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Khudaiee mil gayee....( Ghayel ) - 8th July 2009, 08:43 PM
Rehmate khuda ki jo thodi mil gayee
Woh sochte hain unko khudayee mil gayee

Apni wafa se ziyada, kiya unpar aitbaar
Aur badle me humko yaro, bewafaiee mil gayee

Kisse kare ab shikwa, kisse gila kare
Dekha jaha bhi humne, aakhe tamashayee mil gayee

Sajate rahe mehfil, hum doston ki khatir
Q humko shehar-e-khamosha si tanhaiee mil gayee

Ise ehsan kahu tera, ya tujhse karu shikayat
Tere aane se maut humko, unki yado se rihaiee mil gayee

Zakhmi hua hain dil, Ghayel hua wajood
Mazdoor-e-mohabbat ko uski kamaiee mil gayee.

-Sajid Ghayel-

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10th July 2009, 05:23 PM
Nice One Sajid sahab......

Bahut hi thikhe lahje mein kahi hai yeh gazal kya baat hai ...
sabhi sher achche lage aur sahiN lage likhae rahiye ,,,,,

Yeh wala sher kuch behad achcha laga..
Apni wafa se ziyada, kiya unpar aitbaar
Aur badle me humko yaro, bewafaiee mil gayee
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wah kya khoob likha
Apni wafa se ziyada, kiya unpar aitbaar
Aur badle me humko yaro, bewafaiee mil gayee
dil jeet liya, hamesha yu h likhte rehiye
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Rehmate khuda ki jo thodi mil gayee
Woh sochte hain unko khudayee mil gayee

Apni wafa se ziyada, kiya unpar aitbaar
Aur badle me humko yaro, bewafaiee mil gayee

Kisse kare ab shikwa, kisse gila kare
Dekha jaha bhi humne, aakhe tamashayee mil gayee

Sajate rahe mehfil, hum doston ki khatir
Q humko shehar-e-khamosha si tanhaiee mil gayee

Ise ehsan kahu tera, ya tujhse karu shikayat
Tere aane se maut humko, unki yado se rihaiee mil gayee

Zakhmi hua hain dil, Ghayel hua wajood
Mazdoor-e-mohabbat ko uski kamaiee mil gayee.

-Sajid Ghayel-
   
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11th July 2009, 02:53 PM
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Nice One Sajid sahab......

Bahut hi thikhe lahje mein kahi hai yeh gazal kya baat hai ...
sabhi sher achche lage aur sahiN lage likhae rahiye ,,,,,

Yeh wala sher kuch behad achcha laga..
Apni wafa se ziyada, kiya unpar aitbaar
Aur badle me humko yaro, bewafaiee mil gayee
Aapne apna waqt diya Khwaish Saheb yeh meri khushnasibi hain....bohat shukriyaa

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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wah kya khoob likha
Apni wafa se ziyada, kiya unpar aitbaar
Aur badle me humko yaro, bewafaiee mil gayee
dil jeet liya, hamesha yu h likhte rehiye
Mere sher aapko pasand aaye Amit Saheb meri mehnat wasool hui, isi tarah apna pyaar dete rahiye.....

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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11th July 2009, 03:39 PM


Sajid Bhai.........aapki saari Ghazal ke sher mujhe bahut pasand aaye......nice creation....

yeh 3 sher mujhe jiyada ache lage....

Apni wafa se ziyada, kiya unpar aitbaar
Aur badle me humko yaro, bewafaiee mil gayee

Kisse kare ab shikwa, kisse gila kare
Dekha jaha bhi humne, aakhe tamashayee mil gayee

Sajate rahe mehfil, hum doston ki khatir
Q humko shehar-e-khamosha si tanhaiee mil gayee
good work
khush rahiye.....





YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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11th July 2009, 04:48 PM
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Sajid Bhai.........aapki saari Ghazal ke sher mujhe bahut pasand aaye......nice creation....

yeh 3 sher mujhe jiyada ache lage....

Apni wafa se ziyada, kiya unpar aitbaar
Aur badle me humko yaro, bewafaiee mil gayee

Kisse kare ab shikwa, kisse gila kare
Dekha jaha bhi humne, aakhe tamashayee mil gayee

Sajate rahe mehfil, hum doston ki khatir
Q humko shehar-e-khamosha si tanhaiee mil gayee

good work
khush rahiye.....
Bohat shukriyaan Naresh Jee hausla Afzaiee ke liye.....

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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Rehmate khuda ki jo thodi mil gayee
Woh sochte hain unko khudayee mil gayee

Apni wafa se ziyada, kiya unpar aitbaar
Aur badle me humko yaro, bewafaiee mil gayee

Kisse kare ab shikwa, kisse gila kare
Dekha jaha bhi humne, aakhe tamashayee mil gayee

Sajate rahe mehfil, hum doston ki khatir
Q humko shehar-e-khamosha si tanhaiee mil gayee

Ise ehsan kahu tera, ya tujhse karu shikayat
Tere aane se maut humko, unki yado se rihaiee mil gayee

Zakhmi hua hain dil, Ghayel hua wajood
Mazdoor-e-mohabbat ko uski kamaiee mil gayee.


bahut khoob ghayal saheb......jo bhi sheyr bold kiye haiN, wo ab mujhe apne se ehssas lage......aur jo color kiya hai....wo sheyr bahut hi umda laga.....daad hi daad hai saheb....

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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28th April 2010, 01:12 PM
Badi Meharbani Vikram saheb.........bas yuhi sath nibhate rahe.

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