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har rishta ek khilona hai - 8th January 2006, 08:10 PM

har rishta ek khilona hai
tum ko bhee gum hona hai

tum oonche chand se age ho
mera pyar to bauna hai

ahsan kiya jo khab diye
har sapna khoob salona hai

tera daman bhee tab chor diya
kya pata tha itana rona hai

jab door huye tum pas mile
ye kaisa jadoo tona hai

ye pak se ansoo jab aye
tab bhool gaye man dhona hai

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8th January 2006, 09:36 PM

Hi.. Achha likha hai aapne.. keep writing


Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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thanks garima - 8th February 2006, 07:02 AM

thanks bas likhtee rahana meree shayree ke bare main
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hi - 8th February 2006, 09:49 AM

incredible...lovely.....keep writing


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Re: har rishta ek khilona hai - 8th February 2006, 10:07 AM

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har rishta ek khilona hai
tum ko bhee gum hona hai

tum oonche chand se age ho
mera pyar to bauna hai

ahsan kiya jo khab diye
har sapna khoob salona hai

tera daman bhee tab chor diya
kya pata tha itana rona hai

jab door huye tum pas mile
ye kaisa jadoo tona hai

ye pak se ansoo jab aye
tab bhool gaye man dhona hai

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parh ke batayen kaisee hai?
anil ji
sunder ehsas , har rista ek khilon hai sahi kahe rahe hain
aur bichre riste yaad aate rahte hai
pyar ko khoob jataya hai aapne
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Re: har rishta ek khilona hai - 8th February 2006, 10:24 AM

ahsan kiya jo khab diye
har sapna khoob salona hai

tera daman bhee tab chor diya
kya pata tha itana rona hai


masoom saheb
kya baat hai,,chote behr mein badi baatein keh gaye aap...bahoot pasand aayi aapki yeh gazal.aapki is rachna ko padh kar mujhe kisi jamane mein likhi apni ek rachna dhayan mein aa gayi,,jismein yehi kuch jazbaat meine bhi kahe the..mulaaiza farmaiye....



kisi ko saathi mila hai kisi ko saaya
kahin andhera hai to kahin ujala

kuch raahon mein bichti hai palkein
kuch raahgir hote hai aawara

koi sota hai zulfon ki chaon mein
jaagta hai koi besahara

ek karta hai ibaadat pyar ki
duja talashta hai shivala

saagar sabko milta nahin yahan
parbat jaisa hai kinara

shamma bujhti hai kahin raat ko
dil jalne ka kahin hai nazara


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shukriya - 8th February 2006, 10:35 AM

shukriya sharddha tum bahut pyar se parhtee ho shayree meree
meree shayree pyaree ho jatee hai

anupriya tumhe achha lagana bahut baree baat hai kyon ke tum khud bahut hee kamal kee gahree soch walee shayara ho

aur manoj tumhare remark se zyada tumhree ghazal pe khayal gaya wah kya baat likhee hai aur bhayee jab tum mujhe apnee ghazal sunaya karo kisee aur ke nam se sunaya karo karan ye hai ki tum itne achhe lagate ho ki bura bhee likhoge to bura nahee lag sakat mujhe kisee aur ka nam likha hoga to kam se kam ek munsif kee tarah faisala to kar sakoonga par bahut pyara likha hai site pe liho ise wahan remarks dete hain
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19th March 2006, 07:44 AM

tera daman bhee tab chor diya
kya pata tha itana rona hai

jab door huye tum pas mile
ye kaisa jadoo tona hai


anil ji aapki yeh lines pad ke mujhe bhi kuch bhula sa yaad aa gaya.....kisi ne is ko bahut hi khubsurti se kaha hai ki..........

jo bhi dukh yaad na tha,yaad aayaa,
aaj kya janeeye kya -kya yaad aaya,
yeh mohbat bhi hai kya rog........
jisko bhule woh sada yaad aaya...........

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19th March 2006, 09:19 AM

accha kahu to tareef kam ho jayegi .................................. bahut hi badiya anil bhai
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ranju - 19th March 2006, 12:45 PM

jinhe main likh ke bhool chuka tum kayee baar talash kar letee ho tum parhtee ho to mehul bhee parh leta hai meree kavita dobara se jaise jag jatee hai shukriya
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19th March 2006, 01:14 PM

tera daman bhee tab chor diya
kya pata tha itana rona hai

labon ke pass aaya pyaala humne chor diya
tab yeh jaana na tha ke talab aaj itni hogi.

(bas ise padh ke hi abhi soojha)

jab door huye tum pas mile
ye kaisa jadoo tona hai


kisi ke door jaane ke baad yaadein jab gher leti hai to smajh nahi aata yeh jadoo hai yaa kyaa ?
aapke likhi kavita ke in do tukdo ne to kamaal hi kar dia.waise kamaal to har jagah hai par har lekhak ko kuch aur dikhta hai
aapki yeh rachna ne dil ko kisi muqaam pe laa ke khara kar dia jahan ek aashiq kisi ke liye dua likhta hai ya bad dua is baat ka fark karna mushkil ho jaata hai.bass yun hi dil ko choote ahsaas bayan karte jaaiye.

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GKS - 19th March 2006, 01:19 PM

tumahre remarks mujeh kya fayada huya ek bahut pyara sa reamrk mil gaya mujhe aur ek bahut sunder sher mere link ke sath jur gaya aur jo tum ne kaha us ne meree shayree ko aur sundar kar diya, parhe ja raha hoon bar bar
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17th July 2007, 07:38 AM

bahut bahut dil se shukriya anupriya meree nazmon ko samjhne ke liye
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manoj tumhara hosla badhana sada achha lagata hai par aj kal kahan ho?
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17th July 2007, 02:41 PM

har rishta ek khilona hai
tum ko bhee gum hona hai

AAj hi rishte pe kuch likhna chaha tha..sirf do lines likhi thi age nahin likh payi..aapko sunati hoon...

Rishte gar tut bhi jaye to kya
unki garmahat dard bankar sulagti hai

jitna bhi unse dur jaye
wohi yadein dil ko lubhati hai


ahsan kiya jo khab diye
har sapna khoob salona hai very nice.....

tera daman bhee tab chor diya
kya pata tha itana rona hai yeh bhi bahut khub...

bahut hi badhiya likha hain apne anilji........humari daad....aise hi ate rehna...

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har rishta ek khilona hai
tum ko bhee gum hona hai

tum oonche chand se age ho
mera pyar to bauna hai

ahsan kiya jo khab diye
har sapna khoob salona hai

tera daman bhee tab chor diya
kya pata tha itana rona hai

jab door huye tum pas mile
ye kaisa jadoo tona hai

ye pak se ansoo jab aye
tab bhool gaye man dhona hai

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anil ji bohat hi zaberdast tehreer lagi aapki is tehreer ke her sher main aik gehra dard chupa hai ......ye ashaar khoob lagay......

tum oonche chand se age ho
mera pyar to bauna hai

tera daman bhee tab chor diya
kya pata tha itana rona hai

jab door huye tum pas mile
ye kaisa jadoo tona hai

yunhi likhte rahiye khush rahiye ......


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3rd October 2007, 01:00 PM

mausam bahut hee achee baat likhee hai tum ne bhee shukriya

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namaskaar anil ji

bahut acha likha hai apne. straightforward writing. yuhin likte rahein aur khush rahein

aapka dost

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har rishta ek khilona hai
tum ko bhee gum hona hai

tum oonche chand se age ho
mera pyar to bauna hai

ahsan kiya jo khab diye
har sapna khoob salona hai

tera daman bhee tab chor diya
kya pata tha itana rona hai

jab door huye tum pas mile
ye kaisa jadoo tona hai

ye pak se ansoo jab aye
tab bhool gaye man dhona hai

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