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Eei kaash ki haathon ki lakiron mein... -
28th September 2003, 01:11 PM
hello doston,
Mein yahaan nayi hoon, but umeed karti hoon aap sabh se jald hi parichay ho jaayega! Mein kuch kuch likhti hoon, kabhi-kabhar... aur ushi mein se ek koshish aap sabh ke saamne arz hei! [color=royal blue] Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti Pal kuch khushi kei aur kuch gam ke Hum alag alag chaant lete Tere haathon se bhi Kuch mere haathon se bhi Kasam Yaa Khudda ki Khushinyo ki bahaar tujh pe barsaate Har voh khushi ka pal tere saath bitaate Gam tere hisse aane na dete Chupke se saare gam ke pal Hum chura le jaate Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti Milan ka pal hei kabh, aur kabh judaai Hum sabh jaan lete Milan ke pal sabh thaam lete Aur judaai ke palO mein Tere dil ki gehraai mein chupp jaate Ki na kabhi hummei Judaai khoj paati Aur na kabhi hum judaa ho jaate Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti Ki phir jaane hum kya kya kar paate Lamha lamha parh paate Har lamhe ko sahej kar Apne dil se lagaa lete Eei kaash... Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti [/color] Ritu!  |
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28th September 2003, 01:23 PM
ritu dost,
waahhhhhh bahot khub Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti Milan ka pal hei kabh, aur kabh judaai Hum sabh jaan lete Milan ke pal sabh thaam lete Aur judaai ke palO mein Tere dil ki gehraai mein chupp jaate Ki na kabhi hummei Judaai khoj paati Aur na kabhi hum judaa ho jaate ae kaash......... to muje yah sawaal kabhi n hota k....... kyun sama gaya kaise sama gaya kab sama gaya mere hathhao ki lakiromaie yah khalipan.... khalipan.... khalipan |
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28th September 2003, 01:37 PM
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Haathon ki lakiron mein khalipan na samaa jaata Ager voh humei deta apnapan Magar haaye re kismat joe hei mera hi darrpan Ushi keiliye aaj tarasta hei mera khalipan  |
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28th September 2003, 05:58 PM
Hi Ritu
kaise ho......... Welcome to this site.... pehle mujhse milo.... pyaar se log mujhe Mohit kehte hain....aur gusse se bhi Mohit he kehte hain..... aur dheere dheere pata chal he jayega aapko mere baare mein vo kya hai na ki maine socha ki apne mooh se khud he apni tareef kyon karein.... anyway....ab main aapki ghajal padhta hu fir vaapis reply karunga ok..... hey jaana mat...   |
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28th September 2003, 06:01 PM
Vaise ghajal achhi nahi.....balki bohat acchi likhi hai...
itni badi ghajal aapne khud likh??? shaabash.... |
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28th September 2003, 11:46 PM
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nice to meet you and thanks for your welcome. Ji zaroor aapke baare mein aur jaan-na chahungi .. u sound interesting  ! |
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28th September 2003, 11:47 PM
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Ji vaise yeh ghazal nahi nazm hei aur haan yeh meine khudd likhi |
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Re: Eei kaash ki haathon ki lakiron mein... -
29th September 2003, 11:31 AM
Welcome Ritu ji
Aik achchi nazm share ki hai aapne hum logoN ke saath. Daad qubuul kiijiye. Aur aage bhi apne kalaam sunaati rahiyega. Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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29th September 2003, 11:36 AM
Hi! Riru,
Your 'Nazm' is really beautiful. You have really used some beautiful words here. This goes to show our site is gettin popular, Itne Acche "shayar' aa rahe hain. May god bless u with the powers to choose the desired Do keep writing.. Take Care Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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29th September 2003, 05:22 PM
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29th September 2003, 05:24 PM
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Haan this site is quite popular & ofcourse beautiful too |
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29th September 2003, 08:29 PM
Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN
Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti Milan ka pal hei kabh, aur kabh judaai Hum sabh jaan lete Milan ke pal sabh thaam lete Aur judaai ke palO mein Tere dil ki gehraai mein chupp jaate Ki na kabhi hummei Judaai khoj paati Aur na kabhi hum judaa ho jaate Ritu ji sabse pehle to aap ka swagat hai .....behad khushi hai ki ek behtreen shayra ka aagaz hua hai yahan....aap ke khayalat bahot ache hai aur utne hi ache hai aap ke alfaaz jinhe aap ne yahan sajaya hai....hamari daad qubool kijiye aur aise hi jazbaton ke phool khilate rahiye.... -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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1st October 2003, 01:59 AM
hi bahut pyari nazam likhi hai apne.is it u ritu aur mujhe bhaleka laga.
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6th October 2003, 09:21 PM
nice work ritu
keep writing kuch ziada mang lia keya hum ne,aa dostoo |
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7th October 2003, 07:24 PM
Jaan Jee, well said. Nice one. Thanks.
Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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shyari -
9th July 2006, 03:58 PM
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10th July 2006, 01:17 PM
Hi ritu, dhiraj here
Bahut hi achha likha hai apne, keep it up shayad ane wale dino me kuch aur behatrin nazm,gajal ya koi shayri apse mile |
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Bhaut khoob -
11th July 2006, 10:49 AM
Sach mein aapne bahut acha likha hai.ritu
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