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Love Marz-e-Muhabbat - 4th January 2015, 03:16 AM
Marz-e-muhabbat-O-Dard-e-jigar dikhaon kahan.
Tuzhse door gar jaun to jaun kahan

Fasale muhabbat me bhi sambhale hain tune
Sham-o-sehar tu bata hum mile kahan

Ujale ki oor chale to the do kadam hum tum
Gard andhere me kadam se kadam mile kahan.

Bebaak hasraten jinhne machalne ki aadath thi
Bus kuchli gayeen... hui poori kahan

Teri ulfat me jo khwab tuzhi ko dikhae the kabhi
Tu hi bata wo khwab mai jalaoon kahan

Bohot suna ye gair hone ka bahana mat bata
Bata dil cheer ke fir tuzhe dikhaoon kahan

Gar tuzhko nahi banaya khuda ne mere liye.
Fizool lagta hai kyoon tuzh bin sara jahan

Zamane ki fikr kabse tuzhe kabse anjaam ka dar
Jo bhushan ka yaar tha..vo aakhir hai kahan

..............Bhushan Joshi.................


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5th January 2015, 09:04 AM
bahot acchii lagi hame aapki ye koshhish bhushan saahab...........

bas ek iltijaa hai ke qaafiyaa radeef par thodaa dhyaan rakh kar likhaa kijiye... agar ehsaason ki baat karun to behad ummdah lage mujhe aapki kavita ke ehsaass....

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5th January 2015, 05:32 PM
Shaad bhai bohot bohot shukriya...

Aapse darkhwast hai ki koi galati ya behatari ki gunjaish lage meri koshish me to bilkul bezhizhak batayen........urdu jara kamjoor hai...agar koi alfaz galat ahsaas bayan kare...to bhi jaroor bade bhai ki tarah to the point batayen......aapne is peshkash ko itni tavajjo di...bohot bohot sukriya
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5th January 2015, 08:31 PM
Bhushan ji aadaab....

behad khushi huii ye jaankar ke aapko shaayarii kii gahraaai me utarne se koii gurez nahii ..... mujhe behad khushi huii ye jaankar ke aap seekhne sikhaane me yaqeen rakhte hain... hamaari site ke kuch shoraaon ne kuch mash'hoor notes daale hain pathshaala section me jo hamaare naye writers ko shaayri ki basic guideines samajhne me kaafii madadgaar saabit hue hain... aur mujhe yaqeen hai ke aapko bhi isse kaafi maddad haaasil hogii..... neeche likhi links ko waqt dijiye padhiye samajhiye aur agar koi zaruurat mahsoos ho to bejhijhak mujhse rabt kijiye.....
khaaksaar hamesha hi apne doston ke liye taiyaar rahta milegaa..... Insha Allah..


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6th January 2015, 02:55 PM
Shukriya Shaad bhai
Bohot hi faydemand links bheji aapne....
Maikash sahab ki link padhi......aage se technically
Sahi likhne ki koshish karunga......aur pathdhala behad faydemand forum hai...aaj tak kabhi dhyan nahi diya tha....bohot bohot shukriya

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6th January 2015, 03:05 PM
Bhusan bhai

Namaste

Aik achchhi Ghazal ke liye dil se daad qabul farmaayen..shaad bhai ki kahi huii baaton se main bhi sehmat huun...duaa hai zor-e-qalaam aur badhen ziyaadaah

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6th January 2015, 10:16 PM
Bohot bohot shukriya Dhaval bhai.....
Aapki daad sar aankhon par....hausala afzahi ka tahe dil se shukriya....

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11th January 2015, 03:05 PM
Very nice bhushan ji...likhte rahiye...


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Very nice bhushan ji...likhte rahiye...
Madhu ji namaste

Hausala afzahi ka tahe dil se shukriya.......karam banaye rakhe...

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