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14th April 2005, 04:23 PM
Doston…..ye kalaam Karan ke kehne pe likha tha……us vakt ise competition se bahar rakha tha…kyunki vo contest naye shayron ke liye tha……
Kalaam ne ishq se gujarte hue dard ki aur rukh kar liya hai.... Jo bhi likha aapni pesh-e-nazar kar raha hoon…..umeed hai aapko pasand aayega…… ishq mein na hue fanaah, to kya jiye hum ….. tujhpe ae yaar na mare, to kya jiye hum….. nasha paimanon mein sharab ka hota hai…… teri aankhon se jo na piye, to kya piye hum….. *resham-e-aftaab pe bikhre *katraa-e-aab….. tere husn pe jo na lute, to kya diye hum….. har zulm-o-sitam hai halaak hone jaisa…… ye sitam dil pe jo na liye, to kya liye hum…. Bade naazon se kharochta hai zakmon ko….. tere haathon se jo na siye , to kya siye hum….. Lutf-e-judaai ka bhi alag mazaa hai ^AMAN^…. ta-umr jo saath rahe, to kya jiye hum…. * resham-e-aftaab= resam sa chehra * katraa-e-aab= paani ki boondein **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Jiiye Tou Jiiye Keise_Biin Aapke~Lagta Nahin Dil Kahin_Biin Aapke~*~Keise Kahoun_Biina Tere Zindegi Ye Keya Hogi_Jeise Koii Saza Koii Badduwa Hogi~Maine Kiya Hain_Ye Faisla_Jiina Nahin Hain_Tere Biina~Pankaj Udhas Jee
 **Ab main keya karoun mujhe tou yahin gana achchha laga aur aise hi mehsous houa Parhte Houe**Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Shukriya **Likhte Rahiyega**Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care*...**God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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14th April 2005, 05:17 PM
ishq mein na hue fanaah, to kya jiye hum …..
tujhpe ae yaar na mare, to kya jiye hum….. nasha paimanon mein sharab ka hota hai…… teri aankhon se jo na piye, to kya piye hum….. WaaH Waahh aur Waahh... bhaii yeh kamaal kaa likha hai!! *resham-e-aftaab pe bikhre *katraa-e-aab….. tere husn pe jo na lute, to kya diye hum….. har zulm-o-sitam hai halaak hone jaisa…… ye sitam dil pe jo na liye, to kya liye hum…. Aaaaahh.... Zabardast!! Bade naazon se kharochta hai zakmon ko….. tere haathon se jo na siye , to kya siye hum….. Lutf-e-judaai ka bhi alag mazaa hai ^AMAN^…. ta-umr jo saath rahe, to kya jiye hum…. Aaaaahhh... Dard hai par itna paina ke seedha dil me utar jaaye!! Aman Bhai! Jaisa ke maine pehle bhi kaha thha... ke maine sab ke ppost padhe thhe.. but i Liked this one the most...Bahut hi khoobsurati se istemaal kiya hai appne us line ko... aur aage ka har sher behad khoobsurat hai!! Agar yeh competition ka part hoti to 100% yeh hi jeet jaati!! Bass yun hi zabardast likhte raho bhai... Aur apana khayal rakho Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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14th April 2005, 05:50 PM
Fabulous!!!
teri aankon se jo naa piye to kya piye hum......Bade naazon se kharochta hai zakmon ko….. tere haathon se jo na siye , to kya siye hum….. har lafzz mein shaadgi hai.....emotions r flowing.....really....ye dard -e- bayaan mujhe pasand aaya.....a diff style...with simple words!!...keep writing!!haan humari daad bhi kabul kariyega!! Take care shalini Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye, Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon, Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color] |
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14th April 2005, 07:56 PM
Mere Bhaiya,
bahoot hi khoosurat kalam pesh kiya hai.. Karan ke contest me bhale hi koi vijeta ho lekin mere najar me to vijeta aap hi ho... Ur's sweet pagal sister Garima |
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ab mein kya kahun aap ki is anmol kalam ke liye. jo bhi bolunghi,shayad woh nahi beyaan kar payega jo meine mehsoos kiya aapki is nazam ke zariye. well buddy awesome flow n no doubt there can be nthing better than this. meri teh dil se daad kabool kijiye. sach mein dil ko chu gayi aapki yeh anmol paktiyaan. har alfaaz motiyoon mein piroya hua beyaan hua hai. hats to u n ur thoughts. its wonderful n for me its the best. i have read few of others too but this one is superb. karan ji ki post pe aapne mere aur kunal ke baare mein kahan. sach mein aacha laga ye jaan ke ki bina pade aap ko lagta tha ki meine kuch acha likha hoga. well aisa kuch nahi tha meri kalm mein dost. u know tht this line was too hard for me to handle the whole post. phir bhi pulkit, kunal aur rohin ke dabaav mein aake meine kosish ki. khusi is baat ki hai ki mein unka dil rakh paayi. its gud to know tht u love reading my thoughts too. thx so much buddy. aman ji once again hats to u n ur post. THIS ONE WAS THE BEST OF ALL. gr8 as usual.loved reading it. thx for sharing it with us. take care n may god bless u with his fine glitters.  mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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14th April 2005, 08:41 PM
Dil ko chou gaye har ek sher...Aman ji!
Daad kaboul kijiye... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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14th April 2005, 09:28 PM
are wah aman..........
tum bhi...good good sab sudhar gaye hain...romantic ghazal ki hawa chal rahi hain..bhai wah sach main bahut acchi ghazal pesh ki hain....abhi jaldi main hoon...warna kuch aur kehti... bbbye.. mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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14th April 2005, 11:40 PM
Hi Aman bhai,
Aap ko pehle bhi kaha tha.. aaj phir keh raha hoon... Aapne bahut acha likha hai aman bhai... Sach kaha woh competition hum jaise nausikhyon ke liye thi... Aap jaise digaz logon ke liye nahi...lol.. Aapko padha seekha aur samjha bhi... Thanks a lot for sharing your composition with us thanks Rohin |
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15th April 2005, 12:34 PM
Bahut khoob mere dost...tumhaara ye kalaam bhi khoob pasand aaya....
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aapka jawab ek alag he andaaz mein hota hai...... ek pyara sa geet ya nazm.... tah-e-dil se shukriya aapka.... aur aapki tabiyet kaisi hai ab... aapka dost..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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20th April 2005, 10:33 AM
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Mere bhai Pull...... tumhara jawab to pulkit - pulkit kar deta hai...... bhai jaan boojh ke apni post bahar rakhi thi maine...... mujhe to kutch bhi nahi aata tha.....isi parivaar ke kaaran kutch seekh paaya hoon..... saath dete rehna bhai.... tumhara..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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20th April 2005, 12:53 PM
aman
bahut accha ur gehra ehsas,,, tumhare ye sher bahut pasand aye. ... har zulm-o-sitam hai halaak hone jaisa…… ye sitam dil pe jo na liye, to kya liye hum…. Bade naazon se kharochta hai zakmon ko….. tere haathon se jo na siye , to kya siye hum….. Lutf-e-judaai ka bhi alag mazaa hai ^AMAN^…. ta-umr jo saath rahe, to kya jiye hum…. |
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21st April 2005, 10:20 AM
lagta hai kuch din ho gaye is ghazal ko yahaan par sajte hue, par khair koi baat nahin = x
shaanti bhai, shaanti.. jo guzar chukaa hai us atiit ke liye ashq kyoon bahaane? merii salaa ko chhoR kar, aapkii ghazal bahot achii hai.. khaas-taur pe pehle do sher dil ko ajeeb hii tareeqe mein chuu gaye! haste raho bhai "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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sahi pehchaana......saadgi se dard ko bayan kiya hai...... tumhari daad sar aankhon par......aur tumhara jawab dene ka andaaz bhi alag hi hai..... khush rahiye..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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21st April 2005, 11:56 AM
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Shukriya meri behna......lekin zindagi mein itni haar ke baad, sab kutch lut chuka hai.....ab to na haarne ka gum hai na jeet ki khushi...... khush rahoo...... tumhara bhai..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Jas..... aaj pehli vaar thuvad jawab meri post te aaya hai..... jadon padya si....ek ajeeb jehi khushi mehsoos hoyi..... jidaan kehya si....ki thuvada kalaam vi vadiya si....ehsaas change....te khayal vi umda...... shukriya thuvada..... thuvada dost...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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ye khaak alfaaz aur mere gum ka haal......aapke dil mein utra..... likhna jaise mukaamal hua..... aapki daad sar aankhon par...... khush rahiye..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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sudharna to tha hi.....varna tum phir se daant deti.....  shukriya....lekin itminaan se aa ke jawab de dena..... bbbye.... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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shayad ye kalaam kutch jayada hi keh gaya..... aur yahan to sabhi seekha rahein hain....koi bada aur koi choota nahi.....sab ek parivaar ka hissa hain...... agar mujhse kutch diya jaa sake to apne parivaar ko usse mehroom nahi rakh sakta..... khush rahoo..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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21st April 2005, 03:46 PM
nahin datungi main kisisko ab...your sis.. mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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phir vohi baat.....tumhari daant mein bhi to pyar hota hai..... kya apne bhai ko daanta chood dogi.... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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21st April 2005, 05:56 PM
aman bhai
bohat sahi likha hai aapne... koi shaq nahi ... bohat accha laga aapka kalaam padh ke ... sach aap ki kalam bhi dhar dhar hai .... meri daad kabool karen apna khayal rakhiyega raj bas raj hi raj |
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bus yunhi saath dete rehna..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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aaj aapko apni post pe dekh kar khushi hui...... kutch mere dil ka ehsaas aapko pasand aaya......aacha laga..... aapki hausla afzai ka shukriya..... ye saath yunhi bana rahe....dua karoonga..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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sahi farmaya......jo gujar chuka hai uske diya aanson kyun bahaye jaayein....... shurkirya mere bhai.....aur aapne is mehfil mein aana kum kar diya hai...... apne doston ko yun mehroom rakhna aachi baat nahi..... khush rahiye..... jaande jaane ek geet da sher yaad aaya.... muddat baad zamane ne samjhya ae..... phul nu sungida ye, phul nu khaayeda nahi..... pyar bakshda ae zindagi nu zindagi..... pyar pujida ae, pyar thukraida nahi..... aapka apna...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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25th April 2005, 10:19 PM
ishq mein na hue fanaah, to kya jiye hum …..
tujhpe ae yaar na mare, to kya jiye hum….. nasha paimanon mein sharab ka hota hai…… teri aankhon se jo na piye, to kya piye hum….. *resham-e-aftaab pe bikhre *katraa-e-aab….. tere husn pe jo na lute, to kya diye hum….. har zulm-o-sitam hai halaak hone jaisa…… ye sitam dil pe jo na liye, to kya liye hum…. Bade naazon se kharochta hai zakmon ko….. tere haathon se jo na siye , to kya siye hum….. Lutf-e-judaai ka bhi alag mazaa hai ^AMAN^…. ta-umr jo saath rahe, to kya jiye hum…. * resham-e-aftaab= resam sa chehra * katraa-e-aab= paani ki boondein Jigar ke kiss kone se ye jazbaat oubhar aate hein...kiss ko pata?Bahout hi soundar kavita hai aapki...Aman ji! Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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27th April 2005, 09:11 AM
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bus dil mein ek aah uthti hai aur kalam chalne lagti hai......dard mein doobne lagta hoon aur ek ke baad ek misra banta jaata hai..... sochta hoon ki dard pe na likhoon magar....kya karen...... shukriya mere bhai...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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16th May 2005, 05:00 PM
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behad khoob likha hai daad kubul kijiye sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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17th May 2005, 10:17 AM
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khush rahiye.... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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17th May 2005, 10:19 AM
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shukriya......ki aapko ye kalaam pasand aaya...... khush rahiye..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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7th September 2009, 06:55 AM
Soni Sonal ji...
Shukriya... aaj naa jaane apne hi threads ko dekh ...sharm aa rahi hai..kayi baras guzar gaye jawab diye.... Maufi ka talabgaar... Rabb Raakha..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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aapne bahut hi khoobsurati ke saath rachna ko shabdo me anjaam diya hai daad kabul kijiyega ajay nidaan http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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16th September 2009, 10:44 PM
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acha lika hai apne muze acha laga ek line bi kharab nai lagi.. Abed Farooqui Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun |
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22nd September 2009, 05:43 PM
Aman ji.....bahut khub likha hai aapne......sabhi sher ache lage.....aur gehraai fikr se labrez....aise hi likhte rahiye......khush rahiye......  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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12th October 2009, 12:22 AM
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Wah!!..kya khoob likha hai aapne Aman jii......behad khoobsurat ghazal hai, her sher qabil-e tareef hai.... dil se daad qubool kijiye... yuhi mehfil sajaate rahiye.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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20th October 2009, 07:48 PM
Sat Siri Akaal jii
Aman jii, Kaise hain aap? Aapki ghazal ab nazar mein aayii ... behaat pasnad aayii .. har sher dil ko chu gaya ...likhtey rahe .. Take care Mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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