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Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat -
23rd July 2007, 08:40 PM
Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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a broken shadow...
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23rd July 2007, 10:13 PM
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Originally Posted by Ritu
Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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namaskar Ritu G,
aap kaise hain?
welcome back, after such a long gap. aur jo apne likha hai, vakai tareef-e-kabil hai. shuruwat to bahut achi ki apne. yhe gazal bahut gehri hai, humein apke ehsaas ache lage, khas kar yhe sher:
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
app yuhin likte rahein aur khush rahein.
tc
manish
Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...
Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....
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23rd July 2007, 11:40 PM
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Originally Posted by Ritu
Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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ritu ji main ne pehli baar aapko parrha hai aapki shayri dilko bohat bhaye hai aur ye ashar bohat ache lage......
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
yunhi aaati rahiye .........
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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bhut khub -
24th July 2007, 10:22 AM
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Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ritu ji ko raj ka adaab......bhut hii pur asar agaaz.!!!!!
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ye share to gazal ki jaan hai bhut gehrii baat kahi aapne is share par merii dil se daad kabool kare......
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
or ye share bhi qabile tareef hai......ritu ji aaj aapko pehli dfafa parhne ka sabaab hasil huaa yakeen maniye bhut acha lagga aapki agli peshkash ka besabri se intzaar rahega.......
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yun ti poori gazal hii bakamaal hai lakin kush ashaar dil ko chhu gaye yun hii likhti rahiyega........raj..........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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24th July 2007, 10:38 AM
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andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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Bahut khoob Ritu G
Kyaa baat kahi hai aapne.
Jaise padte hi dil ne kaha ke maine aisa kabhi padha hi nahi hai..
in 4 lines mein jo jazbaat hai woh to bas qyamat hai qyamat
aap yunhi likhte rahiye...
aapka intezaar rahega......
Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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24th July 2007, 11:35 AM
Sukhriya manish ji,
sabd toe dil ke aayne hote hei, aapko pasand aaye, bahot accha lagaa
sukhriya
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24th July 2007, 11:37 AM
Koi to ho..
maaf kijiye aapka naam toe nahi jaanti.. par aapki comments parh ke bahot accha lagaa.. mein ish site par ek lambe arse ke baad phir aayi hu, ishliye shayad aapne pehli baar humei yahan dekha.
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24th July 2007, 11:40 AM
pasand karne ka sukhriya Rajveer ji
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24th July 2007, 11:41 AM
Sukhriya Jasdeep ji,
Shayad kuch zyaada hi tareef kardi aapne, itni tareef ke toe kaabil hum nahi hei.. bas umeed hei aap sabh ki umeed par likh paaye..
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24th July 2007, 11:59 AM
Ritu jee namaskaaR:
aapkii Ghazal nazar nawaaz hu'ii... aik umdaah Ghazal aapkii taraf sey paRhne ko milii hay hum sab ko... Ghazal ke aSh'aar Bahot Khuub raheN... aik Sher dil ke sab sey qareeb rahaa...
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guzaariSh haii kii aap yuuNhii apnii kosiShoN ke zar'iiye ess bazm ko sajaate raheN... daad ko qabool farmaaYeN...
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka dost
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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24th July 2007, 12:11 PM
Aadab Ritu ji...
Behad khoobsurat gazal likhi hai aapne.. Daad haazir hai kubul ho...
Apka Dost Abrar...
Ijazat...
Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain,
Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge...
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24th July 2007, 01:34 PM
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Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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hello ritu....aapko aapne ghar mei.n vapas dekh kar bahut kushi hue, jab koi purana member...lambhe arse baad louta hai to ghar mei.n kai naye member uske suwagat ke liye palke biccha detey hai.n, un mei.n se ek mai.n bhi hoon....beshak aap mere se chotti hai.n, par mujhe aapka suwagat karne ka haq to hai na...
ritu aapki gazal behad khoobsurat hai...har sher dil par dastak de gaya....yu hi likhti rahiye aur routine mei.n aati rahiye....kush rahiye.
duao.n ke saath
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th July 2007, 02:16 PM
Ritu Jee:
Sab se pahle maiN aap ka Shurkiyah ada karna chaahuNga jo aap yahaaN aayee aur apne ehsaasoN ko sab se yahaaN baaNTa aur aate hii aap ne jo mehfil kii raunaq afzaayii kii....
aap kii yeh nazm behad khuub hai.. jis mein dard kii jhalak saaf nazar aa rahii hai... Puuri kii puuri kavvish dil ko bhaayii hai.... KhaaS kar yeh 2 misre mujhe behad achchhe lage....
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
kya baat kahii hai!
Mayank
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24th July 2007, 02:55 PM
Ritu G
Agar apko yeh lagta hai ke maine apki jyada tareef kar di hai to shayad galat lagta hai kyunki yeh apki rachna to abhi aur bhi tareef ke kaabil hai. aur main to shayad utni tareef kar hi nahi paya.
Aaj ka hamara din bahut achha hai aaj hamare saath sab kuch bahut achha ho raha hai aur haan aaj hi maine Aryan g ki likhi ek rachna "jab se tujhe pane ki meri chahat ho gayi" padi hai woh bhi mujhe bahut achhi lagi hai aur aaj aap do logo ki yeh rachnayein hamesha mere paas rahengi...
umeed hai ke aap aise hi hamein padhne ka mauka dete rahenge...
Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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24th July 2007, 05:42 PM
pasand karne ka bahot bahot sukhriya Dhaval ji aur Izajat ji
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24th July 2007, 05:44 PM
Sukhriya sunita ji, humara ish mehfil mei swagat karne keliye bhi aur apne inn pyare se alfaazo se humare sabdo ko tareef karne ka..
vakt ne gar saath diiya toe yunhi nazar aate rahenge.
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24th July 2007, 05:46 PM
Sukhriya toe mujhe kehna chahiye Mayank ji, jo aapne humei ish mehfil mei phir se bulayaa aur humei yanha itna pasand kiya gaya... Mujhe behad khushi hei ki mei laut kar yanha aayi!!
Tehreer pasand karne ka bahot bahot sukhriya, vaise aap ke saamne toe humare sabd kuch bhi nai hei..
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24th July 2007, 05:47 PM
Once again bahot bahot sukhriya jasdeep ji... I will surely share more of my words here!
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Excellent -
24th July 2007, 07:17 PM
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Originally Posted by Ritu
Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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WONDERFUL FEELINGS..
hi RITU,
MAI AAP KI RACHANA PEHLI BAAR PADH RAHI HOO.BAHUT KHUB.............
IS MAI BAHUT DARD AUR GEHRAI HAI.....KUCH DER KE LIYE DIL DHADAKNA BHUL GAYA............ITNI UMDA GAZAL HUMARE SAATH SHARE KARNE KA TAHE DIL SE SHUKRIYA.........................................G OD BLESS U..........TAKE CARE.......................
AAP KI DOST,
LAMHA...........
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25th July 2007, 10:43 AM
Pasand karne ka bahot bahot sukhriya....
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25th July 2007, 04:19 PM
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Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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Bahot hi accha likha hai aap ne Ritu ji, Yu hi likhte rahiye!
Reshma,
Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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26th July 2007, 10:02 PM
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Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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U wrote very well and Good Animated your Post...Great....Rahul
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27th July 2007, 10:32 AM
Bahot bahot sukhriya Reshma ji aur Rahul ji!
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27th July 2007, 10:37 AM
hi ritu jee...
bahut khubsurat ritu ji .... aapko aaj yaha pehli baar padh raha hu aur aapne is pehli rachna mein jo aapne bayan kiya hai wo daad ke kabil hai....
tah-e-dil se daad hazir hai, kabuliyega...
bahut hi dard bhare aur dil ko chhune wale alfaazo, aur ehsaason se aapne rachna ko sajaya hai.. bahut hi jald aap parivar ke achchhe sadasya ban jayenge aap..
yuhi likhte rahiyega
aapka dost
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Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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30th July 2007, 10:52 AM
Bas merul ji, yahi umeed hei ki sabh ke dilo ko humare sabd chuu paaye...
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hi ritu -
30th July 2007, 06:05 PM
hi dear i m new user can you make my friend
Intezaar to kareiN ke jab vo aaye bhi
Bhool jaayeiN hum chhodeiN jo mere saaye bhi
Kal subah yeh zindagi jo na rahi
Tamaasha dekheNge apne aur paraaye bhi
Vo gair hai to gair ban-na bhi seekh le
YaadoN meiN aake baar-baar aazmaaye bhi
Kehta hai duniya ko chhoD dega humeiN
MuD ke dekhe baar-baar, ghabraaye bhi
Yeh kaisa khuda hai mere dosto
Khud hi lagaaye aag, khud hi bhujaaye bhi
Shikwa bhi to kya kareiN hum kisi se
Khoya ik humsafar to lakhoN rehnuma paaye bhi
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31st July 2007, 06:14 AM
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Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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kya likha hai apne. sare gum bayan karke bhi kisi par koi ilzam nahi sare ilzam khud apne par hi rakhe. what a love. its really very good keep writing
god bless u
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1st August 2007, 08:42 AM
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Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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Ritu ji ko shaan ka salam,
Aapki gazal behat jazbati or dil ko chune waali hai. mujhe behad pasand aai
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bahut khoob likha hai
yun hi likhte rahen. mujhe intezaar rahega
SHAAN
Gamo ki kader karo or unke sath jiyu,
Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah.
........Shaan......
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1st August 2007, 07:39 PM
Sure Rahul,
We all are friends here I guess! Nice ghazal, composed by you..
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1st August 2007, 07:44 PM
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kya likha hai apne. sare gum bayan karke bhi kisi par koi ilzam nahi sare ilzam khud apne par hi rakhe. what a love. its really very good keep writing
god bless u
UnwrittenStory
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Mohabbat mei kisi ko ilzaam dene se apne hi jazbaaton ki be-izzati hoti hei.. Bahot din baad hi sahi lekin abh yeh humei ehsaas ho chuka hei! I am glad that you like my composition...
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1st August 2007, 07:46 PM
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Ritu ji ko shaan ka salam,
Aapki gazal behat jazbati or dil ko chune waali hai. mujhe behad pasand aai
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bahut khoob likha hai
yun hi likhte rahen. mujhe intezaar rahega
SHAAN
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Bahot sukhriya...mujhe khushi hei ki aapko ko meri koshish pasand aayi, koshish karungi ki aap sabh ki umeedo par khare utar saku...
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2nd August 2007, 11:30 PM
hai kyon tujh mai itna dard?
zindagi ze itni tu jafa na kar,
han,hoti hai zubah har raat ke baad,
bevajah khud ko itna khafa na kar...
adaab ritu ji,
reading u for the very firzt time n loved it.bahut acha likha aapne per bahut dard bhara.kuch zindagi ke khzhrang pehlu per bhi likhen...
khuzh rahen.likhti rahen yunhin.
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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3rd August 2007, 12:05 PM
Sukhriya akelijaan ji,
khushi hei ki aapko meri koshish pasand aayi..
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3rd August 2007, 12:15 PM
RITU JI KO MERA AADAB.................aaj pehli baar apko pada to padta hi rehgaya bahut hi umda kalam aur behtreen alfaz se apne pesh kiya hai unhi likhti rahiye........apna khayal rakhiye......naacheez ki daad kubool ho............TACK CARE
"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.
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3rd August 2007, 12:17 PM
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Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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RITU JI KO MERA AADAB.................aaj pehli baar apko pada to padta hi rehgaya bahut hi umda kalam aur behtreen alfaz se apne pesh kiya hai unhi likhti rahiye........apna khayal rakhiye......naacheez ki daad kubool ho............TACK CARE
"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.
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3rd August 2007, 09:21 PM
bahot bahot sukhriya kashif ji!
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3rd August 2007, 09:46 PM
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Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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bahut khob bahut khoob hai andaj-e-baya aapka..............
--Aryan
Aise to lafja yun bhatkate rah jayenge,
Koi parh lega to alfaj suku payege...
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5th August 2007, 01:40 PM
bahot sukhriya aryan ji...
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5th August 2007, 02:32 PM
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Khudgarz hei meri mohabbat, mujhse wafaa na kar
bereham hei meri chahat, mujhse wafaa na kar
zindagi bhar apni takleefo se juzti rahi hu mei
bepanaah hei meri nafrat, mujhse wafaa na kar
andhero se roshan rahi hei mere dil ki mehfil
chandni hei mere liye aafat, mujhse wafaa na kar
mei zhilmila rahi hu apni lagaai hui aag mei
ish aag se hei mujhe ulfat, mujhse wafaa na kar
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
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Ek behad haseen peshkash, Ritu Ji...!
ishq aur wafaa nahi hei mere haatho ki lakiro mei
mei hu khud apne liye musibat, mujhse wafaa na kar
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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6th August 2007, 09:56 AM
Sukhriya... Amanush Ji
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