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The Most Beautiful Moment, I've Ever Been Through!, - 3rd March 2013, 10:37 PM



The Most Beautiful Moment, I've Ever Been Through!



I open up my eyes, under a clear blue sky,
I lay in grassy bed, by the lakeside!

Sweet sounds of birds, chirping on a tree,
Never ever before, found myself so free!

Free from the constant, worries and strife,
Here every living being, has got a free life!

Crisp fresh air, filling up my chest,
If life is a wave, am riding its crest!

I take a few steps, and reach a waterfall,
The beauty of the sight, couldn't help but enthrall!

Slow and gentle breeze, going through the trees,
Fragrant vibrant flowers, beckoning the bees!

For all this was a dream, wish it comes true,
Most beautiful moment, I've ever been through!,





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7th March 2013, 12:02 PM

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The Most Beautiful Moment, I've Ever Been Through!



I open up my eyes, under a clear blue sky,
I lay in grassy bed, by the lakeside!

Sweet sounds of birds, chirping on a tree,
Never ever before, found myself so free!

Free from the constant, worries and strife,
Here every living being, has got a free life!

Crisp fresh air, filling up my chest,
If life is a wave, am riding its crest!

I take a few steps, and reach a waterfall,
The beauty of the sight, couldn't help but enthrall!

Slow and gentle breeze, going through the trees,
Fragrant vibrant flowers, beckoning the bees!

For all this was a dream, wish it comes true,
Most beautiful moment, I've ever been through!,



Beautiful indeed......

Some Dreams do come true.....

InshaAllah....




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7th March 2013, 09:08 PM

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Beautiful indeed......

Some Dreams do come true.....

InshaAllah....

Aameen!
Thank You Sis!
Yes they do and am ever so thankful to The Almighty for everything!

Wish everyone's just dreams do come true as well!



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main bhi kuch isi tarah socha karta tha ..... kash sab kuch alag thalag hokar waqt aisa hi rehta....... meri imaginary world to bilkul cartoon ki tarah hoti ........


Slow and gentle breeze, going through the trees,
Fragrant vibrant flowers, beckoning the bees!

kya khushbu he inn lines me waah waah ..........

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14th April 2013, 12:22 PM

A beautiful dream indeed, Ahmad bhai.
Abdul Kalam (former president ) has said..
Dream,dream, dream. Convert your dreams into thoughts.
And convert your thoughts into action.

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main bhi kuch isi tarah socha karta tha ..... kash sab kuch alag thalag hokar waqt aisa hi rehta....... meri imaginary world to bilkul cartoon ki tarah hoti ........


Slow and gentle breeze, going through the trees,
Fragrant vibrant flowers, beckoning the bees!

kya khushbu he inn lines me waah waah ..........

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Aadaab Rohit Jee! Khushaamdeed!

good to know about your beautiful thoughts! You know when Iwas a kid, I used to just stare at the nature and landscape paintings of my Dad( one of his hobbies) and wish to go inside them and experience the beauty in them.

Thank You for your visit as well as kind words of encouragement! And sorry for the delay in thanking ya!


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A beautiful dream indeed, Ahmad bhai.
Abdul Kalam (former president ) has said..
Dream,dream, dream. Convert your dreams into thoughts.
And convert your thoughts into action.

Sanjay Sehgal
Aadaab Sehgal Saahab!

Ever so glad to see you here Sir!

Thank You for your appreciation and sharing those inspiring words with us! Very motivating indeed are they! Thanks once again and waiting for your next posting in this section, surely your safe isn't empty yet!


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an effusive and exuberant celebration of nature and the simple pleasures it affords.....how it fills the heart with pleasure free for the taking

an age old matchless experience, vividly fills the canvas

beautiful composition Ahmad bhai....really liked and enjoyed


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an effusive and exuberant celebration of nature and the simple pleasures it affords.....how it fills the heart with pleasure free for the taking

an age old matchless experience, vividly fills the canvas

beautiful composition Ahmad bhai....really liked and enjoyed
Aadaab Doctor Saahab!!
Sorry for the delay in expressing my gratitude... am truly humbled by your kind words.... to hear such generous words from a master like you is truly a humbling experience!! Thanks a million Sir..... much obliged!!


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Ahmad bhai ,
Where on the earth do u disappear ..
Maybe your whispers I cant hear,
But your memories do bring tears
just think I also exist on this forum my dear.

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Awesome Ahmad Bhai,
It's a dream which most people wish of..
U have penned it down awesomely..
Reading it was a pleasure as it brought forward pictures to thoughts of my mind..
It is a happy feeling reading your poetry..
Keep writing..


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Mesmerising.....i can actually relate to your dream ahmadji what an extremely beautiful expression and composition.....do keep writing such poems u r very good at it
Aadaab Sis,
I am humbled by your kind words of appreciation. Thank You so much for your visit as well as your encouragement Sis!! Just penned what was yearning for after at times feeling suffocated by life in dense city with all the usual strife and ills etc...

Thanks once again Sis!


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Ahmad bhai ,
Where on the earth do u disappear ..
Maybe your whispers I cant hear,
But your memories do bring tears
just think I also exist on this forum my dear.

S.S
Aadaab Sanjay Sahab,

First of all please accept my sincere apologies for the delay in replying. I thank you for your kind and deeply affectionate praise. Sir, you don just exist on this earth you "Thrive" in our hearts here! Sorry for disappearing Sir, dar asal was overseas visiting my family and wasn't free for a moment would be an understatement....

Thank You once again for your kind affection Sir.


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Awesome Ahmad Bhai,
It's a dream which most people wish of..
U have penned it down awesomely..
Reading it was a pleasure as it brought forward pictures to thoughts of my mind..
It is a happy feeling reading your poetry..
Keep writing..
Aadaab Prince Bhaee,

I thank You for your kind and generous appreciation. Its more than a reward for me to learn that my humble words could help feel someone happy. Thank You so much bhaee once again!


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