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Originally Posted by ruchika
Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Kuch pane ka mann nahi…
Bhuli-bisri un yaadon ko…..
Dil main dabane ka mann nahi…..
Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Dil ko sach samjhane ka mann nahi…
Palko main chupe in, aansoo ko….
Aaj chalkane ka mann nahi…
Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Rahe-pathoron se takrane ka mann nahi….
Chupaa le kahi tere aachal main, mere aks ko…
Is Duniya se roo-ba-roo hone ka mann nahi….
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Khoob ehsaas pesh kiye hai aapne ruchika ji...khayaalat behad umda tareeke se alfaazon mein dhaale hai aapne..itna hi kehnaa chahugaa ki mujhe is nazm mein shayad kafiye ka her pher laga..aapki nazm ke matle mein roo-ba-roo hone ka mann nahi kahi kahi aapki nazm mein apne hi radeef ko sawaalat kar raha hai...
umeed hai aap ise ek suggestion ki tarah se lengii...
aapka apnaa