bahot acchii lagi hame aapki ye koshhish bhushan saahab...........
bas ek iltijaa hai ke qaafiyaa radeef par thodaa dhyaan rakh kar likhaa kijiye... agar ehsaason ki baat karun to behad ummdah lage mujhe aapki kavita ke ehsaass....
Aapse darkhwast hai ki koi galati ya behatari ki gunjaish lage meri koshish me to bilkul bezhizhak batayen........urdu jara kamjoor hai...agar koi alfaz galat ahsaas bayan kare...to bhi jaroor bade bhai ki tarah to the point batayen......aapne is peshkash ko itni tavajjo di...bohot bohot sukriya
Aapka apna
Bhushan
behad khushi huii ye jaankar ke aapko shaayarii kii gahraaai me utarne se koii gurez nahii ..... mujhe behad khushi huii ye jaankar ke aap seekhne sikhaane me yaqeen rakhte hain... hamaari site ke kuch shoraaon ne kuch mash'hoor notes daale hain pathshaala section me jo hamaare naye writers ko shaayri ki basic guideines samajhne me kaafii madadgaar saabit hue hain... aur mujhe yaqeen hai ke aapko bhi isse kaafi maddad haaasil hogii..... neeche likhi links ko waqt dijiye padhiye samajhiye aur agar koi zaruurat mahsoos ho to bejhijhak mujhse rabt kijiye.....
khaaksaar hamesha hi apne doston ke liye taiyaar rahta milegaa..... Insha Allah..
Shukriya Shaad bhai
Bohot hi faydemand links bheji aapne....
Maikash sahab ki link padhi......aage se technically
Sahi likhne ki koshish karunga......aur pathdhala behad faydemand forum hai...aaj tak kabhi dhyan nahi diya tha....bohot bohot shukriya
Aik achchhi Ghazal ke liye dil se daad qabul farmaayen..shaad bhai ki kahi huii baaton se main bhi sehmat huun...duaa hai zor-e-qalaam aur badhen ziyaadaah