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Post Ek talaash - 1st August 2013, 06:05 PM
Aadab doston,

Ek choti so koshish aapke saamne . . .

Meri bhatakti qwaabon ko apni yadoon ka sahara dedo
meri doobti kashti ko apni wafa ka kinaara dedo

Dhoond raha hu mai tumhe har pal har jagah
apni ghar ka halka sa koi ishaara dedo

Bas ek jhalak dikhaado apne haseen chehre ki
hamne kab poocha hame maahpara dedo

Has lo jee bhar ke tum hamaare badle me, bas
rone ke liye hame gam apna saara dedo

Mar raha hu mai tumhaari bewafaai ki sach se
jeene ke liye tumhaari jhoota wafa ka sahaara dedo

Nahee raas aati hame ab yeh kambakth zindagi,
apni haathon se pyaala zeher se bhara dedo

Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
jhaak ke dekhe toh toh har rishta hai ik Sapna . . .
   
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1st August 2013, 10:02 PM
waah ji ...bahot hi achha likha hai aapne.. padh kar achha laga... humari taraf se daad qubul farmayein...
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2nd August 2013, 03:20 PM
Shukriya Deep ji. Aap ne apne daad di hame , bahut khushi huyi. Aate rahiyega. . .

Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
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sharma ji, kaafi ahchi kosish rahi hai... padh kar ahcha laga, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi kalam se mehfil sajaate rahiye....


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5th August 2013, 12:45 PM
behad hi naazuq ehsaas hai Krishna ji........ kuch sher khaase pasand aaye....

jinme se ek ye sher bhi hamaari pasand me saamil hai.......

Has lo jee bhar ke tum hamaare badle me, bas
rone ke liye hame gam apna saara dedo

likhte raheiye......

Shaad................

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5th August 2013, 02:20 PM
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sharma ji, kaafi ahchi kosish rahi hai... padh kar ahcha laga, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi kalam se mehfil sajaate rahiye....

Shukriya Taish ji, aap ko hamari kalam pasand aayi isse badi baat nahi hai hamare liye. aate rahiyega .

Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
jhaak ke dekhe toh toh har rishta hai ik Sapna . . .
   
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5th August 2013, 02:22 PM
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behad hi naazuq ehsaas hai Krishna ji........ kuch sher khaase pasand aaye....

jinme se ek ye sher bhi hamaari pasand me saamil hai.......

Has lo jee bhar ke tum hamaare badle me, bas
rone ke liye hame gam apna saara dedo

likhte raheiye......

Shaad................

Sameer ji , bahut khushi huyi yeh jaanke ki aap jaise mahan shayar ko meri koshish pasand aa gayi . . . Bahut shukriya sameer ji.

Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
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13th August 2013, 04:44 AM
Mar raha hu mai tumhaari bewafaai ki sach se
jeene ke liye tumhaari jhoota wafa ka sahaara dedo

umdaah ehsaas
dhero daad kabool farmaye saheb

Zid uski mera wazood hi mita dene ki,
aur aarzoo meri sirf usko paa lene ki.
   
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13th August 2013, 04:42 PM
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Mar raha hu mai tumhaari bewafaai ki sach se
jeene ke liye tumhaari jhoota wafa ka sahaara dedo

umdaah ehsaas
dhero daad kabool farmaye saheb

Bahut shukriya . Bahut khushi huyi ki aapko is naacheez ka koshish pasand aaya. aate rahiye . . .

Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
jhaak ke dekhe toh toh har rishta hai ik Sapna . . .
   
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