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gum & khushi - 18th April 2007, 05:40 AM

dosto jo likha hai, wo rhyme to nahi karta, par jo dil ne kaha bus likh diya....


gum is baat ka rehega.....k aapne humein apna dushman samja
khushi is baat ki rahegi.....k humara tumhara koi rishta to hai


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



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18th April 2007, 09:59 AM

wah ji wah

shayad main samajh sakta hun in lines mein kitna dard hai sach mein dil ko chhoo gayi yeh lines.





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18th April 2007, 04:45 PM

hello jasdeep g,
kaise hain app? humein kaffi khushi k app humara dard in elfaazon me samaj sake. khushi aur b hui k is ehsaas ki dwara hum apke k dil ko chu sake. umeeb karenge ge, k aane wale ehsaason ko b aap itna hi pyaar denge.
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18th April 2007, 04:52 PM

Its Very Nice
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19th April 2007, 08:04 AM

ham aapki agli nazam ka intezaar karenge janab



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19th April 2007, 05:10 PM

humein umeed hai, humari aane wale ehsaas b apki umeedon par khade uternge. humein umeed hai app use b itna hi pyaar denge.
thanku 4 ur motivation and very kind words
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21st April 2007, 04:34 AM

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hi marro g,
hw r u? apko humara likha pasand aya, humein yhe jankar bahut khushi hui. sorry for the late reply. maffi kijiye. aap humare aane wale ehsaason ko b aise hi pasand karenge...yhe dhua hai meri.

thanks 4 ur kind words

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