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खवाब की तरह हमें भुला गए - 16th September 2010, 03:32 AM

dosto! pesh-e-khidmat hai ek nayi ghazal.............



खवाब की तरह हमें भुला गए
अश्क बन के आँख में समां गए

रंजिशें दैर-ओ-हरम की थी मगर,
लोग मेरा मैकदा जला गए



खुद को भूल कर, खुदा तलाशने
लोग जाने सब कहाँ कहाँ गए




उम्र भर बचा किये तूफ़ान से
नाखुदा ही कश्तियाँ डुबा गए



ख़ुदकुशी से डर रहा था मैं ज़रा
दोस्त मेरे हौसला दिला गए




खुद से छुप रहा था मैं, तो आप क्यों?
हाथ में ये आइना थमा गए



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dosto! pesh-e-khidmat hai ek nayi ghazal.............



खवाब की तरह हमें भुला गए
अश्क बन के आँख में समां गए

रंजिशें दैर-ओ-हरम की थी मगर,
लोग मेरा मैकदा जला गए



खुद को भूल कर, खुदा तलाशने
लोग जाने सब कहाँ कहाँ गए




उम्र भर बचा किये तूफ़ान से
नाखुदा ही कश्तियाँ डुबा गए



ख़ुदकुशी से डर रहा था मैं ज़रा
दोस्त मेरे हौसला दिला गए




खुद से छुप रहा था मैं, तो आप क्यों?
हाथ में ये आइना थमा गए



http://saahilspoetry.blogspot.com/


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दैर-ओ-हरम = मंदिर और मस्जिद
नाखुदा = नाविक


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Bhot khub Sahil kya baat hai.N
Or ye do sher to kya khub rahe..
ख़ुदकुशी से डर रहा था मैं ज़रा
दोस्त मेरे हौसला दिला गए



खुद से छुप रहा था मैं, तो आप क्यों?
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7th October 2010, 03:30 AM

'Mehra126' ji aur 'Shayari' ji daad ke liye bahut shukriya


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ख़ुदकुशी से डर रहा था मैं ज़रा
दोस्त मेरे हौसला दिला गए

umda gazal.

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Ashok ji daad dene ka bahut bahut shukriya


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11th January 2011, 06:51 PM

This one is very good too.
esp this one

ख़ुदकुशी से डर रहा था मैं ज़रा
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ख़ुदकुशी से डर रहा था मैं ज़रा
दोस्त मेरे हौसला दिला गए

खुद से छुप रहा था मैं, तो आप क्यों?
हाथ में ये आइना थमा गए


Very Impressive ......... Saahil Ji !

Bahut khoob lagi hume aapki tamaam peshkash ... ! dilee daad qubuul farmaayeN... !

khush rahen ... !
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dosto! pesh-e-khidmat hai ek nayi ghazal.............



खवाब की तरह हमें भुला गए
अश्क बन के आँख में समां गए

रंजिशें दैर-ओ-हरम की थी मगर,
लोग मेरा मैकदा जला गए



खुद को भूल कर, खुदा तलाशने
लोग जाने सब कहाँ कहाँ गए




उम्र भर बचा किये तूफ़ान से
नाखुदा ही कश्तियाँ डुबा गए



ख़ुदकुशी से डर रहा था मैं ज़रा
दोस्त मेरे हौसला दिला गए




खुद से छुप रहा था मैं, तो आप क्यों?
हाथ में ये आइना थमा गए



http://saahilspoetry.blogspot.com/


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दैर-ओ-हरम = मंदिर और मस्जिद
नाखुदा = नाविक


bahut khoob............................................. .....


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aap sab ko sher pasand aaye ye mere liye badi baat hai.
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