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Love Unspoken love - 2nd June 2016, 08:13 PM

Dear Friends...

Sharing one recent poem written by me...




Falling in love whom i never seen

Only heart knows; *how long its been...*


He is my world.. my every dream...*

He is the king whose i m *the queen....*


He is there in .my every sight..

Makes my day better and bright*


Spending many sleepless night

Holding his memories tight


Staying away is making me sad

Unspoken love is why so bad??*


What if he wud come to know

Is it wrong ? True Feelings to show?


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Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
   
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3rd June 2016, 04:52 PM

wow nice poem vid rare expressions of love
well done purvi ji


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4th June 2016, 11:02 PM

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Dear Friends...

Sharing one recent poem written by me...




Falling in love whom i never seen

Only heart knows; *how long its been...*


He is my world.. my every dream...*

He is the king whose i m *the queen....*


He is there in .my every sight..

Makes my day better and bright*


Spending many sleepless night

Holding his memories tight


Staying away is making me sad

Unspoken love is why so bad??*


What if he wud come to know

Is it wrong ? True Feelings to show?
Wow..loved it...
Emotions r beautifully expressed in every single line.....

Keep sharing...



अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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8th June 2016, 06:01 PM

U dun get to decide its ryt or wrng.. Well actually u dun need to decide its ryt or wrng.. Nice lines.. Keep it up lassy
   
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12th June 2016, 02:09 PM

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wow nice poem vid rare expressions of love
well done purvi ji
Thank You very much sabaa...!! Glad to have your comment on my post.


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16th December 2016, 06:32 PM

Very good poem Purvi ji,
My regards.....keep sharibg your poems

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