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Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si -
26th August 2004, 04:04 PM
Ke har mulakat tumsi kyu lagti hai
Jaise rah gayi koi baat unkahi Kaise bataun mein tumse yeh kah du ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Ke yeh preet ka bandhan hai kaisa Ek rishta yeh ki jiska koi naam nahi Kyu nahi tumko apna keh paati ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Ke aankho ke darpan main basate ho yun Ek aansoo ban palko main hai chhup jate Ek moti ki tarah sanjo rakha hai ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Ke ek sapna ho to tum kuch aisa Jo toot jaata har subah adhura hi Khwaab main bhi puri na ho ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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26th August 2004, 08:06 PM
mausam....sach maan liye bhai....kii tumharii bhii koii khwahis hai..mai tao soch raha thaa....tum tao ek damm sidhii sadhii gaon kii.............. ho jahaan dil kiss chidiyaa ka naam hai 3 bachoo k baad pata padtaa hai..yaa kabhii kabhii nahii bhii...
 hey.....mausaam ek baat bolun..sach achha likhaa tumne....padhte padhte yuu laga.....tum jo kehnaa chaah rahii ho vo sab mehsus huaa....bass aur kyaa chaahiiye....jab bhii koii kuch likhtaa hai...aur uske jassbaat insaan ko samjhne mai aa jaye.....likhnaa kamyaab ho jata hai.... yuu hii likhtii raha naaa.....takii tumhe hum yuu hii jaan sake.....kii akhiR mausaam kyaa balaa hai... tumhara dost saa..Sanju!  muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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27th August 2004, 01:52 AM
Dear mausam,
aare ghana vakhat pachi. saroo lahyu che...keep it up....anything in gujarati plz..... pappu.  |
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27th August 2004, 03:10 AM
Mausam ji,
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. Har shabd pyar ke ras mein bhiga hua hai... bahut khoob.. yeh aise hi benaam rishte zindagi ka sabab ban jaate hain.. Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Re: Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si -
27th August 2004, 12:00 PM
MAUSAM JI
behad sachi aur jazbaati gazal likhi hai aapne....dil ko choo liya aapne.....aap ke aasharon mein ek maasumiyat chupi hai,,jo bahooot pyari lagi.....yun to poori gazal hi sundarta ka darpan hai,,magar yeh aashar dil ko choo gaye... Ke yeh preet ka bandhan hai kaisa Ek rishta yeh ki jiska koi naam nahi Kyu nahi tumko apna keh paati ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Ke ek sapna ho to tum kuch aisa Jo toot jaata har subah adhura hi Khwaab main bhi puri na ho ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si hamari dil se nikli daad kubool kijiye,,sada khush rahiye...take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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27th August 2004, 02:46 PM
ooyee sanju tum mujhe kya samajhte ho.........
tum bahut bol rahe ho aajkal........waise tumhe bahut gaav yaad aa raha hain matlab tum hi gaav ke ho.....aur gaav jaa rahe ho..... waise thanks bhi apko hamari shairi achi lagi......... hum woh bala hain jo.....rehne do tum darrr jaoge...... tumhari dost si....mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2004, 02:47 PM
Mausam ji..........
chooooooooooooooooo gaya her shabd pyar se bhigi har baat ko.. har shab pyar ki khawahish me laba..lab.... bahooooot khoob.... udas |
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27th August 2004, 02:48 PM
shukriya manojjee,
apko hamari nazam acchi lagi iska bahut bahut shukriya...... keep smiling, mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2004, 02:51 PM
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BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE..baat adhoori si..mulakaat adhoori si ka kya kehna..baate.n aur mulakate.n adhoori hi achhi hoti hain..taki pyas baki rahe.. ek achhi ..bahut achhi kavita ke liye daad kubool kijiyega.. |
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27th August 2004, 03:09 PM
abhar pappujee,
apke liye gujarati main likha maine par net bandh ho gaya so chala gaya.....i will send u some later..as i am in hurrry mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2004, 03:11 PM
hii priya jeee,
thanks for the compliments, keep smiling mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2004, 03:12 PM
thanks udasjeee,
bye and take care, mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th August 2004, 03:14 PM
thanks kavvisjee,
hamari kavita sarahne ke liyeeee mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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28th August 2004, 10:04 AM
hi mausam jii aapke ehsas bhut hi khubsarat hain or aapne unhe bhut hi khubsurti se pesh kiya or bhut hi sunder lvzo mei ...............or khaas aapki ye lines hmare dil ko chhuu gyi or bhut hi achhi lgi.........
Ke yeh preet ka bandhan hai kaisa Ek rishta yeh ki jiska koi naam nahi Kyu nahi tumko apna keh paati ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si hmesha iase hi likhti rhe very gud words........ bye c u take care ..........and keeep it up |
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28th August 2004, 10:22 AM
Ke har mulakat tumsi kyu lagti hai
Jaise rah gayi koi baat unkahi Kaise bataun mein tumse yeh kah du ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Very beautiful words... Ke ek sapna ho to tum kuch aisa Jo toot jaata har subah adhura hi Khwaab main bhi puri na ho ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Wah Wah! Dil se daad kubool kijiyega... Bahut hi sundar rachna hai... Isi tarah mehfil sajati rehien..... Plz do keep up the good work n TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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28th August 2004, 03:36 PM
thanks sahiljee,
thanks a lot keep smiling, mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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28th August 2004, 03:39 PM
heelo pulkitjee,
apko accha laga isliye khushi hui, mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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29th August 2004, 11:54 AM
mausam ji
wah,,,bahut gehra likha hai apne.. ..Ke yeh preet ka bandhan hai kaisa Ek rishta yeh ki jiska koi naam nahi Kyu nahi tumko apna keh paati ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Ke aankho ke darpan main basate ho yun Ek aansoo ban palko main hai chhup jate Ek moti ki tarah sanjo rakha hai ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Ke ek sapna ho to tum kuch aisa Jo toot jaata har subah adhura hi Khwaab main bhi puri na ho ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si ........sach bahut accha laga dil ko,...koi ek adhoori kkkkhawish ,,hoti hai jab to dil ye hi sochker mayus ho uthta hai...bahut pyara ehsas,,,,yun hi lekhti rehna... |
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29th August 2004, 03:11 PM
thanks swati......
pyar hota hi itna khubsurat ki uska adhura ehsas bhi pyara lagta hain mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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26th September 2007, 05:12 PM
Mausam didi :
jai mata di.. aaj maiN aap ki pooraani kosiShoN ko paRH rahaa thaa... jitni bhee paRhii sabhee ke aSh'aar mujHe be-Had pasaNd aaYeN.. Khaas kar ke ess kosiSh ke aSh'aar.. kyuuNki dil ke kuch qareeb sey hai.. aapne saral lafzoN meiN bahot Khuub aNdaaz-e-bayaaN kiYaa hai.. YuuNhi liKhate raheN.. dil sey niklii hu'ii daad ko qabUl farmaaYeN.. KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN..duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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27th September 2007, 12:23 PM
MAUSAM JI ADAAB...................
Aap ka kalaam padne ko mila bahut hi umda kalaam hai aapka alfaz aur andaaz dono hi badiya rahey dili daad hazir hai kubool ho Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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27th September 2007, 12:36 PM
Dear mausam.....aaj tumhari yeh purani post padi....behad acchi lagi....ahsaas bhi badiya haiN....samey ke saath saath ahsaas bhi badal jatey haiN...hai na
 vaise mujhe chottu ka shukriya karna chahiye ki usne yeh post padne ka mokka diya....agar woh purani post na search karta to shayad hum bhi us waqt ki mausam ke ahsaas na jaan pate kush raho tumhari dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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27th September 2007, 05:40 PM
Ke har mulakat tumsi kyu lagti hai Jaise rah gayi koi baat unkahi Kaise bataun mein tumse yeh kah du ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Kyaa baat hai... Aisa laga mere mann ki baat keh di ho Ke yeh preet ka bandhan hai kaisa Ek rishta yeh ki jiska koi naam nahi Kyu nahi tumko apna keh paati ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Kaash!!! very nicely expressed... Ke aankho ke darpan main basate ho yun Ek aansoo ban palko main hai chhup jate Ek moti ki tarah sanjo rakha hai ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si waaaaaaahhhh... beeautifull... Ke ek sapna ho to tum kuch aisa Jo toot jaata har subah adhura hi Khwaab main bhi puri na ho ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si hmmmm... nicely written.. Dearest Mausam, I just simply loved this post of yours... aisa laga jaise mere hi mann ki baat tumne likh di ho... it was very well expressed... manae tamaari aa kavita nae bhaav bahu j gamyo...  Keep writing.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th September 2007, 05:47 PM
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29th September 2007, 04:54 PM
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JAi mata di..... tum itni purani nazm dhundhke laye.....thanks... haan yeh nazm mere dil ke bhi bahut kareeb hain...par iska pura credit mera nahin hain....pata nahin kyun bhul gayi main is baat ko mention karna.....isse milti jhulti kuch kavita maine newspaper main padhi thi guj main..so thoda bahut translate kiya..aur apna add karke banayi......so uska adha credit us writer ko jaata hain jiska original hain..yeh........apna khyal rakhna... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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29th September 2007, 08:53 PM
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namaskar ek shandar gazal or ehsaso se rubaroo hone ka mouka mila Ke yeh preet ka bandhan hai kaisa Ek rishta yeh ki jiska koi naam nahi Kyu nahi tumko apna keh paati ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si sach kaha hai aapne is jamane main hote hai kuch riste jinka koi naam to nahi hota per fir bhii wo riste bade khas hote hain. or koi hamara bilkul khas hote huye bhii use hum apna nahi kah paate ........... ehsaso se bharpoor is gazal per meri bar bar daad shukriyaa dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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thanks di for liking....haa waqt ke saath bahut kuch badal jaata hain....ehsaas to kabhi nahin marte par unko pura karne ka jazba thoda kam ho jaata hain....waqt ke saath priorties bhi badal jaati hain aur farz ke dayre mein hum aa jaate hain to uske mutalik kuch cheeze piche chod jaane main hi samjhdari hain kyun di????....haaan aap dhaval ka zaroor shukriya ada kare.... aapki... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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Aaj aapki yeh behad khoobsoorat rachna ek baar phir se padhi aur phir se bahut khushi hui.... kaise yeh rishte zindagi ka maksad ban jaate hain pata bhi nahi chalta... Aap yunhi mehfil me rang bharte rahiye Di.. Take Care.. ~Prii "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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...manae pan tamaro biji vaar jawab apvo gamyo(kuch samjh aaya)...thanks for re rereplying to my post...haan kai baar aisa lagta hain koi humare man ki baat hi keh raha hain....mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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2nd October 2007, 04:52 PM
Mausam...
Jetlu pyaru naam che tamaru atla j saras shabdo thi gazal sangari che tame, gana vakhat pachi ek saras gazal mali ke je dil ne radavi gayi, mausam, jadu che kadach tamra aa shabdo maa ke ek pathar ne pan pigadavi gayi... tamri lakheli badhi gazlo jo hoy to aa "pagal" ne moklava vinanti.... "ek Pagal" quote=mausam;81929]Ke har mulakat tumsi kyu lagti hai Jaise rah gayi koi baat unkahi Kaise bataun mein tumse yeh kah du ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Ke yeh preet ka bandhan hai kaisa Ek rishta yeh ki jiska koi naam nahi Kyu nahi tumko apna keh paati ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Ke aankho ke darpan main basate ho yun Ek aansoo ban palko main hai chhup jate Ek moti ki tarah sanjo rakha hai ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si Ke ek sapna ho to tum kuch aisa Jo toot jaata har subah adhura hi Khwaab main bhi puri na ho ke Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si[/quote] |
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3rd October 2007, 10:30 AM
Mausam ji
kese ho aap??? Mausam ji aapki ye rachna ko dekhke pehle to mujhe baRa dukh hua ki aapki itni behtareen rachna ko hum aaj paR pa rahe hai... bahut khub mausam ji bahut hi dard bhare ehsaason se rachna ko sajaya hai....saf nazar aa raha hai dard rachna ko padhte padhte.....kash wo padh pate aapke in ehsaason ko.. mehfil ko yuhi sajate rahiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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3rd October 2007, 11:01 AM
Kya baat hai 29, likhna kab se shuru kar diya?......bich me kaha chali gain thhi.....itni purani post padhne ko mili...wah wah......
Suran woman......likha bahot achha hai....bahot pasand aaya......shayad khayalo me likha hai...title bahot achha laga di.......baaki shayri ki tarif karti.......lekin late ho rahi hu...class aten karni hai na hahahahahahabye bye grazie Pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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4th October 2007, 05:12 AM
namaskaar mausam di
kya baat hai didi, cha gaye mehfil mein....padte padte yun laga k jaise apne khwaabon ko likha hai. bahut khub janab, dil ko chu gayi yeh pyaari si nazm. tag line is really really really good. daad hajir hai, kabul kijiye. apna khyaal rakeiyga aapka chota bhai manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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4th October 2007, 04:09 PM
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mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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6th October 2007, 05:12 PM
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Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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6th October 2007, 05:15 PM
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