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Kar Ke Fanah Mujhko Abh Tu Rota Kyun Hai -
5th January 2006, 10:26 AM
Dosto Aaj Baithe Baithe Pata Nahi Kyun Ye Khayal Dil Main Utar Gaye.........aur kalam ne ye gazal tyaar kar di.........
sayad aapko pasand aaye............issiliye post kar rahi hun.......aapke views ke intezaar main...... Kar Ke Fanah Mujhko Abh Tu Rota Kyun Hai Apne Chehre Ko Aanso.on Se Bhigota Kyun Hai Teri Har Raaja Mein Maine Jukaya Hai Sar Ko Tu Mere Marne Pe Phir Maasus Hota Kyun Hai Teri Hi Tuh Khushi Chahi Thi Maine Humesha Phir Bhi Aaj Aansuon Se Ye Samjota Kyun Hai Mere Baad Bhi Hai Mehfilein Tere Liye Hazaron Karke Barbad Hume Virano Mein Khota Kyun Hai Maar Dala Usne Mere Pyaar Ko Gair Ki Khatir Aaj Uske Marta Pyaar Dekh Dard Hota Kyun Hai Dekh Ke Tanha Aaj Bhi Uss Bewafa Ko Najaane Dil Mera Kabar Mein Bhi Uske Liye Rota Kyun Hai Kar Ke Fanah Mujhko Abh Tu Rota Kyun Hai Apne Chehre Ko Aanso.on Se Bhigota Kyun Hai |
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Re: Kar Ke Fanah Mujhko Abh Tu Rota Kyun Hai -
5th January 2006, 10:33 AM
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Bohat khoob sandhaya Bada hi umda kalam hai tumhara Mujhe ek gazal yaad aa gayi "Tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to Ye haq hai tumko Meri baat aur hai maine to Mohabbat ki hai" Diggaj dave kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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5th January 2006, 10:42 AM
Sukhriya Diggaj Ji......meri nazm ko pasand karne ke liye.........aate rahiyega......
Duaon Ne Teri Meri Duniya Kuch YUn Saaja Di Maine CHaha Jo TUne Usme APni Dua Miladi |
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Re: Kar Ke Fanah Mujhko Abh Tu Rota Kyun Hai -
5th January 2006, 01:10 PM
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meena sweetu  sach me tum behad khoobsoorat likhti ho.. day by day u r getting just perfectttt... no words to say..likhti rehna bass yu hi take care ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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5th January 2006, 03:05 PM
sandhaya JI ;
Bahut hi KHUBSURAT likha hai apne Kar Ke Fanah Mujhko Abh Tu Rota Kyun Hai Apne Chehre Ko Aanso.on Se Bhigota Kyun Hai . . . . Ek tu hi to tha jo har pal meri Maut ki Dua karta tha, Puri ho gayi teri Khawahish ab tu Pachhtata Kyun hai..... Ki tere liye mera jina koi mayne nahi rakhta tha, Fir Aaj meri Mazaar pe aake Tu Theharta kyun hai |
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5th January 2006, 11:11 PM
Kar Ke Fanah Mujhko Abh Tu Rota Kyun Hai
Apne Chehre Ko Aanso.on Se Bhigota Kyun Hai Teri Har Raaja Mein Maine Jukaya Hai Sar Ko Tu Mere Marne Pe Phir Maasus Hota Kyun Hai Waaaaaaaaahhhh....Khoobsurat aagaz hai ghazal kaa! Teri Hi Tuh Khushi Chahi Thi Maine Humesha Phir Bhi Aaj Aansuon Se Ye Samjota Kyun Hai Mere Baad Bhi Hai Mehfilein Tere Liye Hazaron Karke Barbad Hume Virano Mein Khota Kyun Hai Waaaaaahhhhh....! Maar Dala Usne Mere Pyaar Ko Gair Ki Khatir Aaj Uske Marta Pyaar Dekh Dard Hota Kyun Hai Dekh Ke Tanha Aaj Bhi Uss Bewafa Ko Najaane Dil Mera Kabar Mein Bhi Uske Liye Rota Kyun Hai hmmmmmmmm...! Kar Ke Fanah Mujhko Abh Tu Rota Kyun Hai Apne Chehre Ko Aanso.on Se Bhigota Kyun Hai Waaah...! Sanshya, apki yeh ghazla padhkar munh se Waah ke alaawa kucch nikal hi nahi raha...khoobsurat bayaani hai...Daad kubool kijiyega... Likhti rahiye...! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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6th January 2006, 01:39 AM
sandhya
Kalam ki tareef maiN main kya kahun chota muhN badi baat ho jayegi.. tumhare is kalaam maiN jo sabse acchi baat lagti hai wo ye ki tum tum jitni gehrai e khayal rakhti ho .. utne hi lihaz se unhe kalaam maIn alfazoN se sajaati ho .. ye apne aap maiN ek badi baat hai.. ab kis sher ke liye khash kahuN.. ek ko padha to dora kam nazar aaya doosre ke samne teesra .. bohat accha laga tumhara ye kalaam mujh naachez ki daad kabool karo.. tumhara apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th January 2006, 01:46 AM
sandhya ji
aapki ghazal behad sunder hain aur dard se bharpur.har sher se dard chalakta hain aur sunderta bhi.byeee marane kii duaaye.n kyuu.N maa.Nguu.N jiine kii tamaannaa kaun kare ye duniyaa ho yaa vo duniyaa ab Khvaahish-e-duniyaa kaun kare jo aag lagaaii thii tum ne us ko to bujhaayaa ashko.n ne jo ashko.n ke bha.Dakaaii hai us aag ko Tha.nDaa kaun kare jab kashtii saabit-o-saalib thii, saahil kii tamannaa kisako thii ab aisii shikastaa kashtii me.n saahil kii tamannaa kaun kare duniyaa ne hame.n chho.Daa ai dil, ham chho.D na de kyo.n duniyaa ko duniyaa ko samajh kar baiThe hai.n ab duniyaa duniyaa kaun kare -Moen Ahsan Jazbi |
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6th January 2006, 12:21 PM
Hi Pallavi .........kaisi ho...tumhe apni post pe dekh kar bahut acha laga...........aur usper tumhare alfaaz kya kehne......thanks dera..mera hausla badhane ke liye.........aati rehna....
Sukhriya Khilona Ji.pasand karne ke liye........and Nice Lines Also.........keep reading... Pulkit Ji .....aap Tuh Jante Hai ...ki Mujhe Aapka Tariff ka andaaz bahut acha lagta hai.aapke andaaz pe waah kehna chaungi.......aapko meri kosish pasand aai ......mujhe bahut khushi hui ye janker.........aapne views se navajte rahiyega...... Hi Kunal ......Tumhe kya kahun main.......kuch bhi kehte ho......... bas tumhe apni post pe dekh dil khush ho gaya......aur janab aapko pasand aai yahi kafi hai mere liye.......Tc.......aate rehna... And Deep Ji......aap aapne m ere liye wakt nikala uske liye sukhriya..........aapko pasand aaya meri kosish safal ho gai.......aate rahiyega....... Duaon ka Asar Dekho .... Mera Dard-E-Safar Dekho Khushi Se Kat Raha Jaise HUi Uski Meher Dekho |
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