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Wo kabhi tanhaaiyon me...... - 16th March 2011, 01:35 AM

Beher= Ramal (2122 / 2122 / 2122 / 212)


Wo kabhi tanhaiyon me mubtila kar jaaegi,
Yaa kabhi jane-jigar yuNhi gila kar jaaegi.

yuN kabhi toDaa karegii phool ko guldaan se.
Har kali ko shaakh pe haNs ke khilaa kar jaaegi.

Zindgi bhar lab sile hii rah gaya jiske liye,
Mere afsaane mujhe wo hii sunaa kar jaaegi.

Bhuulna us pal ko pahle se nahii aasaan thaa,
Aaj phir manzar judaai kaa dikhaa kar jaaegi.

Hai munasib ab karo tauba kabhi aye 'shaad' tum,
Dekh lenaa tum ko hi tum se judaa kar jaaegi.




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16th March 2011, 07:49 AM

yuN kabhi toDaa karegii phool ko guldaan se.
Har kali ko shaakh pe haNs ke khilaa kar jaaegi.

Zindgi bhar lab sile hii rah gaya jiske liye,
Mere afsaane mujhe wo hii sunaa kar jaaegi.

Bhuulna us pal ko pahle se nahii aasaan thaa,
Aaj phir manzar judaai kaa dikhaa kar jaaegi.


Bahut naazuk se ... dil ko chhuute ehsaas ... behad dilkash andaaz meN likhe hai aapne ... Shaad Bhai ... !

Tamaam Ghazal ke ashaar ki saaf bayaani aur rawaangi ... asardaar rahi .... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... ... aise hi diloN ko gudgudaate raheN aur laboN pe gungunaane waale taraane sajaate raheN ... khush rahen ... !

Simple ... Sweet ... SuperB Creation .... !!!

duaaoN ke saath ... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Wo kabhi tanhaiyon me mubtila kar jaaegi,
Yaa kabhi jane-jigar yuNhi gila kar jaaegi.

yuN kabhi toDaa karegii phool ko guldaan se.
Har kali ko shaakh pe haNs ke khilaa kar jaaegi.

Zindgi bhar lab sile hii rah gaya jiske liye,
Mere afsaane mujhe wo hii sunaa kar jaaegi.

Bhuulna us pal ko pahle se nahii aasaan thaa,
Aaj phir manzar judaai kaa dikhaa kar jaaegi.

Hai munasib ab karo tauba kabhi aye 'shaad' tum,
Dekh lenaa tum ko hi tum se judaa kar jaaegi.




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Sameer ghazal itni achchi hai kae alfaaz khasir hain ,kae kaesae inki pazeerayee karaen
sameer tum to kamaal ker gae
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Ae mahaz laffazi nahin
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yuN kabhi toDaa karegii phool ko guldaan se.
Har kali ko shaakh pe haNs ke khilaa kar jaaegi.

Zindgi bhar lab sile hii rah gaya jiske liye,
Mere afsaane mujhe wo hii sunaa kar jaaegi.

Bhuulna us pal ko pahle se nahii aasaan thaa,
Aaj phir manzar judaai kaa dikhaa kar jaaegi.


Bahut naazuk se ... dil ko chhuute ehsaas ... behad dilkash andaaz meN likhe hai aapne ... Shaad Bhai ... !

Tamaam Ghazal ke ashaar ki saaf bayaani aur rawaangi ... asardaar rahi .... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... ... aise hi diloN ko gudgudaate raheN aur laboN pe gungunaane waale taraane sajaate raheN ... khush rahen ... !

Simple ... Sweet ... SuperB Creation .... !!!

duaaoN ke saath ... !


Shukriya Naresh bhai, aapne jis tareeke se nacheez ki tareef kar di hai, mere paas alfaaz bhi nahi bachte kaise aapka shukriya adaa karun.. bas yoon samajh lijiye dil se itni khushi hoti hai har baar aapko yahan dekh kar ke kuch bataa nahi saktaa.... aapko khayaal pasand aa sake meri khush naseebi hai... saath banaae rakhiyegaa... shukriya


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yuN kabhi toDaa karegii phool ko guldaan se.
Har kali ko shaakh pe haNs ke khilaa kar jaaegi.

Bhuulna us pal ko pahle se nahii aasaan thaa,
Aaj phir manzar judaai kaa dikhaa kar jaaegi.


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Sameer ghazal itni achchi hai kae alfaaz khasir hain ,kae kaesae inki pazeerayee karaen
sameer tum to kamaal ker gae
la-jawaab ho
awesome
Khuda jhoot ba bulwayae
Ae mahaz laffazi nahin
Khush raho
Razia

Pyaari Appijaan, kya kahun ke armaano ke kya haal hain aapko yahan dekh kar... aapne jis andaaz se tareef kar di hai, main bataa nahi saktaa khushiyon ka kya aalam hai... bas aap aaya karen aur koshsihen padhti rahen yahi mujh haqeer ke liye kaafi hogaa... duaaon ke liye shukriya...

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17th March 2011, 12:16 PM

Zindgi bhar lab sile hii rah gaya jiske liye,
Mere afsaane mujhe wo hii sunaa kar jaaegi.

ji nice one ............................



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Waoooooooooooooo Shaibi her baar aik nai damaka se bhar poor Ghazal le kar aate haiN aap, Wah Bara hi sakoon mila aap ka kalaam parh kar, her sher mukammil aor laajawab hai, Dil nikli daad qabool kije

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Bahut khoobsurat ghazal 'shaad' saahab!

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yuN kabhi toDaa karegii phool ko guldaan se.
Har kali ko shaakh pe haNs ke khilaa kar jaaegi.

Bhuulna us pal ko pahle se nahii aasaan thaa,
Aaj phir manzar judaai kaa dikhaa kar jaaegi.


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Behad shukriyaa Rajinder saahib.. aap sab ka sath hi hai jo likhne ko majboor karta rahta hai.. yoonhi saath banaae rakhiyegaa.. shukriyaa.

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ji nice one ............................

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Assalam-o-Alaykum Sameer Sahab

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Wo kabhi tanhaiyon me mubtila kar jaaegi,
Yaa kabhi jane-jigar yuNhi gila kar jaaegi.

yuN kabhi toDaa karegii phool ko guldaan se.
Har kali ko shaakh pe haNs ke khilaa kar jaaegi.

Zindgi bhar lab sile hii rah gaya jiske liye,
Mere afsaane mujhe wo hii sunaa kar jaaegi.

Bhuulna us pal ko pahle se nahii aasaan thaa,
Aaj phir manzar judaai kaa dikhaa kar jaaegi.

Hai munasib ab karo tauba kabhi aye 'shaad' tum,
Dekh lenaa tum ko hi tum se judaa kar jaaegi.



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Waoooooooooooooo Shaibi her baar aik nai damaka se bhar poor Ghazal le kar aate haiN aap, Wah Bara hi sakoon mila aap ka kalaam parh kar, her sher mukammil aor laajawab hai, Dil nikli daad qabool kije

aor yunhi Mehfil ki raunaq bane raheye ga
Sada khush rahaiN
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ye sab aapki muhabbat hai Dr. saab jo aap qatre me samundar talaashte hain.. aapne koshish ko pasand kiya behad mashkoor hoon bhai... yoonhi saath dete rahiyegaa..

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shukriya saahil bhai, aapko koshish pasand aai meri khush naseebi hai... aaage bhi aate rahiyegaa.. duaaon ka arz-mand

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Muzammil saahab,

behad shukriyaa aapka jo aapko ye koshish pasand aa saki aur jo aapne poocha hai wo beher kahlaati hai, iska matlab hota hai wo meter jisme shayri fit karte hain, main bhi faqat seekh hi raha hoon aur bas bas likh likh ke ise nikhaarne ki koshish me hoon..... link maine aapko Pm me bhej di thee aap padhna zaroor aur likhne ki kosshishh karna... shukriya...



Kashif bhai,

Walekum salaam janaab, kaise hain aap, bade dino baad aana hua aapka bazm me, aapne pasand kiye nacheez ke aashar meri badee khushnaseebi hai.. aate rahiyega aage bhi.. yoonhi saath dete rahiyega isi ummeed ke saath ijaazat..

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sameer saahab,

aap ki Ghazal achchhii lagii, khaas kar yeh sher.....

Bhuulna us pal ko pahle se nahii aasaan thaa,
Aaj phir manzar judaai kaa dikhaa kar jaaegi.

daad haazir hai qubool keejiyegaa.. likhte rahe.n yuun hii...

Mayank




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sameer saahab,

aap ki Ghazal achchhii lagii, khaas kar yeh sher.....

Bhuulna us pal ko pahle se nahii aasaan thaa,
Aaj phir manzar judaai kaa dikhaa kar jaaegi.

daad haazir hai qubool keejiyegaa.. likhte rahe.n yuun hii...

Mayank


Mayank saab aadaab... meri khushnaseebi jo aapko nacheez ki koshsih pasand aa sakii.... jis sher ko aapne khaastaur se pasand kiya hai uska lafz lafz apne muqammal hone ki gawaahi de raha hai ... shukriya tahe dil se qubool karen...

shaad....


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Beher= Ramal (2122 / 2122 / 2122 / 212)


Wo kabhi tanhaiyon me mubtila kar jaaegi,
Yaa kabhi jane-jigar yuNhi gila kar jaaegi.

yuN kabhi toDaa karegii phool ko guldaan se.
Har kali ko shaakh pe haNs ke khilaa kar jaaegi.

Zindgi bhar lab sile hii rah gaya jiske liye,
Mere afsaane mujhe wo hii sunaa kar jaaegi.

Bhuulna us pal ko pahle se nahii aasaan thaa,
Aaj phir manzar judaai kaa dikhaa kar jaaegi.

Hai munasib ab karo tauba kabhi aye 'shaad' tum,
Dekh lenaa tum ko hi tum se judaa kar jaaegi.




shaad.....
Shaad!
Tum jab bhi likhtae ho ,dhamkakheez likhtae ho
kae tareef kae liyae alfaaz kum lagtae hain
khush raho
   
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Shaad!
Tum jab bhi likhtae ho ,dhamkakheez likhtae ho
kae tareef kae liyae alfaaz kum lagtae hain
khush raho

yasmeen appi.... sabse pahle to shukriya adaa karnaa chaunga ke is andaaz me aap tareef kar jaati hain.. khaaaksaar shaayad is laayaq bhi nahi, par aapki muhabbat aur khuloos ka ehteraam karta hoon... duaaon me yaad rakhiyegaa.. aaati rahiyegaa.
shukriyaa

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