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Baghawat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun - 22nd January 2011, 03:28 PM

Tamam Ahl-e-Mehfil Ko Aadaab....!
Aaj Phir Apni Aik Adna Si Koshish Ke Sath Bazm Me Hazir Hun........
Umeed Hai Ke Ahl-e-Zoq Apni Raaye Se Nawazen Gy


BAGHAWAT KR BHI SAKTA HUN

Zamanay K Usoolon Se Baghawat Kr Bhi Kr Sakta Hun
Main Lab-Basta Kharra Hun Pr Shikayat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

Mujhy Hai Paas Chahat Ka Wgrna ay Sitam Parwar
Tujhy Main Tujh Se ziada Gham Inayat Kr Bhi Sakta hun

Mujhy Bas Apni Baton Se Mukarna He Naheen Aata
Boht Hoshiyar Hun Warna Siyasat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

Aseer-e-Ishq Ko Aadat Si Hai Dukh Dard Sehanay ki
Wagrna Main Rihaayi Ki Jasarat Kr Bhi Kr Sakta Hun

Hazaron Pal Muhabbat Me Hazaron Dard Jhailay Hain
Magr Hun Qol Pr Qayem Ye Saabat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun




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Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi

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22nd January 2011, 04:24 PM

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Tamam Ahl-e-Mehfil Ko Aadaab....!
Aaj Phir Apni Aik Adna Si Koshish Ke Sath Bazm Me Hazir Hun........
Umeed Hai Ke Ahl-e-Zoq Apni Raaye Se Nawazen Gy


BAGHAWAT KR BHI SAKTA HUN

Zamanay K Usoolon Se Baghawat Kr Bhi Kr Sakta Hun
Main Lab-Basta Kharra Hun Pr Shikayat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

Mujhy Hai Paas Chahat Ka Wgrna ay Sitam Parwar
Tujhy Main Tujh Se ziada Gham Inayat Kr Bhi Sakta hun

Mujhy Bas Apni Baton Se Mukarna He Naheen Aata
Boht Hoshiyar Hun Warna Siyasat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

Aseer-e-Ishq Ko Aadat Si Hai Dukh Dard Sehanay ki
Wagrna Main Rihaayi Ki Jasarat Kr Bhi Kr Sakta Hun

Hazaron Pal Muhabbat Me Hazaron Dard Jhailay Hain
Magr Hun Qol Pr Qayem Ye Saabat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

aadaab
khoob shakil bhai
aap ki ghazliyaat kaa taantaa lagaa huwaa hai wo bhi aisee meyaari ki ab dil chaahitaa hai ki aap ke paas zaanuy e talammuz tai kar hi len gar qabool uftad zahe izzo sharf
jaisaa ki main ne pahle isharah kiyaa thaa ki aap aowalan aisee ghazlon ko saamne laaye the jo nisbatan kamzor theen ... jabki meraa khiyaal ye thaa ki aap aisaa hikmatan kar rahe hain ..... to aaj mujhe yaqeen ho chalaa hai ki aage aap se aor bhi bahot achhee ghazlen sunne ko milen geee
ghazal bahot achhee hai meyaari hai kheyaalaat umdah hain

bas

lafz SAABAT nahi hai balki SAABIT hai
is liye is pe ghaor kar len .....
ek baar fir aap ko tahe dil se daad
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22nd January 2011, 04:26 PM

Shakil Bhai ... bahut khoobsurat ehsaasasaat se ghazal ke sabhi ashaar ko ba-khuubi ... aapne adaa kiya hai ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...

aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !




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22nd January 2011, 06:07 PM

Mujhy Hai Paas Chahat Ka Wgrna ay Sitam Parwar
Tujhy Main Tujh Se ziada Gham Inayat Kr Bhi Sakta hun

Mujhy Bas Apni Baton Se Mukarna He Naheen Aata
Boht Hoshiyar Hun Warna Siyasat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

Hazaron Pal Muhabbat Me Hazaron Dard Jhailay Hain
Magr Hun Qol Pr Qayem Ye Saabat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun


bahot khoob Shakil Miyaan aapki ye ghazal bhi behad khubsurat pahle ki tarah.. har sher laajawab, khoobsurat. Meri daad kuboool karen, likhte rahen.

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24th January 2011, 10:58 AM

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aadaab
khoob shakil bhai
aap ki ghazliyaat kaa taantaa lagaa huwaa hai wo bhi aisee meyaari ki ab dil chaahitaa hai ki aap ke paas zaanuy e talammuz tai kar hi len gar qabool uftad zahe izzo sharf
jaisaa ki main ne pahle isharah kiyaa thaa ki aap aowalan aisee ghazlon ko saamne laaye the jo nisbatan kamzor theen ... jabki meraa khiyaal ye thaa ki aap aisaa hikmatan kar rahe hain ..... to aaj mujhe yaqeen ho chalaa hai ki aage aap se aor bhi bahot achhee ghazlen sunne ko milen geee
ghazal bahot achhee hai meyaari hai kheyaalaat umdah hain

bas

lafz SAABAT nahi hai balki SAABIT hai
is liye is pe ghaor kar len .....
ek baar fir aap ko tahe dil se daad
masood hassaas

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Aap NE Waqt Nikaal Kr Is Kalaam Pr Nazar Farmayi Or Apni Qeemti Raaye Se Nawaza Is Ke Liye Main Tah-e-Dil Se Mamnoon Hun....
Sir Aap Ke Fun Ke Samnay To Meri Auqaat Aik Zarray Ki Si Hai....
Or Mujhy To Aap Ki Zaat Se Seekhnay Ko Boht Kuch Mila Hai....
Ye Aap Ka Husn-e-Zan Hai Jo Aap Mere Naqas Kalam Ko Sarahtay HAin.....

Or Jo Baat Aap Ne Waazeh Ki Hai "Saabat" Wo Bilkul Theak Hai...
Shayad Aap Yaqeen Na Manen Magr Haqeeqat Hai Ke Isi Aik Lafz Ki Waja Se Me Aik Muddat Se Ye Ghazal Yahan Post Nahi Kr Paya....
Mujhy Bakhubi Khabar HAi Ke Asal Lafz Saabat" Hai Or Me Ghaur Bhi Kr Chuka Hun Magr Meri Naqas Samjh Me Or Koi Mutbadil Lafz Nahi aaya.........
Ab Aap He Se Darkhwast HAi Ke Baraye Mehrbani Aap Is Ka Koi Mutbadal Lafz Ya Misra Bana Den.......

ALLAH Aap Ko Khooob Rehmaton Se Nawazay

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Shakil Bhai ... bahut khoobsurat ehsaasasaat se ghazal ke sabhi ashaar ko ba-khuubi ... aapne adaa kiya hai ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...

aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !

Janab Naresh Mehra Ji...!

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Mujhy Hai Paas Chahat Ka Wgrna ay Sitam Parwar
Tujhy Main Tujh Se ziada Gham Inayat Kr Bhi Sakta hun

Mujhy Bas Apni Baton Se Mukarna He Naheen Aata
Boht Hoshiyar Hun Warna Siyasat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

Hazaron Pal Muhabbat Me Hazaron Dard Jhailay Hain
Magr Hun Qol Pr Qayem Ye Saabat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

bahot khoob Shakil Miyaan aapki ye ghazal bhi behad khubsurat pahle ki tarah.. har sher laajawab, khoobsurat. Meri daad kuboool karen, likhte rahen.

shaad...

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ALLAH PAAK Se Dua Hai Ke Aap Ko Sada Khush Rakhay........
Aap Ki Muhabbat Or Hosla-Afzayi Ka Boht Boht Shukriya....
Boht Khushi Milti Hai Aap Ki Daaad Pa Kr.....

Yunhi Aatay Rahen Or Muskuratay Rahen




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Wah Ahmad bhai bohat khoob.......yeh sher behad pasand aaya.

Mujhy Hai Paas Chahat Ka Wgrna ay Sitam Parwar
Tujhy Main Tujh Se ziada Gham Inayat Kr Bhi Sakta hun


Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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Assalamu Alaikum..Dear Shakil Jee..Allah Pak K Rahem-o-Karam Se Umeed Hain Aap Khayriyat Se Honge.. **Matla Se Lekar Maqta Tak..Dilki Baato.n Ko Dilse Mehsuus Kee Hain..Aur Ek Gazal Kee Yaad Aayi Bhi..Aapne Bhi Sune Honge Zoruur..Hain Na.. ? Dilki Gehraaion Kee Gehraaion Se Duwaaye~~Dher-o-Dher Saare Phuul.. **Khush Rahiye Ye Duwaaon Ke Saath Ijaazat Chahungi Aapse.. **


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Wah Ahmad bhai bohat khoob.......yeh sher behad pasand aaya.

Mujhy Hai Paas Chahat Ka Wgrna ay Sitam Parwar
Tujhy Main Tujh Se ziada Gham Inayat Kr Bhi Sakta hun

Janab Sajid Ghayel Saheb...!

Aap Ki Muhabbat Or Inayat Ka Boht Boht Shukriya....
ALLAH PAAK AAP KO KHUSH RAKHAY
Yunhi Aatay Rahen Or Mehfil Sajatay Rahen




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Tamam Ahl-e-Mehfil Ko Aadaab....!
Aaj Phir Apni Aik Adna Si Koshish Ke Sath Bazm Me Hazir Hun........
Umeed Hai Ke Ahl-e-Zoq Apni Raaye Se Nawazen Gy


BAGHAWAT KR BHI SAKTA HUN

Zamanay K Usoolon Se Baghawat Kr Bhi Kr Sakta Hun
Main Lab-Basta Kharra Hun Pr Shikayat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

Mujhy Hai Paas Chahat Ka Wgrna ay Sitam Parwar
Tujhy Main Tujh Se ziada Gham Inayat Kr Bhi Sakta hun

Mujhy Bas Apni Baton Se Mukarna He Naheen Aata
Boht Hoshiyar Hun Warna Siyasat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

Aseer-e-Ishq Ko Aadat Si Hai Dukh Dard Sehanay ki
Wagrna Main Rihaayi Ki Jasarat Kr Bhi Kr Sakta Hun

Hazaron Pal Muhabbat Me Hazaron Dard Jhailay Hain
Magr Hun Qol Pr Qayem Ye Saabat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

shakeel saheb ko prem anjana ka .....salaam
aapke sher bohot pasand aaye..daad kubool kijiye
yun hi likhte rahen... kush rahen....swasth rahen
aapka prem anjana.......


anjana prem
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Waalaiuk-ussalam...!

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aapke sher bohot pasand aaye..daad kubool kijiye
yun hi likhte rahen... kush rahen....swasth rahen
aapka prem anjana.......

Dear Prem Anjana Ji....!

Hamari Bazm Me Aap Ko Khush Aamdeed........
Kalaam Parhnay Or Pasand Krnay Ke Liye Aap Ka Boht Shukriya.....
Umeed Hai Ke aap Aayinda Bhi Aatay Rahen Gy

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Ahmad jii................aapki gazal hume behad pasand aaye, sabhi ashiyaar dil ke khaas kareeb rahe.....keep writing.

god bless u

Dear Sunita Virender Ji....!

Aap Ne Is Kalaam Ko Waqt Dia Or Apni Raaye Se Nawaza..... Is Pr Main Tah-e-Dil Se Aap Ka Mashkoor Hun.......

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BAGHAWAT KR BHI SAKTA HUN

Zamanay K Usoolon Se Baghawat Kr Bhi Kr Sakta Hun
Main Lab-Basta Kharra Hun Pr Shikayat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

Mujhy Hai Paas Chahat Ka Wgrna ay Sitam Parwar
Tujhy Main Tujh Se ziada Gham Inayat Kr Bhi Sakta hun

Mujhy Bas Apni Baton Se Mukarna He Naheen Aata
Boht Hoshiyar Hun Warna Siyasat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun

Aseer-e-Ishq Ko Aadat Si Hai Dukh Dard Sehanay ki
Wagrna Main Rihaayi Ki Jasarat Kr Bhi Kr Sakta Hun

Hazaron Pal Muhabbat Me Hazaron Dard Jhailay Hain
Magr Hun Qol Pr Qayem Ye Saabat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun
Bahut kamaal ka likha hai ..... Shakil Bhai


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Bahut kamaal ka likha hai ..... Shakil Bhai

Sir Aap Ki Aamad Ka Or Ghazal Ko Pasand Krnay Ka Boht Boht Shukriya........ Sada Khush Rahen




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