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Na udaas ho tu -
25th December 2005, 09:13 PM
Kagaz mein likhkar tujhe de raha hoon
tu apni tammana ko rusva na karna, Bhale aandhiyan aake dastak bhi dein tow tu majboot haathon se rasta badalna. Bhale chaand kheenchey andhere ka pallu tu muskaan dekar ujaale ko taknaa, Chahe woh raaton mein taare dikhaaye tu aankhon ko apni ujaalon se dhakna. Yahi zindagi ke sahi maayne hain inhe apne sar se kabhi na hataana, Bhale koi lekar gumon ko hansaaye tera karm hai mushkilon ko hansaana. Akele-akeley hee kamre mein rehkar kabhi aankh se tu na paani bahaana, Zindagi yeh teri hai yeh rastey bhi tere tu rukna nahin bas kadam tu badaana. Udaasi hatadey tu chehre se apni nazdeek isko kabhi na bulaana, Kuch hee palon mein yeh maayur kardey tu iske nishaa ko nishaana banaana Manzilein jab milengi kadmon se teri utthaakar usse apne dil se lagaana, Safalta teri jab bhi mutthi mein aaye naya geet likh.kar usse gungunaana. Badi shaan se phir humey bhi sunaana. 
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Re: Na udaas ho tu -
25th December 2005, 09:31 PM
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Kadam kadam par mushikile aayegi Manzil bhi tujhko door tak nazar aayegi Magar ye yaar bas tu hosla rakhana Aankho mein saza kar wo sapna rakhna Ye waqt kabhi apna bhi hoga Andhera door hokar wo savera bhi Hamare ish chehre par bhi muskrahat aayegi Jin khushiyo se ab tak door the hum Wo jalad hi hamare daman mein chali aayegi....... Bohat khoob vipin bhai Behad hi khoobsurti se likha hai aapne Apka Diggaj Dave kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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Re: Na udaas ho tu -
25th December 2005, 10:42 PM
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aapne hamesha ki tarah bahaut khoobsurti se apni baat kahi hai.. aaj bahaut kuch seekhne mila aapki rachna se... yuhin likhte rahiyega..apna khyaal rakhiyega...  Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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26th December 2005, 12:39 AM
Vipin ji,
Very inspiring thoughts... parh ke achha laga. daad aur dua kubul karna, aur yun hi likhte rehna! take care! |
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26th December 2005, 12:53 AM
Wah vipin jee .... well said.... hamesha kee taran aapne bohut hee khoob likha hai ... bus yu hee likhte rahiye... thanks for sharing wonderful thought with all of us.
sager dharti ko aasma se milte huye, her pal dikh jati hai isliyat mujhe..... aur rah jata hoon bus yehi kahte huye...... shitiz yeh nahin hai, SAGER tere aasma se pyar ki |
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26th December 2005, 09:43 PM
Diggaj Ji,
Kadam kadam par mushikile aayegi Manzil bhi tujhko door tak nazar aayegi Magar ye yaar bas tu hosla rakhana Aankho mein saza kar wo sapna rakhna Ye waqt kabhi apna bhi hoga Andhera door hokar wo savera bhi Hamare ish chehre par bhi muskrahat aayegi Jin khushiyo se ab tak door the hum Wo jalad hi hamare daman mein chali aayegi....... Bahut accha laga aapko parhkar, aise hee likhtey rahiye. sach mein lajawaab hai. ====================== Farhana Ji, aapne mujhe phir se parha aur apne vichaar rakhey tow bahut khusi hui. dhanyavaad ============ Parul Ji, Aapki daad ko main sar jhukaakar qubool karta hoon. dhanyavaad ================= Sager Ji Koshish tow yahi hai ki main apne shabdon ko aap sab ke saath baanta rahun. shayad isse bahaane kabhi accha likh sakun aur aapko parha sakun. Dhanyavaaad Sager Ji
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26th December 2005, 11:49 PM
Akele-akeley hee kamre mein rehkar
kabhi aankh se tu na paani bahaana, Zindagi yeh teri hai yeh rastey bhi tere tu rukna nahin bas kadam tu badaana. hmmm....... mere vipin, tumhare is khayal ne dil mai jagah bana li.. tumhari meena |
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27th December 2005, 12:45 PM
Kagaz mein likhkar tujhe de raha hoon
tu apni tammana ko rusva na karna, Bhale aandhiyan aake dastak bhi dein tow tu majboot haathon se rasta badalna. Hmmm... nice words...! Bhale chaand kheenchey andhere ka pallu tu muskaan dekar ujaale ko taknaa, Chahe woh raaton mein taare dikhaaye tu aankhon ko apni ujaalon se dhakna. Waaah....Well said...! Yahi zindagi ke sahi maayne hain inhe apne sar se kabhi na hataana, Bhale koi lekar gumon ko hansaaye tera karm hai mushkilon ko hansaana. Well said...! Akele-akeley hee kamre mein rehkar kabhi aankh se tu na paani bahaana, Zindagi yeh teri hai yeh rastey bhi tere tu rukna nahin bas kadam tu badaana. Positive...Nice message...! Udaasi hatadey tu chehre se apni nazdeek isko kabhi na bulaana, Kuch hee palon mein yeh maayur kardey tu iske nishaa ko nishaana banaana Beautifull...! Manzilein jab milengi kadmon se teri utthaakar usse apne dil se lagaana, Safalta teri jab bhi mutthi mein aaye naya geet likh.kar usse gungunaana. Kya baat kahi hai...2 good....! Dear Vipin Bhai, Aapki kavita padhi, padhkar dil ko bahut khushi hui... Ek alag hi optimistic, positive attitude hai isme....accha laga ise padhkar...! Yun hi likhte rahiyega... Apna khayal rakhiye...! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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tarif-e-kabeel likha hai -
27th December 2005, 03:17 PM
very nice
humein bahut pasand aaya har lafz apni jagah barabar likha hai aapne keep it up God bless you duniyaa se dil lagaakar duniyaa se kyaa milegaa yaad-e-Khudaa kiye jaa tujh ko Khudaa milegaa |
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27th December 2005, 09:35 PM
Baba ji
Mujhe khusi ka ehsaas hua jab dekha ki aapne isko parha. Bahut bahut dhanyavaad.
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27th December 2005, 09:39 PM
Meena Ji,
Aapko Saadar Pranaam Is chotey se khayaal ne agar aapke dil mein jagah bana lee hai tow yeh saarthak ho gaya. ======== Pulkit ji Namaskaar Is sakaraatmak kavita ko aapne saraaha hai, bahut accha laga.
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16th February 2006, 09:44 PM
vipin
Akele-akeley hee kamre mein rehkar kabhi aankh se tu na paani bahaana, Zindagi yeh teri hai yeh rastey bhi tere tu rukna nahin bas kadam tu badaana. aaj fir is khayal ki yaad ne yaha dastak dena chaha.. so aa gayi . |
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17th February 2006, 07:07 PM
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Pranaam Meena ji accha laga aapne isse fir parha. aapka bahaut bahaut dhanyavaad.
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