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Dohe ka jawab dohe se....

jeevan ke din rain kaa , kaise lage hisaab
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hum bhi ek doha likh de....

divas gavaya khai ke, rain gavaye soye,
heera janam amul hai, kodi badle jaye...!


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hum bhi ek doha likh de....

divas gavaya khai ke, rain gavaye soye,
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mujhe dohe nahin aate so main phir se sher hi se start karti hoon.....

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yeh meri likhi hue gazal ka hi ek sher hai:

Siyah shab maine gujari jaag kar,
teri yaad tadpati rahi shab-bhar

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yeh meri likhi hue gazal ka hi ek sher hai:

Siyah shab maine gujari jaag kar,
teri yaad tadpati rahi shab-bhar

-sunita virender
zikr-e-shab-e-firaaq se vahashat use bhii thii
merii tarah kisii se muhabbat use bhii thii

[zikr-e-shab-e-firaaq = mention of the night of separation]
[vahashat = fear/dread]


Yeh wafaa ke sakht raahen, yeh tumhare paao naazuk
Na lo inteqam mujhse mere saath saath chal ke.....

Dil diya thaa to muqader bhee ataa kar detey,
warna taqhlik se pehley he fanaa kar detey,
tumne samajhi hee nahi ishq kee azmat warna,
hum tumhey ek he sajdey main khudaa kar detey...

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zikr-e-shab-e-firaaq se vahashat use bhii thii
merii tarah kisii se muhabbat use bhii thii

[zikr-e-shab-e-firaaq = mention of the night of separation]
[vahashat = fear/dread]
bahut khoob dost

likhkar naam tera haath par humne chuppa liya,
dunia na raaj jaan le, palko ka parda gira liya...

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bahut khoob dost

likhkar naam tera haath par humne chuppa liya,
dunia na raaj jaan le, palko ka parda gira liya...

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very good

Jo aakar gire daaman pe sabaa woh ashq nahi woh paani hai,
Jo ashq na chhalke palko se us ashq kee keemat hoti hai....

Gulshan kee faqt phoolon se nahi kaanto se bhee zeenat hoti hai,
jeeney ke liye is duniya main gam kee bhee zaroorat hoti hai....


Yeh wafaa ke sakht raahen, yeh tumhare paao naazuk
Na lo inteqam mujhse mere saath saath chal ke.....

Dil diya thaa to muqader bhee ataa kar detey,
warna taqhlik se pehley he fanaa kar detey,
tumne samajhi hee nahi ishq kee azmat warna,
hum tumhey ek he sajdey main khudaa kar detey...

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Palkein bhi chamak uthti hain sote main hamari..
Ankhon ko abhi khwab chupane nahin aate


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by...bashir badr
ankho mein jo bhar logey to kanto.n se chubeygey,
eh dost, yeh khaab begane hai.n aapne nahi.....!

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ankho mein jo bhar logey to kanto.n se chubeygey,
eh dost, yeh khaab begane hai.n aapne nahi.....!

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Gulshan Ki Faqat Phoolon Se Nahin Kaanton Se Bhi Zeenat Hoti Hai
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aap ke Sher ka jawaab :

Gulshan Ki Faqat Phoolon Se Nahin Kaanton Se Bhi Zeenat Hoti Hai
Jeene Ke Liye Iss Dunia Mein Gham Ki Bhi Zaroorat Hoti Hai
Phool ke murjhaane pe kali dekhi nahi jaati..
Do dilon ke darmiyan doori dekhi nahi jaati..
Khuda unke hisse ke gam bhi mujhko de de..
Ki un maasoom aankhon me nami dekhi nahi jaati..

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Do dilon ke darmiyan doori dekhi nahi jaati..
Khuda unke hisse ke gam bhi mujhko de de..
Ki un maasoom aankhon me nami dekhi nahi jaati..

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faasalaa to hai magar ko_ii faasalaa nahii.n
mujhase tum judaa sahii dil se to judaa nahii.n

Ujale apni yaadon ke hamare saath rehne do
Najaane kis gali mein zindagi k shaam ho jaye..


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Ujale apni yaadon ke hamare saath rehne do
Najaane kis gali mein zindagi k shaam ho jaye..

tuune dekhaa hai kabhii ek nazar shaam ke baad
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tuune dekhaa hai kabhii ek nazar shaam ke baad
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Jab raat hui shaam ke baad...Teri yaad aayi har baat ke baad
Maine khamosh rehkar bhi dekha..Teri awaaz aayi meri har saans ke baad


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Jab raat hui shaam ke baad...Teri yaad aayi har baat ke baad
Maine khamosh rehkar bhi dekha..Teri awaaz aayi meri har saans ke baad
yaade.n chalii.n Khayaal chalaa ashk-e-tar chale
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ek rangiin jhijhak ek saadaa payaam
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ek rangiin jhijhak ek saadaa payaam
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jab naam teraa pyaar se likhatii hain ungaliyaan
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main jab tumhara naam leta hoon to log mujhe jaan jate hain
main ek khoyee huyii cheez hoon jiska pata tum ho.......... (NM)


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main jab tumhara naam leta hoon to log mujhe jaan jate hain
main ek khoyee huyii cheez hoon jiska pata tum ho.......... (NM)
Bahut khoob...

Dil lagane kii yeh but ajab sazaa detey hain, gam juda ranj juda detey hain,
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Yeh wafaa ke sakht raahen, yeh tumhare paao naazuk
Na lo inteqam mujhse mere saath saath chal ke.....

Dil diya thaa to muqader bhee ataa kar detey,
warna taqhlik se pehley he fanaa kar detey,
tumne samajhi hee nahi ishq kee azmat warna,
hum tumhey ek he sajdey main khudaa kar detey...

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Woh kahani jo kabhi humne likhi thi khoon se
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"Milla baharo.n ko fareb teri be-rukhi se, verna
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yeh hum hain ya chaaya hai mausam gham ka??
yeh tum ho ya aayi hai mausam-e-bahaar??


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yeh hum hain ya chaaya hai mausam gham ka??
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main chandan ka ped nahi thi, phir kyu..?
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main chandan ka ped nahi thi, phir kyu..?
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Tammanaa ped ki kee toh chhayon se bhee gaye, tumharey shehar main aaye toh gaayon se bhee gaye,

tumhare shehar main chehron ka jaal kaisaa hai, kisi ne yeh bhee na poochhaa ke haal kaisaa hai.....


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Tammanaa ped ki kee toh chhayon se bhee gaye, tumharey shehar main aaye toh gaayon se bhee gaye,

tumhare shehar main chehron ka jaal kaisaa hai, kisi ne yeh bhee na poochhaa ke haal kaisaa hai.....


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yehi kehtaa hai "dhaval" apneY parbardiGaar seY
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Bhulii bisrii chand ummiiden chand fasaane yaad aaye
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Yaad woh nahi jo tanhaayi main yaad aaye,
yaad woh hai jo bheed main bhee tanhaa kar de....


Yeh wafaa ke sakht raahen, yeh tumhare paao naazuk
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Dil diya thaa to muqader bhee ataa kar detey,
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wow...too good.


jab tere saath beetey pal yaad aatey hai.n,
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jab tere saath beetey pal yaad aatey hai.n,
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