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Love Dil-e-nadaan ye namak zakhm-e-jigar pe kis liye - 23rd December 2014, 09:39 PM
Dil-e-nadaN ye namak zakhm-e-jigar pe kis liye
Jo hua na tera ho kar bhi..us kafir ki talab kis liye

Badi berukhi se dekha usne jab roo-ba-roo tha mahfil me
Deedar-e-sang se fir ye sukoon-o-rahat kis liye

Katl karti raheeN sharbati nigaheeN jo pahle bhi.
Kurbaa unhi aankhoon pe hone ki hasrat kis liye

Khwab-o-armaa jala ke bhi jo sanam pighla nahi
Ishk-e-junoo me us patthar ki ibaadat kis liye.

Dil cheer kar parkha jisne todne se pahle
Aakhri sans tak us bedard se muhabbat kis liye

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23rd December 2014, 10:38 PM
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Dil-e-nadaN ye namak zakhm-e-jigar pe kis liye
Jo hua na tera ho kar bhi..us kafir ki talab kis liye

Badi berukhi se dekha usne jab roo-ba-roo tha mahfil me
Deedar-e-sang se fir ye sukoon-o-rahat kis liye

Katl karti raheeN sharbati nigaheeN jo pahle bhi.
Kurbaa unhi aankhoon pe hone ki hasrat kis liye

Khwab-o-armaa jala ke bhi jo sanam pighla nahi
Ishk-e-junoo me us patthar ki ibaadat kis liye.

Dil cheer kar parkha jisne todne se pahle
Aakhri sans tak us bedard se muhabbat kis liye

Bhushan Joshi
.......Ehsaas pasand aaye bhushan ji...nice.


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24th December 2014, 01:24 PM
Bohot bohit shukriya Madhu Ji...
Aapki ahsaas pasand aaye..........uparwale ka karam aur aap ki dariyadili hai

Aapka apna
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25th December 2014, 10:58 PM
Dil cheer kar parkha jisne todne se pahle
Aise bedard se bepanah mohabbat kis liye.

Bhushan ,
Aap ki akhri lines ko thora change kiya , gaur farmayein.

vaise aap ke ehsaas mujhe bahut pasand aye.

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26th December 2014, 08:45 AM
Sehgal ji namaste.

Aapne is nazm ko itni tavajjo di.....bohot bohot shukriya.....

Akhri line likhne me bohot sochna pada.......aur aapka pichla mashwara bhi yaad tha thakulaas wala.....par kuch thik thik suzha nahi..

Aapki hausala afzahi aur rayshumari ka tahe dil se shukriya

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29th December 2014, 04:01 PM
Dil-e-nadaN ye namak zakhm-e-jigar pe kis liye
Jo hua na tera ho kar bhi..us kafir ki talab kis liye

wah kya baat hai Bhushan Sb....Mubarak ho.
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30th December 2014, 07:27 AM
Parwaaz bhai aadab..

Aapko peshkash pasand aai uparwale ki meharbani hai........housala afzahi ka tahe dil se shukriya..

Aapka apna
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30th December 2014, 12:25 PM
ummdah peshkash bhushan saahab..................................

very nice

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30th December 2014, 01:56 PM
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ummdah peshkash bhushan saahab..................................

very nice

Shaad....
Shaad bhai aadab...

Hausala afzahi ka tahe dil se shukriya....

Aapka apna
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