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ghoonghroo ke bandhan - 14th January 2010, 01:54 PM

ek choti si koshish kar raha hoon shayad aap sabhi ko pasand aaye
aapki pratikriya ke intjaar me aapka dost ........prem anjana............

Din aata hai dhal jata hai par raat nahi jaati mere jeevan se,
Diwali aati hai jag jagmagati hai par yeh amawas nahi jaati mere jeevan se
Khushiyaan aati hai muskurati hai,paigaam mehboob ka le aati hai
Par jaati bhi hai badi berahmi se
aankho me do boond paani k de jaati hai mere jeevan me,
socha tha jindgi ko ishq ke noor se rosan kar doon
lekin jab tak baat dil ki juban pe aaye woh gujar jaati hai mere jeevan se
ab bhi dil dhadakta o man machalta hai,
lekin aankho me chamak ka naam nahi,
ab murda ban ke mera jism maout ki dua karta hai mere jeevan se
lekin mujhe intjar hai aour aitbaar hai, apni masti par,
ki ek din har raat kat jaayegi mere jeevan se
jis din *****unga jeevan ke is bandhan se,
ghoonghroo ke bandhan se mai bandh jaonga
lipat jayega “anjana” mehboob ke kadmo se
ud jaayga parinda kaid ke jeevan se............


anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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14th January 2010, 02:29 PM

bahut khub ....................
aapki rachna humesha dil ko chhu jati hai

ghamOn se ru-ab-ru hai aap aisa lagta hai

khus rahiye
Diya



Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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14th January 2010, 06:48 PM

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bahut khub ....................
aapki rachna humesha dil ko chhu jati hai

ghamOn se ru-ab-ru hai aap aisa lagta hai

khus rahiye
Diya
diya ji aapko prem anjana ka namaskaar.............
jaankar accha laga ki aapko kavita pasand aayi
gam or khushi dono ka swad chakh chuka hoon isiliye kuch kuch likhne laga hoon...hahaha
.aapne mujhe saraha iske liye shukriya...........thanx......
.aapka.....dost........prem anjana............


anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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14th January 2010, 11:16 PM

Prem Anjana Ji...Aadaab ! aapki kavita ke ehsaasat dil ki zameen par dard ka kohraa bichha ke chale gaye....acha laga padhkar...yuhi likhte rahiye....dil se daad hazir hai....khush rahen

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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15th January 2010, 09:00 AM

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Prem Anjana Ji...Aadaab ! aapki kavita ke ehsaasat dil ki zameen par dard ka kohraa bichha ke chale gaye....acha laga padhkar...yuhi likhte rahiye....dil se daad hazir hai....khush rahen

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
.naresh ji ko.......... prem anjana ka namaskar...........
nareh ji aapne meri kavita k saraha is ke liye bahut bahut thanx..................
.aapko panktiyan achchi lagi yeh jankar bahut achcha laga
bas aap isi tarah mera sath banaye rakhiye .....
........aapka ...........prem anjana..........


anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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prem ji..kaise hain aap...?
ek achhi kavita pe daad qubuul kijiye...


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15th January 2010, 11:06 AM

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prem ji..kaise hain aap...?
ek achhi kavita pe daad qubuul kijiye...
vikram ji ......................namaskar................aapn e kanhi mere liye kaha thi ki mai likahta kam hun .............usi shikayat par maine yeh chand panktiyo se aapki shikayat ko door karne ki koshish ki hai ........................aapko pasand aayi is ke liye sahastro dhanyawaad....................aapka mitra............prem anjana......


anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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15th January 2010, 11:18 AM

Prem Jii,

Ehsasaast, jazbaat, khiyaalat
waqai kamal k haiN,,

Boht acha laga aap ki kaawish phad kar,,(Rep+++)

Likhtey rahiye,,

Regardz,,


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Prem Jii,

Ehsasaast, jazbaat, khiyaalat
waqai kamal k haiN,,

Boht acha laga aap ki kaawish phad kar,,(Rep+++)

Likhtey rahiye,,

Regardz,,
hasan bhai aapko lines achchi lagi is ke liye thanx..................
.aapne is tarah se saraha hai bahut achcha laga.
.......aate rahiyega..aapke intjaar me ............ aapka dost prem anjana


anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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vikram ji ......................namaskar................aapn e kanhi mere liye kaha thi ki mai likahta kam hun .............usi shikayat par maine yeh chand panktiyo se aapki shikayat ko door karne ki koshish ki hai ........................aapko pasand aayi is ke liye sahastro dhanyawaad....................aapka mitra............prem anjana......
prem jii...mujhe aapse shikayat nahi thi....woh to
ek guzaarish thi aapse...aap achha likhte haiN...ap ki
kalam se pata lag jaata hai ki aap ne jeewan ke kai pehluoN
ko kareeb se dekha hai...isiliye aapke tajarbe aksar shabdoN ki
shaql e'khtiyaar kar kalam se nikalte haiN...phir bhi aapne jo itna
maan diya, aapka bahut bahut shukriya....
bhale kam likheN...lekin hamesha arthpuurn aur achha likheN...

May God Bless You...!
aapka dost,
vikram......


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prem jii...mujhe aapse shikayat nahi thi....woh to
ek guzaarish thi aapse...aap achha likhte haiN...ap ki
kalam se pata lag jaata hai ki aap ne jeewan ke kai pehluoN
ko kareeb se dekha hai...isiliye aapke tajarbe aksar shabdoN ki
shaql e'khtiyaar kar kalam se nikalte haiN...phir bhi aapne jo itna
maan diya, aapka bahut bahut shukriya....
bhale kam likheN...lekin hamesha arthpuurn aur achha likheN...

May God Bless You...!
aapka dost,
vikram......
vikram ji............... apne meri pankiti padhi iske liye apka shukria............ jab mai likhta hu to yeh asha rahti hai ki aap jaise friend se daad mil jaye.......... such maniye jab aap meri kisi kavita par mujhe ashirwaad dete hai to lagta hai yeh meri kavita ke liye mujhe diya jane wala koi inaam hai..........................aapka................ ........ prem anjana


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sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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