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Door jab tumse ChaLa jaauNga…! -
17th February 2007, 12:38 AM
Din main bhi raat sa safar hoga… akeli raah mai kya rehguzar hoga.. bikhar jayenge to poochoge koun si mitti hai ye … beh gaye jo aankh se rukh pe basar hoga… katla karke mera roOge tum bhi… na uthunga mai par soOge tum bhi … khyaal mai bhi na koi be-fikar hoga… jaaoge jahaN jahaN,… tamaasha bas udhar hoga… cheekh uthoge meri yaadoN maiN bilakh kar … banda na jane phir kidhar hoga .. sach din main bhi raat ka safar hoga.. haan din mai bhi raat ka safar hoga….!
=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-= Tum bulaogi maiN naa aauNga.. Door jab tumse chala jaauNga… Reh jayeNge kaaNpte surkh lab… Laali gaaloN ki jo mita jauNga… Ehsaan the jo pal, mohabbat ke… Bewafa, kya unhe bhula pauNga… MaiN mujrim huN, ishq ka yaar.. Maut se badtar, koi saza pauNga… Honge paimane alag mehfiloN ke…. Gham jaamoN mai, duba jauNga…. Dil door kahiN chain-o-sukoon se.. Phir kahaN gul koi khila pauNga… Tha ristha kal, aaj dhool kismet.. Maut sa mohbbat ka, sila paunga.. Meri kismet kahaN ‘saccha_pyar’.. Keh ke daastaN tumhe rula jaunga,,, Jidher dekhoge saaya mera hoga… Raakh aisi hawa mai, mila jaunga… sach…! Aansu ban ankhoN mai aaunga.. Door jab tumse chala jaauNga… =-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-= Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th February 2007, 04:15 AM
aapne bahut hi accha likha hai, the way the thoughts flowed into words is marvelous,....lekin is kavita ko padh kar kuch kehne ki himat nahin...kaanp si gayi mai to isse padh kar.....
Regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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17th February 2007, 01:25 PM
hi kunal ji
kya baat kahi hai aapne aapne sahi mein bahut hi khub likha hai aapki ye rachna dil ko is kadar chhu gai hai ki mein kuch bata nah sakta aapki is rachna ke liye mere pas shabd hi nahi rahe, aapki si rachna ne mujhe wo agle sal ki wo yaaadein taza kar di jise mein zindagi bhar bhula nahi sakta, aapne aapki is rachna mein ek bewafa ko paigam diya wo itni khubsurati se diya hai use padh ke kisi ko bhi rona aa sakta hai aapka mein fir se sukhriya ada karna chahta hu aapke liye mein bas yehi kehna chahta hu kunaal ji Peekar raat ko hum usko bhulane lage, Sarab mein gum ko milane lage, Ye sarab bhi bewafa nikli yaaro, Nashe mein to wo aur bhi yaad aane lage. ese hi likhte rahna aapka dost Merul Quote:
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17th February 2007, 03:05 PM
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Shukriya is zarra nawajish ke liye .. khaaksaar aapka ... par mujhe nahi pata tha ki maiN itna darawna likhta huN .. ki log kaanp jate hai ... Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th February 2007, 04:47 PM
Tum bulaogi maiN naa aauNga..
Door jab tumse chala jaauNga… Reh jayeNge kaaNpte surkh lab… Laali gaaloN ki jo mita jauNga… Waaah... bahut khoob aashaar hai... Ehsaan the jo pal, mohabbat ke… Bewafa, kya unhe bhula pauNga… MaiN mujrim huN, ishq ka yaar.. Maut se badtar, koi saza pauNga… Well said... Honge paimane alag mehfiloN ke…. Gham jaamoN mai, duba jauNga…. Dil door kahiN chain-o-sukoon se.. Phir kahaN gul koi khila pauNga… hmmmmmmmm.... Tha ristha kal, aaj dhool kismet.. Maut sa mohbbat ka, sila paunga.. Meri kismet kahaN ‘saccha_pyar’.. Keh ke daastaN tumhe rula jaunga,,, Jidher dekhoge saaya mera hoga… Raakh aisi hawa mai, mila jaunga… waaaaaaaaaah... aakhiri sher ghazab laga yahaan... Aansu ban ankhoN mai aaunga.. Door jab tumse chala jaauNga… kyaa baat hai... Dear Kunal, Bahut time ke baad tumhe padha... aur as usual bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai tumne.... khoobsurat khayaal aur khoobsurat aashaar... dil se daad kubool karna... apna khayal rakhna... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th February 2007, 05:19 PM
hello kunal...woww...reading ur shayri after such a long time...and this is mind blowing...fantastic words and lovely creativity... and especially these lines were amazing...
Tha ristha kal, aaj dhool kismet.. Maut sa mohbbat ka, sila paunga.. Meri kismet kahaN ‘saccha_pyar’.. Keh ke daastaN tumhe rula jaunga,,, Aansu ban ankhoN mai aaunga.. Door jab tumse chala jaauNga… this is one of ur best shayris that i read...thanks so much for sharing...take care... Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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17th February 2007, 05:24 PM
Beautiful,
Aapne bahut hi khub likha hai aap mazak mein likh rahe the aisa lag raha hai lekin aap ke alfazo mein kuch dard jhalak rahahai. aap isse umda she likh sakte hai agar aap sanjigi se likhe toh. meri taraf se dad kabul kijiye. aapki dost,  Zindagi ek phool hai aur mohabbat us ka shehed,Pyar Ek Dariya Hai, Aur mehmoob uski sarhad...
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18th February 2007, 12:12 AM
"saccha_pyar" jee,
aapki poem ki sad side padh kar.... "MaiN mujrim huN, ishq ka yaar.. Maut se badtar, koi saza pauNga…" sad laga tha..... Regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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18th February 2007, 02:16 PM
bahut achha .. per wish karenge god aapse iski feeling wapas lele aur iske oppst thinking karne ki feeling de .. . aur jise likhte waqt aur use padhte waqt na aapke na aapke dosto ke kisi ke aakho me aashu na ho aur sab ke face pe khusi ho ..
hamesha khus rahiyega .. suraj ke bina roshani kaisi chand ke bina chandi kaisi dard ke bina "sacccha_pyar" kaisa saccche_pyar ke beena jindgi kaisii .. aapki ajnabi dost .. |
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19th February 2007, 01:00 AM
oye fitte munah kaha door jayega haan???
yahi rahna kahin mat jana warna wohi se pakdke lana padega tumko.......samjh gaye na hey kunal just joking dear par realy bahut khub ehsaasoin se bhara likhahai hamesha ki tarah. bas kuch raho gamoin se door jao. sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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19th February 2007, 01:31 PM
Kunal bhaaii,
achchhe khayaal ko aap ne lafzoN ki shakl dee hai.. daad haazir hai.. do- ek baateN arz karta huuN, agar Ghalat lage to fauran dar-guzar kar deejiyega.. Quote:
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19th February 2007, 03:36 PM
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merul Bhai ... Bohat accha laga tumhe yahaN paakar .. maiN jaanta huN ki kaisa lagta hai jab yaadeN dil cheerti hai .. aise maiN koi jab humeN humare jaisa dikhta hai .. to humari tadap laazmi hai .. aapne itne dil maiN utari meri baat .. mujhe behad khushi hai ... zinda rahe to milte rahenge .. apna khyaal rakhiyega aapka apna kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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19th February 2007, 03:40 PM
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Ye aapki haunshla afzai mujhe bohat pyari hai .. isi liye humesha chahta huN aap aao .. aap aaye mujhe behad khushi hai ... aapka bhai Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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19th February 2007, 03:44 PM
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tumne to khaak bande ki beinthaN tareef kar dee ... aba aur kya kahun .. tum aaye mujhe bohat khushi hai .. aur mere jazbaat yahaN bikhra ke maine apne pe ehsaan kiya hai ,.. kyunki ye meri fav jagah hai .. to thanx ki gunzaish hi nahi bachti... tum yuN hi sath dete rehna mere bhai tumhara apna Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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19th February 2007, 03:52 PM
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HumeN nahi pata tha .. huM mazaak mai bhi itna accha likh sakte hai .. ki humsukhaan humeN Daad se nawaaz jayeN .. ho sakta hai humne yahi aazmaya ho .. aur agar is par aapki daad humeN mili hai to hume kabool hai .. aur hum kaamyaab hue .... is baat ki khushi hai .. aage se hum koshish karenge ki mazaak na kareN shayri ke sath .. aap aayiN apna keemti waqt diya .. humeN khushi hai ... Apna khyaal rakhiyega aapka apna Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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19th February 2007, 03:53 PM
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19th February 2007, 11:35 PM
bade ko chote ka aadaab,
is kadar khud ko tadpaaoge tum, main bhi ashq na chupaa pauNga. kyuN jaa raha ho us raashte tu, jahaaN tujhe saamne khada paauNga. ye dard ye hansi,be ashq ye khushi, kab ghayal ko saccha pyar sikhaa pauNga. mere bhai, kaafi kuch keh gaya, shayad kuch bera v lagega par samajhna mere bhai, yahi sach hai, kuch is kadar waqt ne mod le liya hai aaj amooman, ki haalaat v khud bikhar gaye haiN...! bas sab kuch badla sa nazar aane laga hai, pata nahi ab nazareN dhokha khaa rahi haiN ya samaa hi kuch aur hai....! aapka CHOTA...! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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21st February 2007, 08:50 AM
MaiN mujrim huN, ishq ka yaar..
Maut se badtar, koi saza pauNga…I see... Lekin Kunnu ishq tau khud hee sazaa hai...nahin? Tumne apne dard ko khuub sanwaara hai in ashaaron mein...wo geet suna hai...? hai ishq khataa hai sabko pataa hai ishq sazaa hai sabko pataa hai ishq bala hai sabko pataa hai ishq dagaa hai sabko pataa is ishq se phir bhii kaun bachaa lekin phir ishq yeh bhi tau hai... ishq ibaadat ishq hai puuja ishq khuda ka naam hai duuja ... love, guddo di gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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Sabse pehle to yahan deri se aane ke maafi chaahti hun... umeed hai aap apni gudiya ko maaf bhi kar doge  Aapne itne dino baad yahan kuch likha yeh jaante hi mann khush ho gaya... jaldi se thread open kiya aur padha.. lekin yeh kya paaya maine....  Agar sirf Shayri samjh ke padun to, iska jawab nahi... behad khoobsoorti se dard ko lafzon ki laathi pakdaayi hai aapne.. Lekin main jaanti hun kahin na kahin.... khair! Aapse humesha kehti aayi hun.. aur ek baar phir kahungi... ki please khush raha keejiye!!!! Aap muskuraate hue hi ache lagte hain Hm... aur agar kabhi muskaan laane ka koi kaaran na nazar aaye.. to woh apni us rachna ko yaad karna.. jo aapne aur mast bhai ne mil ke mere liye likhi thi!!! aur haan woh gaana bhi... paabo ni paabo merea vyah karaade.. jispe aapne, maine aur mausam di ne mil ke dhoom machaai thi... Khushi ke palon ko yaad karoge to khushi hi chalkegi chehre se bhi!!! Aapki agli post khushi bhari aur pyar bhari ho... dua karungi.. aur intzaar bhi... Apna khayal rakhiye!!! ~aapki Gudiya!!! "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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23rd February 2007, 06:00 PM
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aap aayi bohat accha laga .. aapko dekh ke .. aur bhagwaan kya deta hai .. isse mujhe sarokaar nahi ,, jab jab jo aayega dil maiN maiN sunata rahunga .... aapke sath kii kaamna hi kar sakta huN aap apna khyaal rakhiye aapka apna kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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23rd February 2007, 06:01 PM
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oos dada ji aa gaye je je kahin nahi jaa rahe hum humaari kya mazaal aapke samne se guzre .. wo to bas khyaal aaya likh diya ... aise hi sath raho tum ye dua hai kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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23rd February 2007, 09:50 PM
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Aapki post pari bahut achaa laga par ker is liye ise humne baar baar para thanx. Tujhse dori ka ashaas satane laga hai bicha hua fir koi yaad aane laga hai Tujhe bhulne ki koshish ki jab bhi ai dost, to mere or bhi kareeb aane laga hain. Aap isee tarah likhete rahe mujhe aapki nai post ka intezaar rahega. Aapka dost SHAAN |
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24th February 2007, 01:47 PM
Dil door kahiN chain-o-sukoon se..
Phir kahaN gul koi khila pauNga… Aansu ban ankhoN mai aaunga.. Door jab tumse chala jaauNga… Hello Kunal Ek arse baad tumhara likha parha....bahut khoobsurati se tumney yeh qalam likha hay...di ki daad kabul karna......Aansu ban ankhon main aaunga...kitni gehri baat kehta hay yeh sher....yuun hi likhtey raho Apna khyal rakhna Di |
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7th March 2007, 01:48 PM
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Kuch bhi jyada nahi kaha .. kyuNki tum jaante ho mera jyada kahin hai hi nahi .. ab tumneto mere dil ko samajh ke kaha hai sab.. aur tum ho sath to koi gham hi nahi .. ab ye thoda sa lagta hai dil main .. ki ab sath door se nibhaoge tum ...  apna khyal rakho aapka apna Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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7th March 2007, 01:51 PM
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Ishq saja nahi .. jurm hai ek .. aisa jurm kar ke bhi saza milti hai .. nahi karo to bhi .. khair aapne khaak alfazoN ko apna waqt diya .. behad khush huN maiN ... aur haan gaana accha hai apna khyal rakh kar aate rahiye aapka apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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7th March 2007, 02:52 PM
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7th March 2007, 02:55 PM
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aapki umra maiN izaafa ho .. log aapko duayeN deN .. ki aapne mujh khaaksaar ko baar baar padha ... par haaN ek baat aapse zaroor karunga .. intzaar kisi ka na karna .. mil jaye to theek ,.. warna khuda ki marji ... kyunki ye intzaar zindgi ke maiyne badal deta hai aap apna khyaal rakhiye aur aate rahiye Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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7th March 2007, 02:56 PM
Real Beauty!
Outstanding expressions! Brought back my nostalgia! MaiN mujrim huN, ishq ka yaar.. Maut se badtar, koi saza pauNga Warm Regards इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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7th March 2007, 03:00 PM
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Shukriya aapke aane kaa .. aur aapne meri pasandeeda line ko utha liya hai .. bas aap aayi aur kya chaiye aapka apna Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th March 2007, 04:44 PM
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Aashiyana hi nahi deedeN bhi ... Aaapke aane se roshan ho gayi hai ... bas aap aaye shukra guzaar huN aapka apna Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th March 2007, 06:35 PM
well said kunaal ji,bahut acha laga aapka kalaam padhkar.sabhi ashaar zabardast hai.yunhin likhte rahen.
khush rahen,tc,bye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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20th March 2007, 12:56 PM
Akeli jee....
bohat accha laga aapko yahan dekh kar ,.. purane sathiyoN ko paake humesha khushi hi milti hai .. aur aapki tareef ne to mujhe fula diya hai ... aise hi sath dete rahiyega ... aapka apna Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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20th March 2007, 03:32 PM
kya likha he kunal .. aakho me such me aashu hi aa gye .. itni tarife mili he aapko ab kuch bacha hi nahi kahne ko .. fir b kahna chahta hu ki bahut achha likha he .. esa jo dil ko chu gaya aur aakho tak pahuch gaya .. meri dad kubul karna ..
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21st March 2007, 12:40 PM
aapki ye rachna dil ko chuu gayi hai har pankti jaise jeevan ke kiten palon ko saamne laa rahi hai. lajqwaab behad kya kahoo shavd nahi mil rahen. aankho ko dekhoge meri tau samajh jaaoge kis kadar asar kiya hia is rachna.
keep writing aapka hamesh intzaar rahega aksar yaad karte hain un tere diye zakmhon ko kuch na baaki bacha hai jeevan mein hamaare jo jeene ko saathi tu na raha |
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22nd March 2007, 12:46 PM
itni sachhayi mat likha karo---taqleef hoti hai...
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24th March 2007, 04:42 PM
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AansuoN ka kya hai khushi maiN bhi aa jate hai ... badi baat ye hai ki aapne mere jazbaatoN ko samjha ,... aur kisne kaha kuch nahi bacha .. aapki tareef bhi utni hi zaroori hai mere liye jitni sabki ... aapki daad sir aaknkhoN pe sir jee apna khyaal rakho aapka apna Kunaal; Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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24th March 2007, 04:48 PM
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ReeNa jee aaj aap sabko ek bat batauN .. jab maiN likhne baith-ta huN ek junoon liye hota huN... hont khamosh aur aankhen surkh ... aansuoN ko nahi aane deta .. par aap sabka pyaar dekh kar zaroor meri aankhon main sailaab aa jaye ... itna pyaar diya aap sabne .. khuda aap sabko dili sukoon de ... aur isi kadam ko aapne jis garmjoshi aur jazbaati taur se mujhe diya hai na reena jee ... meri aankhe wakai bheeg gayi hai aapko accha laga mera likhna kaamyaab raha .. bas haan aapse ek baat kahuNga .. intzaar ko apni raftaar ka hissa banana .... raftaar ko intzaar ka nahi .. aur badhte rehna humesha .. mere jaise hazaaron aaynge ..par mai bhi koshish karunga aapki ummedoN pe khara utroo aur aata rahuNga ... aap apna khyaal bohat acche se rakhiyega aapka apna Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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24th March 2007, 04:50 PM
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Takleef .. huh tumhe pata bhi hai wo kya hoti hai ... shukriya pasand karne ke liye Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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11th December 2008, 05:50 AM
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Kunal ji aapko padhne ka mouka kabhi naseeb nahin hui thi ....aaj younhi dard bhare ghazal dekhte dekhte is thread pe nazar padi.........aapne har sher main sach ko ek alag andaaz se bayaaN kiye haiN........ Aansu ban ankhoN mai aaunga.. Door jab tumse chala jaauNga… kitni dard hai ismain..... Dua ehi hai , aap ko zindegi main woh har khusi mile jiske aap haqdar ho daad dilse Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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