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ज़िन्दगी तूने हमें ऐसे चुभाये हैं गुलाब - 18th January 2011, 09:36 PM

behar ke baare main ziyaada nahin jaanta. Ek rhythm ke hisaab se likhta hoon. Is ghazal main shaayad ye behar hai....aapki raaye ka ke intizaar main.



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कब से ये काँटों में हैं और ज़ख्म खाए हैं गुलाब?
अपने खूँ के लाल रंगों में नहाये हैं गुलाब।


फर्क इतना है हमारी और उसकी सोच में,
उसने थामी हैं बंदूकें, हम उठाये हैं गुलाब।


होश अब कैसे रहे, अब लड़खड़ाएँ क्यों न हम,
घोल कर उसने निगाहों में, पिलाये हैं गुलाब।


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तब कहीं जाकर ज़मीं ने ये उगाये हैं गुलाब।


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saahil jee:

namaste!

behterin saa andaaz-e-bayaa.n rahaa aapka..! dil ko Chhu lene waale ehsaas.. yeh Sher mujhe bahot hi pasand aaya

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dil se daad.. KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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फर्क इतना है हमारी और उसकी सोच में,
उसने थामी हैं बंदूकें, हम उठाये हैं गुलाब।


Aaj ke haalaat par umdaa Tasveer khichii hai ... Saahil Ji !

Ek acchi peshkash ...... tahe dil se daad ... !

aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Naresh ji, Dhaval ji,

daad ka bahut shukriya..........khush rahen!


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कब से ये काँटों में हैं और ज़ख्म खाए हैं गुलाब?
अपने खूँ के लाल रंगों में नहाये हैं गुलाब।


फर्क इतना है हमारी और उसकी सोच में,
उसने थामी हैं बंदूकें, हम उठाये हैं गुलाब।


होश अब कैसे रहे, अब लड़खड़ाएँ क्यों न हम,
घोल कर उसने निगाहों में, पिलाये हैं गुलाब।


अब असर होता नहीं गर पाँव में काँटा चुभे,
ज़िन्दगी तूने हमें ऐसे चुभाये हैं गुलाब।


कुछ पसीने की महक, कुछ लाल मेरे खूँ का रंग,
तब कहीं जाकर ज़मीं ने ये उगाये हैं गुलाब।


खार होंगे, संग होंगे, और होगा क्या वहां?
इश्क की गलियों में 'साहिल' किसने पाए हैं गुलाब?


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होश अब कैसे रहे, अब लड़खड़ाएँ क्यों न हम,
घोल कर उसने निगाहों में, पिलाये हैं गुलाब।,

कुछ पसीने की महक, कुछ लाल मेरे खूँ का रंग,
तब कहीं जाकर ज़मीं ने ये उगाये हैं गुलाब।

khoob bahot khoob.. behtareen aasharon se sajaaya aapne is qalaam ko.... likhte rahen.

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Gem! - 28th January 2011, 09:10 PM

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अब असर होता नहीं गर पाँव में काँटा चुभे,
ज़िन्दगी तूने हमें ऐसे चुभाये हैं गुलाब।


कुछ पसीने की महक, कुछ लाल मेरे खूँ का रंग,
तब कहीं जाकर ज़मीं ने ये उगाये हैं गुलाब।


खार होंगे, संग होंगे, और होगा क्या वहां?
इश्क की गलियों में 'साहिल' किसने पाए हैं गुलाब?


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Janaab Saahil Sahab, Adaab!

Mate, that is what you call 'Gem' of a poetry! Zabardast lafz chota lagta hai tareef k liye! The quoted verses just stun with sheer depth and beauty! Daad qabool fermayen! Khush Rahein! Maza aaya! Boht lutf aaya perhker!


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Wah wah Saahil saheb........sabse khoobsurat to mujhe aapki Ghazal ka introduction laga.........kitni masoomiyat se aapne apni ghazal ka tarruf karaya hai..........bas aisa hi haal kuch apni shayri ka bhi hai mere bhai.

Aur jaha tak Ghazal ki baat hai to kya kahu mere bhai bas Kamaal hi Kamaal hi hai.............aapko karodo daad meri taraf yeh sher bohat pasandida rahe.

अब असर होता नहीं गर पाँव में काँटा चुभे,
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कुछ पसीने की महक, कुछ लाल मेरे खूँ का रंग,
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