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~..Muhabbat baant'te rahiye - 15th October 2011, 12:09 PM

मुहब्बत बाँटते रहिए मुहब्बत बढ़ती जाएगी
लुटाओगे इसे जितना ये दौलत बढ़ती जाएगी

ये बहता पानी है प्यारे इसे रुकना नही आता
कलम सर अपना करवा ले मगर झुकना नही आता
ये ज़ाहिर भी नहीं रहती इसे छुपना नही आता
लगा दो जितनी भी कीमत नही बिकना नही आता
पुरानी होगी ये जितनी ही कीमत बढ़ती जाएगी

बड़ी खामोश रहती है ब्यां इसमे नही होता
यकीं ही इसकी फ़ितरत है गुमां इसमे नही होता
है उभरा शख़्श जो डूबा ... निहां इसमे नही होता
सियासत में जो होता है वो हां इसमे नही होता
ना थामा इसका दामन तो सियासत बढ़ती जाएगी

चले आओ चले आओ यही आख़िर ठिकाना है
हुए पैदा इसी से हम इसी में डूब जाना है
दीवाना जो हुआ इसमे असल में वो सयाना है
मैं शायर हूँ मुहब्बत का यही बस मैने माना है
हिमाकत इसको समझोगे हिमाकत बढ़ती जाएगी


मिले गर दर्द भी इसमे कलेजे से लगा लो तुम
नज़र इसको ना लग जाए कहीं दिल में छुपा लो तुम
सहा ये दर्द हो जिसने गले उसको लगा लो तुम
अगर आए हो दुनिया में तो ये पुन्न भी कमा लो तुम
नही तो फ़िक्र दुनिया में तिजारत बढ़ती जाएगी`

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muhabbat baaNt'te rahiye.. muhabbat badhti jayegi
lutaoge ise jitna ........ye doulat badhti jayegi

ye bahta paani hai pyare ise ruknaa nahi aataa
kalam sar apna karwa le magar jhuknaa nahiN aataa
ye zahir bhi nahiN rahti ... ise chupna nahiN aataa
laga do jitni keemat bhi keemat nahiN bikna naiN aata
puraani hogi ye jitni hi keemaat badhti jayegi

badi khamosh rahti hai.... byaan isme nahi hota
yakiN hi iski fitrat hai. gumaan isme nahi hota
hai ubhraa saksh jo doovaa... nihaaN isme nahi hota
siyasat meiN jo hota hai.. haaN isme nahi hota
na thama iska daman to .. siyasat badhti jayegi

chale aao chale aao yahiN aakhir thikana hai
hue paida isi se hum isi meiN doob jana hai
diwana jo huaa isme asal mein woh sayana hai
maiN shayar hun muhabbat ka yahi bas maine mana hai
himakat isko samjhoge .. himakat badhti jayegi

mile gar dard bhi isme kaleje se laga lo tum
nazar isko na lag jaye kahiN dil meiN chupa lo tum
saha ye dard ho jisne gale usko laga lo tum
agar aaye ho dunia meiN to ye punn bhi kama lo tum
nahi to fiKr dunia meiN tizarat badhti jayegi

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मुहब्बत बाँटते रहिए मुहब्बत बढ़ती जाएगी

लुटाओगे इसे जितना ये दौलत बढ़ती जाएगी

ये बहता पानी है प्यारे इसे रुकना नही आता
कलम सर अपना करवा ले मगर झुकना नही आता
ये ज़ाहिर भी नहीं रहती इसे छुपना नही आता
लगा दो जितनी भी कीमत नही बिकना नही आता
पुरानी होगी ये जितनी ही कीमत बढ़ती जाएगी

बड़ी खामोश रहती है ब्यां इसमे नही होता
यकीं ही इसकी फ़ितरत है गुमां इसमे नही होता
है उभरा शख़्श जो डूबा ... निहां इसमे नही होता
सियासत में जो होता है वो हां इसमे नही होता
ना थामा इसका दामन तो सियासत बढ़ती जाएगी

चले आओ चले आओ यही आख़िर ठिकाना है
हुए पैदा इसी से हम इसी में डूब जाना है
दीवाना जो हुआ इसमे असल में वो सयाना है
मैं शायर हूँ मुहब्बत का यही बस मैने माना है
हिमाकत इसको समझोगे हिमाकत बढ़ती जाएगी


मिले गर दर्द भी इसमे कलेजे से लगा लो तुम
नज़र इसको ना लग जाए कहीं दिल में छुपा लो तुम
सहा ये दर्द हो जिसने गले उसको लगा लो तुम
अगर आए हो दुनिया में तो ये पुन्न भी कमा लो तुम
नही तो फ़िक्र दुनिया में तिजारत बढ़ती जाएगी`

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muhabbat baaNt'te rahiye.. muhabbat badhti jayegi
lutaoge ise jitna ........ye doulat badhti jayegi

ye bahta paani hai pyare ise ruknaa nahi aataa
kalam sar apna karwa le magar jhuknaa nahiN aataa
ye zahir bhi nahiN rahti ... ise chupna nahiN aataa
laga do jitni keemat bhi keemat nahiN bikna naiN aata
puraani hogi ye jitni hi keemaat badhti jayegi

badi khamosh rahti hai.... byaan isme nahi hota
yakiN hi iski fitrat hai. gumaan isme nahi hota
hai ubhraa saksh jo doovaa... nihaaN isme nahi hota
siyasat meiN jo hota hai.. haaN isme nahi hota
na thama iska daman to .. siyasat badhti jayegi

chale aao chale aao yahiN aakhir thikana hai
hue paida isi se hum isi meiN doob jana hai
diwana jo huaa isme asal mein woh sayana hai
maiN shayar hun muhabbat ka yahi bas maine mana hai
himakat isko samjhoge .. himakat badhti jayegi

mile gar dard bhi isme kaleje se laga lo tum
nazar isko na lag jaye kahiN dil meiN chupa lo tum
saha ye dard ho jisne gale usko laga lo tum
agar aaye ho dunia meiN to ye punn bhi kama lo tum

nahi to fiKr dunia meiN tizarat badhti jayegi
Janab Fikr Ji..........!

Aap Ki Is Nazm Ke Bara Me Kia Kahun.............. Mujhy Taareef Ke Liye Lafz Nahi Mil Rahay.......... Jitni Khubsurti Se Aap Ne MUHABBAT Ka Naqsha Khencha Hai........ Wo Bila-Shuba Aap Ki Raushan KHayalaat Ka Akkaas Hai...... Us Pr Aap Ka Andaz-e-Bayan Or Khubsurat Alfaaz Ki Rawani, Kamaaaal Tareeeeeen Rahi.....

Boht Boht Pasand Aayi Ye Nazm ............. Karoron Daad Qabool Farmayen Is Khubsurat Takhleeq Pr.......... Sada Khush Rahen Or Yunhi Likhtay Rahen.......

Saabit Ho Gaya Ke Aap MUHABBAT Ke Samandar Me Doob Kr Niklay Hain.... Sari Kefiyyaaaat Haqiqi Hain......

ALLAH KARE ZOR-E-QALAM OR ZIADA




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Janab Fikr Ji..........!

Aap Ki Is Nazm Ke Bara Me Kia Kahun.............. Mujhy Taareef Ke Liye Lafz Nahi Mil Rahay.......... Jitni Khubsurti Se Aap Ne MUHABBAT Ka Naqsha Khencha Hai........ Wo Bila-Shuba Aap Ki Raushan KHayalaat Ka Akkaas Hai...... Us Pr Aap Ka Andaz-e-Bayan Or Khubsurat Alfaaz Ki Rawani, Kamaaaal Tareeeeeen Rahi.....

Boht Boht Pasand Aayi Ye Nazm ............. Karoron Daad Qabool Farmayen Is Khubsurat Takhleeq Pr.......... Sada Khush Rahen Or Yunhi Likhtay Rahen.......

Saabit Ho Gaya Ke Aap MUHABBAT Ke Samandar Me Doob Kr Niklay Hain.... Sari Kefiyyaaaat Haqiqi Hain......

ALLAH KARE ZOR-E-QALAM OR ZIADA
mohabbat hai shakeel bhayee apki...............barna aur kuch nahi hai.......
bas nazm likhte hi post kar di hai............ bahut baar padhne pe shayed kuch aur raddo-badal karuN isme
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ye bahta paani hai pyare ise ruknaa nahi aataa
kalam sar apna karwa le magar jhuknaa nahiN aataa
ye zahir bhi nahiN rahti ... ise chupna nahiN aataa
laga do jitni keemat bhi keemat nahiN bikna naiN aata
puraani hogi ye jitni hi keemaat badhti jayegi


Fikr Ji....... Highlight Line Dobara Dekhiye Ga....

"Laga Do Jitni Qeemat BHi Isay Bikna Nahi Aata" Kia Ye Theak Nahi Rahay Ga....?




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ye bahta paani hai pyare ise ruknaa nahi aataa
kalam sar apna karwa le magar jhuknaa nahiN aataa
ye zahir bhi nahiN rahti ... ise chupna nahiN aataa
laga do jitni keemat bhi keemat nahiN bikna naiN aata
puraani hogi ye jitni hi keemaat badhti jayegi


Fikr Ji....... Highlight Line Dobara Dekhiye Ga....

"Laga Do Jitni Qeemat BHi Isay Bikna Nahi Aata" Kia Ye Theak Nahi Rahay Ga....?
nishaan dehi ka shukriyaa ..........
typo ho gayee roman mai
misraa yuN hai
laga do jitni bhi keemat nahi bikna nahi aataa

लगा दो जितनी भी कीमत नही बिकना नही आता

ab agar kuch kami lage to batayeN

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nishaan dehi ka shukriyaa ..........
typo ho gayee roman mai
misraa yuN hai
laga do jitni bhi keemat nahi bikna nahi aataa

लगा दो जितनी भी कीमत नही बिकना नही आता

ab agar kuch kami lage to batayeN

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Sir Kami To Pehlay Bhi Nahi Thi........ Mujhy BHi Yehi Mehsoos Hua Tha Ke Typing Mistake Hai........ Baqi To Hr Pehlu Se Mukammal Nazm Hai..... Yaqin Maiye Dil Se Daad Nikli Is Kalaam Pr....... Dil Khush Ho Gaya Parh Kr....

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Nice to see so much written about love. Vikas Bhai...! Aur likhaa bhi aapne bahut accha hai...!

Pehle do misre hameiN bahut pasand heiN

Likhte raheiN, ok...?

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कलम सर अपना करवा ले मगर झुकना नही आता


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Nice to see so much written about love. Vikas Bhai...! Aur likhaa bhi aapne bahut accha hai...!

Pehle do misre hameiN bahut pasand heiN

Likhte raheiN, ok...?

Ashirvaad ke saath

nice to see u here . mushkil bhayeee......

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Janumanu sahab Namaskar,


aapne kisi nazm ki zamiin par ise likha hai kya ? jis tarah compose kiya hai ise isliye mujhe aesa laga..


khoobsurat alfaazo ko aapne motiyo ki tarah pirokar pesh kiya hai... ehsaaso ki rawaani k kya kehne..

acha laga aapko padhkar....daad qabool kare



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Janumanu sahab Namaskar,


aapne kisi nazm ki zamiin par ise likha hai kya ? jis tarah compose kiya hai ise isliye mujhe aesa laga..


khoobsurat alfaazo ko aapne motiyo ki tarah pirokar pesh kiya hai... ehsaaso ki rawaani k kya kehne..

acha laga aapko padhkar....daad qabool kare



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shukriyaa sahab, and welcome here


ye nazm kisi aur ki zameen par nahi, magar bahut si hindi ganno k same meter mai hai

like muhabbat zinda rahti hai .. muhabbat mar nahi sakti
aur ...........chalo ik baat fir se ajnabi ban jaye hum dono

aise bahut song milenge aapko

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Vikas behad umda likhtey ho aap, aapka har kalaam hame pasand aata hai so kahne ki jaroorat nahi hai ki yeh bhi pasand aaya
sabhi ahsaas bahut asardaar rahe par yeh last wale to bas dil meiN bas gye....!

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According to me it is very nice ...bahut khoob likha he aapne.......wah ji wah.

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Mohabbat ke alag alag pehlooon ko parakh kar kayi dilchasp comments kiye hain is nazm mein jo behad pasand aaye. Bahaut acche fikr bai.

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Janab Fikr Ji..........!

Aap Ki Is Nazm Ke Bara Me Kia Kahun.............. Mujhy Taareef Ke Liye Lafz Nahi Mil Rahay.......... Jitni Khubsurti Se Aap Ne MUHABBAT Ka Naqsha Khencha Hai........ Wo Bila-Shuba Aap Ki Raushan KHayalaat Ka Akkaas Hai...... Us Pr Aap Ka Andaz-e-Bayan Or Khubsurat Alfaaz Ki Rawani, Kamaaaal Tareeeeeen Rahi.....

Boht Boht Pasand Aayi Ye Nazm ............. Karoron Daad Qabool Farmayen Is Khubsurat Takhleeq Pr.......... Sada Khush Rahen Or Yunhi Likhtay Rahen.......

Saabit Ho Gaya Ke Aap MUHABBAT Ke Samandar Me Doob Kr Niklay Hain.... Sari Kefiyyaaaat Haqiqi Hain......

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KhuSh rahiye.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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sabhi ahsaas bahut asardaar rahe par yeh last wale to bas dil meiN bas gye....!

मिले गर दर्द भी इसमे कलेजे से लगा लो तुम
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बड़ी खामोश रहती है ब्यां इसमे नही होता
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puraani hogi ye jitni hi keemaat badhti jayegi

badi khamosh rahti hai.... byaan isme nahi hota
yakiN hi iski fitrat hai. gumaan isme nahi hota
hai ubhraa saksh jo doovaa... nihaaN isme nahi hota
siyasat meiN jo hota hai.. haaN isme nahi hota
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mile gar dard bhi isme kaleje se laga lo tum
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aapne din bana diya samjho..

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-aapka apnaa

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17th February 2012, 02:22 PM

vikas ji,
aapki tareef kya kare hum, lafz kam padjate hain
aapki nuzm behat pasand aayi
sabse alag soch aapko ko bhid mein alag kar deta hai
aapki yeh andaz-e-bayan behat khubsuurat hai
dero.n daad


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:-ek bujhaa hua dhumil

palak jhapakte hi jo aankh se hu'aa ojhal

woh lauT kar nahiiN aayaa gaye dinoN ki taraH
   
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18th February 2012, 08:54 AM

[B]चले आओ चले आओ यही आख़िर ठिकाना है
हुए पैदा इसी से हम इसी में डूब जाना है/B]

wah kya baat hai.bahut khoob

मिले गर दर्द भी इसमे कलेजे से लगा लो तुम
नज़र इसको ना लग जाए कहीं दिल में छुपा लो तुम
सहा ये दर्द हो जिसने गले उसको लगा लो तुम
अगर आए हो दुनिया में तो ये पुन्न भी कमा लो तुम
नही तो फ़िक्र दुनिया में तिजारत बढ़ती जाएगी`

behad hee khoobsoorat nazm likhee hai bhai aapne.

aapko is dilqash pesh qash par lakho daad.................................tc
   
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