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Originally Posted by Ankita
ghayal shayar hi
aap ka toh naam hi padh kar soch mein pad gayi. ek toh shayar aur upar say ghayal. aap ki shairi mein toh dard hi dard hoga.
mein thahari ek chanchal bala
kaisa yeh nata tunay jodh dala
ghayal jo ho gaya shayari hi
dahni na paday mujhe varmala
just joking. lekin any criticism is welcome to make this better.
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u knw something shayri dl se hoti hai sirf tukbandi ya likhne ke liye likhna shayri nahiN hoti hai maam...!! datz wat i wud say...!! bas shayad aap samajh gayi hoNgi ki main kya kehna chahta huN, waise mujhe aap na kaheN maiN koi budhaa nahiN huN, bas ek naujavaan hiN huN, aur yahaaN sabs chotoN meN se ek huN....!! chaliye umeed hai aage v aapko padhte raheNge ji...!!