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mere aangan me khele......... - 21st December 2009, 12:06 PM
kabhi mere ghar par uska hi raaj chalta tha,
phir aj kun ghar ke bahr ja baithi hai meri samragyi.
mathe pe aa jai sikudan to har saksh kaap jaata tha,
aaj lakhao sikudan ko tan pe samete baithi meri samragyi.
saari vyavastha aur nirnay ka adhikaar jisme tha,
aaj har baat me peechey rah jaati hai meri samragyi.
pehley mere ghar ka shringaar aur alankaar thi woh,
aaj ghar ka ek samaan ban gai hai meri samragyi.
dular karti thi, laad karti thi, goodi me bitha ke pyaar karti thi,
aaj lakh pukaru yaa hila dun usko palak nahi jhapakti meri samragyi.
pehle mere ek aansoo pe sangram ched deti thi,
aaj bitha ke apne aage rulati hai meri samragyi.
phele galti pe meri wo samjhati thi karu phir to hadkati thi,
aaj jaisa bhi kar gujarta hoon maun ho sah jaati hai meri samragyi.
kabhi muskura ke phoolo ko sharminda kar deti thi,
aaj chand phoolo ki mala pehenkar diwar pe tangi hai meri samragyi.
vidhata hota mai to samay palat deta apney gunaho ke kahtir,
mujhe vishwas hai maaph kar deti mujhe meri samragyi.
ab to haahto ko phaila ke mangta hai yen "anjana",
mere angan me beti bankar khele meri samragyi.....
samragyi= my grandmaa(the queen of a kingdom)


meri yeh kavita agar aapko pasand aati hai toh meri khush nasibi hogi
yeh kavita maine apni late grandmaa ki respect me choti si koshish ki hai...........
...............appke reply ke intzaar me aapka...... prem anjana.............

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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21st December 2009, 02:04 PM
PREM SAHEB..

Hindi ke motey motey mushkil alffaaz ki wajah se aapki kavita bilkul samajh me nahi aayi, but I appreciate ke aapne apni dadi ji ke liye yeh likha hai tou zarur acchi hi hogi...

aapse request hai ke mushkil alfaaz ke meanings bhi saath me likh diya karein,jinhe hindi theek se nahi aati unko padhne aur samajhne me aasani hogi..




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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

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21st December 2009, 02:32 PM
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kabhi mere ghar par uska hi raaj chalta tha,
phir aj kun ghar ke bahr ja baithi hai meri samragyi.
mathe pe aa jai sikudan to har saksh kaap jaata tha,
aaj lakhao sikudan ko tan pe samete baithi meri samragyi.
saari vyavastha aur nirnay ka adhikaar jisme tha,
aaj har baat me peechey rah jaati hai meri samragyi.
pehley mere ghar ka shringaar aur alankaar thi woh,
aaj ghar ka ek samaan ban gai hai meri samragyi.
dular karti thi, laad karti thi, goodi me bitha ke pyaar karti thi,
aaj lakh pukaru yaa hila dun usko palak nahi jhapakti meri samragyi.
pehle mere ek aansoo pe sangram ched deti thi,
aaj bitha ke apne aage rulati hai meri samragyi.
phele galti pe meri wo samjhati thi karu phir to hadkati thi,
aaj jaisa bhi kar gujarta hoon maun ho sah jaati hai meri samragyi.
kabhi muskura ke phoolo ko sharminda kar deti thi,
aaj chand phoolo ki mala pehenkar diwar pe tangi hai meri samragyi.
vidhata hota mai to samay palat deta apney gunaho ke kahtir,
mujhe vishwas hai maaph kar deti mujhe meri samragyi.
ab to haahto ko phaila ke mangta hai yen "anjana",
mere angan me beti bankar khele meri samragyi.....
samragyi= my grandmaa(the queen of a kingdom)


meri yeh kavita agar aapko pasand aati hai toh meri khush nasibi hogi
yeh kavita maine apni late grandmaa ki respect me choti si koshish ki hai...........
...............appke reply ke intzaar me aapka...... prem anjana.............
prem jii...achha likha hai....aapki daadi bhi kahiN se sunti hogi to khushi se unki aaNkheN bhar aati hongi.....aapki likhi har pankati ko salaam...iss'se zyada aukaat nahi kuch likhne ki.....

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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21st December 2009, 03:04 PM
Prem jee...........
aapki yeh kavita aankhoN mein aasooN le aayi
aapki daadi har janam mein aapki hi daadi banke rahe
kahte hain riste satooN janam ke hote hain.... to vo bhi agle sat janam tak aapki daadi banke rahenge ...........

apna khayal rakhiye
khus rahiye


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First thing Hindi nahi aati mujhe.............

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Prem ji aapke ehsaas jo aapki daadi ji k baray mein hain s-rahniay hein.
rajinder ji .namaste kaise hai aap.................
daadi ji ki yaad yaaee thi to kuch likhne ki koshish ki thi
jaankar achcha laga ki aapko pasand aayee
...........bas yuh hi hausala badhate rahiye ............koti ...koti dhanyavaad....
aapka ....prem anjana..................

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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