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Where to write ur name? - 29th October 2005, 09:25 AM


Where to write ur name?

I thought of first writing ur name on the sea shore
But then I realised it will be wiped away

Then I thought of writing ur name on paper
But then I realised it will be washed away

Then i thought of forming ur name with the clouds
But then I realised it will all be blown away

Then i thought of etching ur name on the tree trunk
But then I realised it will one day wither away

Then I thought of engraving ur name on a Rock
But then I realised it will one day erode away

Then I thought of embossing ur name on gold
But then I realised it will in fire melt away

Then I thought of piercing it on my small heart
But then I realised it will one day die away

Then I thought and I smiled
For I thought of writing ur name on my soul
And then I realised it will be written for eternity

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29th October 2005, 09:36 AM
wonderful rohin...superb thoughts...
i was jus thinkin abt writin in this way...lil similar to this..this was awsome...fantastic...
hmm may b i got my answer
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
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hi - 29th October 2005, 09:38 AM
Hi Buddy

This is Such a sweet poemI really really liked it! from bottom of my heart! where to write ur name wow!

Where to write ur name?

I thought of first writing ur name on the sea shore
But then I realised it will be wiped away
awww (like u said one time, sagar par lehrain naam mita deti hai, they thikn unpar hakk unhi ka hai)

Then I thought of writing ur name on paper
But then I realised it will be washed away
awww

Then i thought of forming ur name with the clouds
But then I realised it will all be blown away
awww

Then i thought of etching ur name on the tree trunk
But then I realised it will one day wither away
hmm...

Then I thought of engraving ur name on a Rock
But then I realised it will one day erode away
aww

Then I thought of embossing ur name on gold
But then I realised it will in fire melt away
wow gold and fire combination!! nice way to express..

Then I thought of piercing it on my small heart
But then I realised it will one day die away
Hey! DOnt say that!! ek sher yaad aya!

Mere marne ke baad, mujhe jalaney se pehley
mere seene se mera dil nikal lena
kahi vo na jal jaaye
jo is dil me rehtey hai!


Then I thought and I smiled
For I thought of writing ur name on my soul
And then I realised it will be written for eternity

written forever! wow these are so pure feelings u have expressed i really liked it....and it touched my heart! very awesome and cutely u said so much in few words again! very nice

keep it up my dear, i really liked this composition, this compostiion and luv we got frm u will remain forever in our hrts! for i have to say there is no other like u

Looking fwd to read more....of urs feelings...and writings...

Luv
Priya

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29th October 2005, 09:56 AM
wow.. bahoot badhiya likha hai bhaiya... its really so nice..


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29th October 2005, 10:35 AM
hi buddy...very beautifully written......i love ur poems.take care...bye

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29th October 2005, 12:46 PM
Hello Rohin

Then I thought and I smiled
For I thought of writing ur name on my soul
And then I realised it will be written for eternity

Beautiful poetry.......a nice selection of words and imaginations too good.......and written so nicely.......keep writing....Liked the whole poem...keep it up

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29th October 2005, 06:37 PM
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wonderful rohin...superb thoughts...
i was jus thinkin abt writin in this way...lil similar to this..this was awsome...fantastic...
hmm may b i got my answer
take care
Hi Karthik,

I am glad you liked the thoughts... well it happens so many time ... we think about the same thing.. but u know maybe we would have written two completely different things... and still talking about the same thind... so will still like to read what you came up with....

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Re: hi - 29th October 2005, 08:05 PM
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Hi Buddy

This is Such a sweet poemI really really liked it! from bottom of my heart! where to write ur name wow!

Where to write ur name?

I thought of first writing ur name on the sea shore
But then I realised it will be wiped away
awww (like u said one time, sagar par lehrain naam mita deti hai, they thikn unpar hakk unhi ka hai)

Then I thought of writing ur name on paper
But then I realised it will be washed away
awww

Then i thought of forming ur name with the clouds
But then I realised it will all be blown away
awww

Then i thought of etching ur name on the tree trunk
But then I realised it will one day wither away
hmm...

Then I thought of engraving ur name on a Rock
But then I realised it will one day erode away
aww

Then I thought of embossing ur name on gold
But then I realised it will in fire melt away
wow gold and fire combination!! nice way to express..

Then I thought of piercing it on my small heart
But then I realised it will one day die away
Hey! DOnt say that!! ek sher yaad aya!

Mere marne ke baad, mujhe jalaney se pehley
mere seene se mera dil nikal lena
kahi vo na jal jaaye
jo is dil me rehtey hai!


Then I thought and I smiled
For I thought of writing ur name on my soul
And then I realised it will be written for eternity

written forever! wow these are so pure feelings u have expressed i really liked it....and it touched my heart! very awesome and cutely u said so much in few words again! very nice

keep it up my dear, i really liked this composition, this compostiion and luv we got frm u will remain forever in our hrts! for i have to say there is no other like u

Looking fwd to read more....of urs feelings...and writings...

Luv
Priya
Priya,

itne saare aww....lol

yaar muhh khula ka khula reh jaayega....lol...
i am glad u liked it... feeling of love... just to difficult to say in words...

I tried...
love u a lot re
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29th October 2005, 08:06 PM
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wow.. bahoot badhiya likha hai bhaiya... its really so nice..


lallu loves u
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tumhe acha laga matlab yeh nice hai... so nice of u...

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29th October 2005, 08:08 PM
mere dearest rohin
areeeeeeeeee wahh!!!
rohin sehi jaa rahe ho ... aakhiir bhai kis ke ho:d ...hehehe just kiddin
hmmmmmmmm aap to hume ek din aapna fan bana kar chhodogene ........ kya karee waise baann ko bhi dil karta hai ... hehehe
jokes apart .,.. sweet brother of mine u have written so well naa .... bas dil mein uttar gaya ... waise ek kaami hai ... kis ke liye likha tha ... jis ke liye likha hai woh bahut hi lucky hai ... touchwood .. long live my rohin ... so does ur love!!!
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29th October 2005, 08:17 PM
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hi buddy...very beautifully written......i love ur poems.take care...bye
Hi Farhana,

Thanks for liking it... and my poems...

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29th October 2005, 08:18 PM
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Hello Rohin

Then I thought and I smiled
For I thought of writing ur name on my soul
And then I realised it will be written for eternity

Beautiful poetry.......a nice selection of words and imaginations too good.......and written so nicely.......keep writing....Liked the whole poem...keep it up

Take care
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i am glad you liked it... bus pyaar ka asar hai aur kuch nahi..

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mere dearest rohin
areeeeeeeeee wahh!!!
rohin sehi jaa rahe ho ... aakhiir bhai kis ke ho:d ...hehehe just kiddin
hmmmmmmmm aap to hume ek din aapna fan bana kar chhodogene ........ kya karee waise baann ko bhi dil karta hai ... hehehe
jokes apart .,.. sweet brother of mine u have written so well naa .... bas dil mein uttar gaya ... waise ek kaami hai ... kis ke liye likha tha ... jis ke liye likha hai woh bahut hi lucky hai ... touchwood .. long live my rohin ... so does ur love!!!
take care
aur likte raho
love u alotz
ur di always
mandeep

Mandeep di,

Bhai hone ka hi to fayda utha raha hoon
thanks for liking ti so much... well aap ne sahi kaha.. kammi to hai... kya kehti ho pura kar dein??/

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Re: Where to write ur name? - 31st October 2005, 11:20 AM
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Where to write ur name?

I thought of first writing ur name on the sea shore
But then I realised it will be wiped away

Then I thought of writing ur name on paper
But then I realised it will be washed away

Then i thought of forming ur name with the clouds
But then I realised it will all be blown away

Then i thought of etching ur name on the tree trunk
But then I realised it will one day wither away

Then I thought of engraving ur name on a Rock
But then I realised it will one day erode away

Then I thought of embossing ur name on gold
But then I realised it will in fire melt away

Then I thought of piercing it on my small heart
But then I realised it will one day die away

Then I thought and I smiled
For I thought of writing ur name on my soul
And then I realised it will be written for eternity

-- Rohin Bhargava
awesome...... lovly..... just lovly.....rohin how beautifully u expressed all ur love including everything of universe in ur love... & that too u made ur lover's name above all..
great
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Re: Re: Where to write ur name? - 31st October 2005, 06:45 PM
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awesome...... lovly..... just lovly.....rohin how beautifully u expressed all ur love including everything of universe in ur love... & that too u made ur lover's name above all..
great
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Hi Pallavi,

intresting tha na... but i still feel words are missing somewhere.. lol... and she is above everything...

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5th November 2005, 03:54 AM
Hi Mr. Rohin Bhargava,

even though "i have been busy with my constant appointments with important people"...i thought to take time out to read ur fabulous poetry (yea right...hehe)..just kidding

awwwwwwwwww....its soooo cute......really nice....good thoughts...and so cute! remember to give this to ur gf...shes gonna love it
really superb!!!

keep it up "SIR"

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7th November 2005, 06:55 AM
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Hi Mr. Rohin Bhargava,

even though "i have been busy with my constant appointments with important people"...i thought to take time out to read ur fabulous poetry (yea right...hehe)..just kidding

awwwwwwwwww....its soooo cute......really nice....good thoughts...and so cute! remember to give this to ur gf...shes gonna love it
really superb!!!

keep it up "SIR"

take care
bye
Sincerely,
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tumhe pasand aayi..... i am glad... aur haan gf ko to de doonga... and she will love it too.... bus ek baat hai... usse pehle to i should thank you for taking the time out to read... right?

lallu

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Re: Where to write ur name? - 7th November 2005, 10:50 AM
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Where to write ur name?

I thought of first writing ur name on the sea shore
But then I realised it will be wiped away

Then I thought of writing ur name on paper
But then I realised it will be washed away

Then i thought of forming ur name with the clouds
But then I realised it will all be blown away

Then i thought of etching ur name on the tree trunk
But then I realised it will one day wither away

Then I thought of engraving ur name on a Rock
But then I realised it will one day erode away

Then I thought of embossing ur name on gold
But then I realised it will in fire melt away

Then I thought of piercing it on my small heart
But then I realised it will one day die away

Then I thought and I smiled
For I thought of writing ur name on my soul
And then I realised it will be written for eternity

-- Rohin Bhargava
hi rohin,
sum thoughts are better kept unsaid.sum feelings are better kept to urself becoz love has its way of expressing itself despite the silence, n see the way u flowed ur thoughts. its awesome.loved reading each word of it. keep penning down ur thoughts ahead too. blossiming right may u be happy all the time i wish u all joys of life. may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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7th November 2005, 11:21 AM
hey brother sorry for being late,but this is a very gud post.just too gud.and i also read u after a long time in english.so i just enjoyed it.just do keep posting.

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Re: Re: Where to write ur name? - 12th November 2005, 08:53 AM
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hi rohin,
sum thoughts are better kept unsaid.sum feelings are better kept to urself becoz love has its way of expressing itself despite the silence, n see the way u flowed ur thoughts. its awesome.loved reading each word of it. keep penning down ur thoughts ahead too. blossiming right may u be happy all the time i wish u all joys of life. may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
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hey brother sorry for being late,but this is a very gud post.just too gud.and i also read u after a long time in english.so i just enjoyed it.just do keep posting.

urs LUCKY
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Re: Re: Re: Where to write ur name? - 12th November 2005, 09:06 AM
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TBONTB

i am glad you liked it... thanks for the reply and wishes... I am sorry for the late reply....

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rohin....
TBONTB???? ab yeh suspense kab door hoga. plz be clear n dont linger on anymore. m curious to know the full form of it. lolzzzzzz.hope i get to know abt it as soon as possible. waiting for ur reply buddy. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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12th November 2005, 07:37 PM
born to be a shayar, with this poem and ur romantic collection ones too.

shayar saab i wud say that whoevers not read ur work has missed poems that make shayri worth it!!

personal thots. no offence to anyone.

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12th November 2005, 08:37 PM
it was really touching rohinji,

lagta hai aap bahut emotional insaan hai, no wonder all your posts are wonderful




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Re: Re: Re: Re: Where to write ur name? - 13th November 2005, 04:47 PM
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TBONTB???? ab yeh suspense kab door hoga. plz be clear n dont linger on anymore. m curious to know the full form of it. lolzzzzzz.hope i get to know abt it as soon as possible. waiting for ur reply buddy. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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born to be a shayar, with this poem and ur romantic collection ones too.

shayar saab i wud say that whoevers not read ur work has missed poems that make shayri worth it!!

personal thots. no offence to anyone.

god bless, good luk

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Born to be a shayar nahi... born to be a writer... lol.... yaar there is no shayri over here....lol....

but thanks a lot for the compliment....

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it was really touching rohinji,

lagta hai aap bahut emotional insaan hai, no wonder all your posts are wonderful

vedika
Hi Vedika,

Insaan bahvook hona to chahiye... magar shayad jyada nahi.... aur bhavook insaan jyada acha likhte hain mere khayal se.... kyunki woh vo mehsoos karte hain jo dusre nahi...

Thanks a lot for liking it...

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hi rohin ji,

apne thik kaha ki bhavuk insaan jyada acha likhte hai, par aaj ke yug jisme bahut buraaiya hai, mein bhaavnao ki kadr bahut kam hoti hai. yeh baat bilkul sach hai ki bhaavnao ki kadr aaj ka scientific yug bhul raha hai aur isliye hi shayad apko bhavuk log kam hi milenge.


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Hi Vedika,

tumne sahi kaha aur shayad isliye hi kam hi log aate hain yahan jo bhav ko padhte hain... shabdon ko nahi...

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hi rohin
sorry for late reply
but u have written very very good
that person is very lucky who have u written this great poem for
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hi rohin
sorry for late reply
but u have written very very good
that person is very lucky who have u written this great poem for
keep writing bye tc
I hope so ... that i can bring all happiness and luck in the life of the person for whom i have written this.... thanks for ur wonderful reply...

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