya jo aapne yahan aake mujhe saraha ... aur ise ek kalam ki taah hi liya ... bhai jazbaton main doobte hai tabhi kalam bante hai ... shukriya ki aap aaye ... us par aapki ye line dil chu gayi ....

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aapke aashar wakai pasand aaye ... inme ek josh hai ... jo kunal bhai ko jaroor sochne pe majboor kar dega... aap bhi daad kabool kare...

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Re: Re: aaj main MARNE ja raha hun.... - 22nd November 2004, 09:05 AM

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BAHOOT BAHOOOT KHOOB...!!! KYA BAAT HAI...."DARD" PAR "WAH" KEHNE KA GUNAAH KARWA DIYA TUMNE....magar yeh MARNE KI BAAT KYUN KARTE HO??????? TUM JAISE NAUJAWAN KE LIYE NAAMUMKIN KYA HAI BHALA JO AISE NIRASHA KI BAATEIN KEHTE HO....ek gazal ke lihaaz se bahoot acha likha hai,,,khaas kar tumhari urdu dekh kar khushi hui,,,har kalaam ke saath tumhara hunar aur behtar hota ja raha hai.....likhte rahiye...aur khush rahiye...marne ki baatein buzdil karte hai,,aur mujhe yakeen hai aap aise nahin hai..jindadili se musibaton ka saamna karna hi jindagi hai.
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manoj bhai ...

to aap hi gaye ... bohat khushi hui aapko yahan dekh ke ... aapki wah hi to marham hai is aah pe meri .... bhai har cheez munkin hai .. par kuch bhai apne hath main nahi hota hai... jo hota hai usse kabhi rahat kisi ko nahi milti ... khair ... aapne ise gazal ke lihaz se bhi liya .. bohat accha laga ... aur aapko gar mujhme sudhar dikhai diya hai to jaroor main .... tarraki par hounga ... urdu main khasha izafa is liye hua kyunki ... wazan nahi aata bina urdu ke ghazal main ... bhai hum marne ki bat kabhi na karenge gar aapka sath bana raha to.... aur aapki baten jaror dhayan rakhenge .. apka shukriya bohat bohat ....

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kya expect karte ho reply main????tarif kare tumhari kya????beshaq shayri ke mizaz se dekhe to asardar lafz istemal kiya hain tumne ..par theme bilkul galat pasand ki hain tumne....kisi aur theme main use karte to shayad bahut khushi hoti..............kunal maut koi mazak nahin hoti.......bahut bhayanak haqeeqat hoti hain........kehne ko bahut asan hota hain yeh sab...[bahut dukhi hoon.main...mujhe marjaana hain aaaj...aur kabhi kabhi josh main karjaana bhi asaan hota hain]par uske baad ke consquences auro ke liye kya hote hain shayad marnewala nahin jaanta...dukh hote hain sabke liye par koi dukh itna bada bhi nahin hota ki uskeliye hamare bahut se apno ko takleef pohchaye....shayad aaj sanju ki khabar padhke bahut mayus ho gayi hoon ..yakeen nahin ho raha ki woh ab kabhi mujhse baat nahin karega aur us par se tumhari yeh post....na karo aise maut ke saaath khel........zindagi sirf ek hi baar milti hain...chahe kaisi bhi ho par zindagi to bitani hain........chahe acchi ho ya buri par hain bahut khubsurat sach...maut bhi haqeeqat hain par zindagi to pehle jeele....bhagwan ki di hui is cheez ko haske gale to laga le...aaaj tumse kuch jyada hi keh gayi par aaj man hi aisa hain..buri lagi ho koi baat to maaf kardena par ahinda se maut ko puri ghazal na banana..puri ghazal main ekad fakhra kabhi accha lagta hain par aise nahin...........

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kya chupau tumse ... tumhe to sab maloom hai .. shayri ke mizzaz se wakai ye acchi hai .. aur janta hun .. ki jin halaton main ise likha ... woh sach bade kkharab the ... theme maine koi choose nahi ki mausam .. ye hath na jane kyun nahi ruke ... tumhne wakai sahi kaha ... ki ye sab kehna karna aasan ho jata hai kabhi ... par dil pe shayad ki ka koi jor nahi ... phir wahi bat likhunga ,... ki kash main sochna chor pata ... na jane kyun dil main ek halchal si machi thi .. aur usi rat sanjoo bhai ka hadsa pesh aaya .. yun lagta hai ki jaise mujhse shayad unhi ne kaha ye sab ... aur unki baten main likh gaya ... kyun ... aisa laga ki unka mess ban gaya main .. kash sach main sanjoo ki taraf dhayan jata to shayad hum kuch karte ... shayad pata lagta ki sanjoo bhai aisa keh rahe hai ... sach kehta hun .. maut ka khel nahi banaya humne .. par logo ne humara khel jaroor banaya ... aur maut bhi peeche nahi rehti usme ... tabhi hadse pesh aate hai ... khair koshish rehegi ki meri dost ki aankhon main kabhi aansoo na aaye ... tum bohat acchi ho mausam .. aur mujhe to janti ho ... bas tumse yahi kehna tha ... accha laga ki meri dost ko meri chinta hai ... aur woh mere liye itna care karti hai ... tumhari baton ka bura main kabhi nahi manta samjhi .... tum meri sabse acchi dost ho ... aur doston ka koi bura nahi ... ok ...

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Mausam I agree isse jyada daant ise tab padhi thi jab isne yeh post kiya tha..aacha kiya jo tumne bhi aaj ise haqeqat se waaqif karvaa diya

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23rd November 2004, 01:14 PM

Kunal,

For the first time i am replying saying that I DIDN'T LIKE THIS SUBJECT AT ALL... aage tum behtar samajhte ho....

Write something soft yaar.... Shayri-E-Dard also needs a gasp of fresh air... and u used to do it.... but this kinda stuff is not acceptable at all....


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Kunal,

For the first time i am replying saying that I DIDN'T LIKE THIS SUBJECT AT ALL... aage tum behtar samajhte ho....

Write something soft yaar.... Shayri-E-Dard also needs a gasp of fresh air... and u used to do it.... but this kinda stuff is not acceptable at all....
pulkit bhai ...

bhai main sab samajh gaya hun ... sabne itna danta hai ki bas tauba... ab to maut aayegi bhi na to lat mar ke bhaga dounga use aur jis fiza ki ... jin rangeenio ki aap bat kar rahe hai ... woh yahan jaroor failengi ... aapki umeed pe khara utarne ki koshish karounga ...

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24th November 2004, 10:00 AM

Aap sabka tahe dil se shukriya jo itna daanta mere bhai ko.....

ab jaake aaya kunal line pe...... bahut tang rakha tha sabko.....

chalo mere bhai.... ab koi aachi si nazm likho zindgaki ki khushioon pe......

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Aap sabka tahe dil se shukriya jo itna daanta mere bhai ko.....

ab jaake aaya kunal line pe...... bahut tang rakha tha sabko.....

chalo mere bhai.... ab koi aachi si nazm likho zindgaki ki khushioon pe......

intezaar karoonga.....

tumhara bhai....
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jaldi hi hazir hounga mere bhai ...

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aap ki yeh khoobsurat alfaaz se saji ghazel parhi, mein behad muttassir hua ise parh ker.
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Re: aaj main MARNE ja raha hun.... - 27th November 2004, 03:32 PM

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Andheron se hath mila.. ujale se door ja raha hun...
Honton se jam gira, ashko main milne ja raha hun...

Safar-e-jindgi qaliil*sa, tanhai ki umra tawiil** mili...
Tufuuliyat-o-khurd** chor, kabra main sajne ja raha hun ...

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Bhagh-o-bahar* se ajnabi, haar tasweer pe jadne ja raha hun...

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Pyar-o-ranj-e-mehfil bhula, jhakmon ko silne ja raha hun...

Mehboob se umeeden rakh thi, yaagnaah* kab peeche rahe...
Dard-o-gham se karah*, rakh main khilne ja raha hun ..

* rishtedaar **cheekh,


Kaazib* aawazon se na roko mujhe ey kaazib duniya walon...
“saccha_pyar”-e-jahan dekh, aaj main marne ja raha hun...

*jhoote



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bhai aman ...

aapki bat se sehmat hun ... accha laga bhai kunal aap ne humari sabki bat mani bhi... aur waise hai kahan 4 -5 din se na koi post na kuch ... kahan chale gaye... kahin sahi main to nahi well bhai aman bhai ki request ka poore hone ka intzaar mujhe bhi hai ...


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bhai Schcha_pyar

aap ki yeh khoobsurat alfaaz se saji ghazel parhi, mein behad muttassir hua ise parh ker.
aap ne alfaaz ka niyayet achcha aur mauzoon intikhaab kerte huey ise nihayet qareene se bayaan kiyaa hai.
mein zindagi mein aap ki kaamiyaabi ke liye dua go hoon.
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mushi bhai ....

aaj mujhe wakai ye lag raha hai ki yekalam kuch nayab hai ... aapka is tarah se shirkat karna mere is nachhez alfaz pe sach faqra ho raha hai khud pe ... ki aap jaise azzeem shayar ne yahan aake housla afjayi ki ... aapki dua sir aankhon pe hai janab ... aur aapke aane se jo suroor mujh par ikhtiyar hua hai uska asar aapko jaroor dikhega ... aap sath dete rehna .. hum kalam ghiste rahenge ...

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Re: Re: aaj main MARNE ja raha hun.... - 2nd December 2004, 02:02 PM

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kunal aaj aapka likha pada dekha bahut nikhar gya hai yuhi nikhar late raho.apna khyaal rakhna sakhi
shukriya sakhi...

aapne mujhe saraha ... sach koshish kamyab hai ki aapne rukh kiya is aur .. aur sach doston ke aane se jo khushi milti hai ... uska suroor dekhne layak hota hai .. aap bhi si karvan se alag na hona .. ate rahiyega ...

aapka apna

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bhai aman ...

aapki bat se sehmat hun ... accha laga bhai kunal aap ne humari sabki bat mani bhi... aur waise hai kahan 4 -5 din se na koi post na kuch ... kahan chale gaye... kahin sahi main to nahi well bhai aman bhai ki request ka poore hone ka intzaar mujhe bhi hai ...
bhai ...

manta kaise nahi m... apno ki bat kaise talta ... aapka pyar hai hi itna pyara... well 4 5 dino se ahemdabad main tha waisi koi bat nahi


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shukriya aap sabhi ka ...
aap sabke pyar ke samne aaj sach .. khud ko chota mehsoos
karne laga hun ... aur kitna khushnaseeb samajh raha hun khud ko main bayan nhai kar sakta ....

yun hi sath dete rehna doston .... aap logon se hi kunal ka wazood hai ....

aap sabka

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Re: aaj main MARNE ja raha hun.... - 28th May 2005, 04:11 PM

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Andheron se hath mila.. ujale se door ja raha hun...
Honton se jam gira, ashko main milne ja raha hun...

Safar-e-jindgi qaliil*sa, tanhai ki umra tawiil** mili...
Tufuuliyat-o-khurd** chor, kabra main sajne ja raha hun ...

* chota, **lambi, *** bachpan aur jawani..


Sehra-e-gham main angaron pe thande sukoon ki chah...
Bhagh-o-bahar* se ajnabi, haar tasweer pe jadne ja raha hun...

*pholon se saja basant mausam


Mukkamal jahan ka khitiz, nazron ka dhoka tha bas...
Pyar-o-ranj-e-mehfil bhula, jhakmon ko silne ja raha hun...

Mehboob se umeeden rakh thi, yaagnaah* kab peeche rahe...
Dard-o-gham se karah*, rakh main khilne ja raha hun ..

* rishtedaar **cheekh,


Kaazib* aawazon se na roko mujhe ey kaazib duniya walon...
“saccha_pyar”-e-jahan dekh, aaj main marne ja raha hun...

*jhoote



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dearest kunal,
aaj tumhara yeh ehsaas ab samjh sakti hoon. shayad aaj se kuch waqt pehle tak itna gehrai se tumhein samjh nahi payi thi. aaj na jaane aapna gamn tumhare gamn ke aage pheeka sa lagta hai. u know wat we really fewll deep into our depth of sorrows bt once we come to know abt others it seems tht ours is nthing in frnt of tht person. dard hi dard har ek alfaas se beyaan hota hai aur cheeta hai dil har ek alfaaz.khush raho aur dua hai aainda aisa kuch padne ko na mile dost. itna gamn ki halaq se nahi utar raha. kya likhu, aah karu ki wah karu, kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha. dua hai us khuda se ki khushiyon se daman bhar de tumhari jholi mein. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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khuda ne banta sabko hi,jab khushiyan aur gamn
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chor rahe hai hum duniya,afsoos rahega itna magar
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iss gam_e_but ki laash ko,dafnata kaun hai khuda
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