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Aaj sirf sharaab mat pila saaki - 4th October 2007, 04:14 AM

kuch likha hai uss cheez par jo kabhi bewaffai nahi karti.....
gaur farmeyein:


Aaj sirf sharaab mat pila saaki
Sharaab mein thoda zehar mila saaki
Hoothon ko chum lene de yeh jaam
Isse tu abb aur mat chalka saaki

Band karde maikhane k darwaje saaki
Aaj ki raat mere naam karde saaki
Mere naseeb mein iss raat ki subah nahi
Zehar mila aur phir se jaam barde saaki

Juban se hum bolna nahi chahte saaki
Uska naam abb labon par nahi late saaki
Mat le tu mera jaam mere haathon se
Sharaab kissi k saamne se nahi hathate saaki

Baahar aangaan kuch phool hain saaki
Unhe kabhi khilta hua dekh saaki
Main b ek phool ki tarah hun
Aaj mujhe murjata hua dekh saaki…………


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



Darkness falls on me like rain...
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4th October 2007, 10:43 AM

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kuch likha hai uss cheez par jo kabhi bewaffai nahi karti.....
gaur farmeyein:


Aaj sirf sharaab mat pila saaki
Sharaab mein thoda zehar mila saaki
Hoothon ko chum lene de yeh jaam
Isse tu abb aur mat chalka saaki

Band karde maikhane k darwaje saaki
Aaj ki raat mere naam karde saaki
Mere naseeb mein iss raat ki subah nahi
Zehar mila aur phir se jaam barde saaki

Juban se hum bolna nahi chahte saaki
Uska naam abb labon par nahi late saaki
Mat le tu mera jaam mere haathon se
Sharaab kissi k saamne se nahi hathate saaki

Baahar aangaan kuch phool hain saaki
Unhe kabhi khilta hua dekh saaki
Main b ek phool ki tarah hun
Aaj mujhe murjata hua dekh saaki…………

munna kaya likha hai yeh....aur kis vajha se likha hai aisa....mujhe bilkul pasand nahi aaye yeh ahsaas...dil ko dukhi kar diya tune....

maiN to hamesha dua karti karti hoon ki tum kush raho aur tum ho ki...


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....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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5th October 2007, 03:24 AM

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kuch likha hai uss cheez par jo kabhi bewaffai nahi karti.....
gaur farmeyein:


Aaj sirf sharaab mat pila saaki
Sharaab mein thoda zehar mila saaki
Hoothon ko chum lene de yeh jaam
Isse tu abb aur mat chalka saaki

Band karde maikhane k darwaje saaki
Aaj ki raat mere naam karde saaki
Mere naseeb mein iss raat ki subah nahi
Zehar mila aur phir se jaam barde saaki

Juban se hum bolna nahi chahte saaki
Uska naam abb labon par nahi late saaki
Mat le tu mera jaam mere haathon se
Sharaab kissi k saamne se nahi hathate saaki

Baahar aangaan kuch phool hain saaki
Unhe kabhi khilta hua dekh saaki
Main b ek phool ki tarah hun
Aaj mujhe murjata hua dekh saaki…………
Pyare Manish..

Main bhi Sunita Di ki baat se sehmat hun.. yeh kya likha aur kyun likha? itna dard?

Aur yeh tum kya keh rahe ho ki sharaab kabhi bewaafi nahi karti... arre sharaab to aise cheez hai jo aapni zindagi ki baaki har cheez se aapki bewafaai karva degi.. yeh to bewafaai ki jadd hai, jo ise peene vaale ke andar hi janam le leti hai... isse door hi rehna humesha mere bhai..

Apna khayal rakho, aur humesha khush raho!

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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kuch likha hai uss cheez par jo kabhi bewaffai nahi karti.....
gaur farmeyein:


Aaj sirf sharaab mat pila saaki
Sharaab mein thoda zehar mila saaki
Hoothon ko chum lene de yeh jaam
Isse tu abb aur mat chalka saaki

Band karde maikhane k darwaje saaki
Aaj ki raat mere naam karde saaki
Mere naseeb mein iss raat ki subah nahi
Zehar mila aur phir se jaam barde saaki

Juban se hum bolna nahi chahte saaki
Uska naam abb labon par nahi late saaki
Mat le tu mera jaam mere haathon se
Sharaab kissi k saamne se nahi hathate saaki

Baahar aangaan kuch phool hain saaki
Unhe kabhi khilta hua dekh saaki
Main b ek phool ki tarah hun
Aaj mujhe murjata hua dekh saaki…………
oye hoye Manish bhai kya likh diya kamaal kardiya apne kuch pee ker ya ese hi likh diya behrahaal jis bhi tarha likha hai umda likha hai daad hazir hai


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wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
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9th October 2007, 05:22 PM

hey mr ishq not bad
par yeh kya aisi duniya me koi cheez hai hi nahi jo
bewaffai na kare phir sharab kya agar is ka nasha
ho jaye to na mil ne par yeh bhi bewafaai ka alam
zindagi me le hi aati hai
aur jaisa hamne kaha aisi koi cheez nahi duniya me jo bewafaa na ho
hamari apni sansein hi kitni bewafaa hoti hain
jaane kab saath chor dein pata hi nahi
jab saans bewafaa hai to aur koi cheez ka bewafaa hone
par kya ghum
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and do not write such sad things
because you are not like that
you are just the best friend someone can have
doosron ko advice dene wale jab aisa likhen
to doosre to bohat jald himmat har jaaein ge
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Dear TJ

i have edited your post because you had used words which are not appropriate for the environment of this forum, please keep such things to private messages

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Unko chaha hai unko chahein ge
wade jo kiye te woh nibhayein ge

ho kar kisi aur ke bhi rahein ge unhi ke
ham chahein haar jaayen hamara pyaar nahi haare

jism chahe ho jaye kisi aur ka
dil to hai unka aur unhi ka rehe ga

mil sakein na woh aur ham kahin
phir bhi joodhre hain unka mera dil kahin

jaante hain ham mera kal koi aur hai
par phir bhi HUMKO UNSE PYAR HAI

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kuch likha hai uss cheez par jo kabhi bewaffai nahi karti.....
gaur farmeyein:


Aaj sirf sharaab mat pila saaki
Sharaab mein thoda zehar mila saaki
Hoothon ko chum lene de yeh jaam
Isse tu abb aur mat chalka saaki

Band karde maikhane k darwaje saaki
Aaj ki raat mere naam karde saaki
Mere naseeb mein iss raat ki subah nahi
Zehar mila aur phir se jaam barde saaki

Juban se hum bolna nahi chahte saaki
Uska naam abb labon par nahi late saaki
Mat le tu mera jaam mere haathon se
Sharaab kissi k saamne se nahi hathate saaki

Baahar aangaan kuch phool hain saaki
Unhe kabhi khilta hua dekh saaki
Main b ek phool ki tarah hun
Aaj mujhe murjata hua dekh saaki…………




hey MANISH,
ye kya baat hui yaar.........itni udaasi ? itna dard ?......ye mera dost MANISH hi hai na?..........aap ki dost hone ke naate ek baat kahu? zindagi himmat se jeene ke liye hai,u haar kar ruk jaane ke liye nahi.......make sure u dont write such heartbraking ghazals next time,ok ? it is a warning from ur friend.......got it? take care............

ur princess (friend),


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munna kaya likha hai yeh....aur kis vajha se likha hai aisa....mujhe bilkul pasand nahi aaye yeh ahsaas...dil ko dukhi kar diya tune....

maiN to hamesha dua karti karti hoon ki tum kush raho aur tum ho ki...

didi humein plz maaf kardein, hum ne kabhi nahi chaha k aapko dukh pahunche. abb humari next post...bilkul opposite hogi. chohta hun....abb maaf kardo!!!! plzzzz

aapka chohta sa pyaara sa bhai
munna


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



Darkness falls on me like rain...
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didi humein plz maaf kardein, hum ne kabhi nahi chaha k aapko dukh pahunche. abb humari next post...bilkul opposite hogi. chohta hun....abb maaf kardo!!!! plzzzz

aapka chohta sa pyaara sa bhai
munna
mere pyarey munna........hamesha kush raho, bahut dukh hota hai mujhe jab mera koi apna dard meiN ho.....main bhagwaan se hamesha yehi dua karti hoon ki "hey bhagwaan sabhi ko kushiya do, taki unko dekh kar maiN bhi kush rah sakku".......so munna pls ab phir kabhi aise dukhi mat hona aur na karna....tum to abhi bahut hi chottey ho, aur zindgi bahut badi hai....abhi to es mein bahut kuch accha bura hona hai.....agar aise dil chotta karke baithogey to zindgi ka saamna kaise kar paogey.......munna kush raha karo. aur haan mujhe tumhari mail nahi milli abhi tak...

bhaut sarre pyar ke saath
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Pyare Manish..

Main bhi Sunita Di ki baat se sehmat hun.. yeh kya likha aur kyun likha? itna dard?

Aur yeh tum kya keh rahe ho ki sharaab kabhi bewaafi nahi karti... arre sharaab to aise cheez hai jo aapni zindagi ki baaki har cheez se aapki bewafaai karva degi.. yeh to bewafaai ki jadd hai, jo ise peene vaale ke andar hi janam le leti hai... isse door hi rehna humesha mere bhai..

Apna khayal rakho, aur humesha khush raho!

~Priya

namaste dii

likh diya jo dil mein tha..isliye likha kyunki dil thoda sa udaas tha. aapko yahan dekha to phir dil khush ho gaya . thanku for support. really appreciated

aapka chota bhai

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Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



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kuch likha hai uss cheez par jo kabhi bewaffai nahi karti.....
gaur farmeyein:


Aaj sirf sharaab mat pila saaki
Sharaab mein thoda zehar mila saaki
Hoothon ko chum lene de yeh jaam
Isse tu abb aur mat chalka saaki

Band karde maikhane k darwaje saaki
Aaj ki raat mere naam karde saaki
Mere naseeb mein iss raat ki subah nahi
Zehar mila aur phir se jaam barde saaki

Juban se hum bolna nahi chahte saaki
Uska naam abb labon par nahi late saaki
Mat le tu mera jaam mere haathon se
Sharaab kissi k saamne se nahi hathate saaki

Baahar aangaan kuch phool hain saaki
Unhe kabhi khilta hua dekh saaki
Main b ek phool ki tarah hun
Aaj mujhe murjata hua dekh saaki…………
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oye hoye Manish bhai kya likh diya kamaal kardiya apne kuch pee ker ya ese hi likh diya behrahaal jis bhi tarha likha hai umda likha hai daad hazir hai

salaam bhaii

yeh to humne hosh mein hi likha tha....agar kalam hi sharaabi nikle to hum kya karein .

thanku for ur support

take care


God bless you

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Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



Darkness falls on me like rain...
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