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Azaad Khayal
  
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14th September 2005, 03:55 PM
Umeed aisi ho jo jeene ko majboor kare,
raah aisi ho jo chalne ko majboor kare, mahek kum naa ho kabhi apne dosti ki, dosti aisi ho jo milne ko majboor kare....! dosti ki dastan jab waqt sunayega, tumhe bhi ek sakhs yaad aayega, bhool jauoge duniya ke sare gum, jab hamare sath bitaya ek ek pal yaad aayega. tum jab hasti ho to mastana kamal lagti ho, meer ka sher aur galib ki gazal lagti ho, ki sangmermer se tarasha purnur baden, saans leta hua tajmahel lagti ho hum na hote to tumhe gazal kaun kahta, tere chehre ko kamal kaun kahta, ye jadu hi to hai mahabbt ka, warna un pattharo ko tajmahel kaun kahta Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha... Tausif I. Shaikh |
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14th September 2005, 06:34 PM
Tafi ji...
Bahut ache... Specially..... ************ hum na hote to tumhe gazal kaun kahta, tere chehre ko kamal kaun kahta, ye jadu hi to hai mahabbt ka, warna un pattharo ko tajmahel kaun kahta ******************** Too good. Keep up the good work, keep writing keep smiling Vijay ---------------------------------------------- Tumse Hasna Seekha, na seekha rona! Tumse Jeena Seekha, na seekha tum bin jeena!! ---------------------------------------------- |
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15th September 2005, 08:14 AM
I have heard the last part somewhere, could you tell if this is written by you. Does not mean to blame just asking an doubt .....
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Azaad Khayal
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25th May 2010, 03:57 PM
Thanks alot for all your love and compliments, Humarey liye to apka pyar aur apki compliments he sabse bada inaam hai.
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha... Tausif I. Shaikh |
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27th May 2010, 05:18 PM
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keept up ..............aapka vichitra Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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Azaad Khayal
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27th May 2010, 05:36 PM
Thank you for your comment.
Just trying to keeping it up from Feb 2005... Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha... Tausif I. Shaikh |
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27th May 2010, 05:40 PM
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Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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Azaad Khayal
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27th May 2010, 05:47 PM
Shayad kuch misunderstanding ho gayi hai,chalo ise dur kiye dete hain. Ye sher apke liye....
"Jahan ki khhilwat me zulul nahi ayega." "Gham-e-tauheen se kubul nahi ayega." "Maklul ki ibrat hai ye qurfa ghalib." "Dimagh phat jayega par ye sher samjh nahi ayega." I am not naraz keep smiling.... Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha... Tausif I. Shaikh |
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