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Hansh jub bhi uda akela uda - 11th November 2010, 03:46 PM

hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

na raja raha na rani rahi

na budhapa raha na jawani rahi

har vastu yaha aani jani rahi

kahane sunane ko bas yah kahani rahi

char din ke liye yah jhamela juda



hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

raj raja dhare kai dhare rah gaye

kothi bangale khade ke khade rah gaye

sab nagine jade ke jade rah gaye

heere moty pade ke pade rah gaye


ant mai lakhpaty kai na dhela juda

hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

tera tan nahi hai ye kuch kaam ka

sara sansar hai pyare subh kaam ka

soch le pyare tu apane anzaam ka

naam rat le madhur mere ghan shyam ka

ram ka naam duniya mai hai sabse bada

hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

kavi madhu





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hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

na raja raha na rani rahi

na budhapa raha na jawani rahi

har vastu yaha aani jani rahi

kahane sunane ko bas yah kahani rahi

char din ke liye yah jhamela juda



hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

raj raja dhare kai dhare rah gaye

kothi bangale khade ke khade rah gaye

sab nagine jade ke jade rah gaye

heere moty pade ke pade rah gaye


ant mai lakhpaty kai na dhela juda

hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

tera tan nahi hai ye kuch kaam ka

sara sansar hai pyare subh kaam ka

soch le pyare tu apane anzaam ka

naam rat le madhur mere ghan shyam ka

ram ka naam duniya mai hai sabse bada

hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

kavi madhu




shakuntla jee
radhe radhe

wah nice sharing.........................................


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wah nice sharing.........................................

thanks ji

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16th November 2010, 03:52 PM

[QUOTE=shakuntala vyas;415286] hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

na raja raha na rani rahi

na budhapa raha na jawani rahi

har vastu yaha aani jani rahi

kahane sunane ko bas yah kahani rahi

char din ke liye yah jhamela juda



hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

raj raja dhare kai dhare rah gaye

kothi bangale khade ke khade rah gaye

sab nagine jade ke jade rah gaye

heere moty pade ke pade rah gaye


ant mai lakhpaty kai na dhela juda

hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

tera tan nahi hai ye kuch kaam ka

sara sansar hai pyare subh kaam ka

soch le pyare tu apane anzaam ka

naam rat le madhur mere ghan shyam ka

ram ka naam duniya mai hai sabse bada

hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

kavi madhu


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wah shakuntala ji kaafi
din ke baad vapsi hui.


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hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

na raja raha na rani rahi

na budhapa raha na jawani rahi

har vastu yaha aani jani rahi

kahane sunane ko bas yah kahani rahi

char din ke liye yah jhamela juda



hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

raj raja dhare kai dhare rah gaye

kothi bangale khade ke khade rah gaye

sab nagine jade ke jade rah gaye

heere moty pade ke pade rah gaye

ant mai lakhpaty kai na dhela juda

hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

tera tan nahi hai ye kuch kaam ka

sara sansar hai pyare subh kaam ka

soch le pyare tu apane anzaam ka

naam rat le madhur mere ghan shyam ka

ram ka naam duniya mai hai sabse bada

hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

kavi madhu


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wah shakuntala ji kaafi
din ke baad vapsi hui.
THANKS JI

ME INDIA GAYI THY

MERI NANAD KI BETY BAHUT BIMAR CHAL RAHI HAI

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kamaal ki kavita hai. thode shabdon mein hi saare sansar ke bhed khol diye. its amazing. shakuntala ji aapka shukria is kavita ko share karne ke liye. khush rahein.


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bahut sundar........bahut hi sundar.....likhte rahe.


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kamaal ki kavita hai. thode shabdon mein hi saare sansar ke bhed khol diye. its amazing. shakuntala ji aapka shukria is kavita ko share karne ke liye. khush rahein.
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yah mujhe bahut pasand hai

din me kai bar doharaty hu ish jivan ke sach ko

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Love ek dost - 30th November 2010, 10:28 PM

shakuntala ji

Kaise hai aap wakaai me bahut khoob likha hai aapne . aise hi apni rachanao ko share karte rahiyega.
khus rahiyegaa.



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hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

na raja raha na rani rahi

na budhapa raha na jawani rahi

har vastu yaha aani jani rahi

kahane sunane ko bas yah kahani rahi

char din ke liye yah jhamela juda



hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

raj raja dhare kai dhare rah gaye

kothi bangale khade ke khade rah gaye

sab nagine jade ke jade rah gaye

heere moty pade ke pade rah gaye

ant mai lakhpaty kai na dhela juda

hansh jub bhi uda akela uda


bohat khoob shakuntala jii.........




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bohat khoob shakuntala jii.........
tahedil se sukerguzar hu

apko pasand aaya

mera share karna safal hua

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bahut achi rachana ko apane pasand kiya

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shakun dd,
kaisi hain aap?
aaj aapki share ki gayi yeh kavita dekhi, behad pasand aayi.

take care
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un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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Hamein bhi yaha rachna bahut acchi lagi, Shakuntala Ji...!

Thanks for sharing...!

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hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

na raja raha na rani rahi

na budhapa raha na jawani rahi

har vastu yaha aani jani rahi

kahane sunane ko bas yah kahani rahi

char din ke liye yah jhamela juda



hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

raj raja dhare kai dhare rah gaye

kothi bangale khade ke khade rah gaye

sab nagine jade ke jade rah gaye

heere moty pade ke pade rah gaye


ant mai lakhpaty kai na dhela juda

hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

tera tan nahi hai ye kuch kaam ka

sara sansar hai pyare subh kaam ka

soch le pyare tu apane anzaam ka

naam rat le madhur mere ghan shyam ka

ram ka naam duniya mai hai sabse bada

hansh jub bhi uda akela uda

kavi madhu




shakuntala ji ko prem ka pranam........
bahut sunder kavita hai yeh...
ik sunder kavita ke liye daad hazir hai....


anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
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