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Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar - 22nd March 2006, 06:54 AM

bahut dard main raha hoon aur kayee din tak kuch post nahee kiya. is site pe ane ke baad pahale baar huya tha ki itne din main alag raha bas parhta raha par kewal parhte rahane bhee achha laga

aaj apne pinzre ko khud hee tor ke ek nazm laya hoon jo parhnege ise batayenge bhee mujhe kaisee kahee hai aisee ummed hai mujhe agar bata diya to eeenam mera hoga na bataya to shikayate nahee par aise main udas rahoonga ummeed karata hoon udas hone ka haq nahee cheena jayega pichle 15 dino main pahlee nazm
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Na tujhe hee raha yad maine bhee bhula diya
Too hee kah de kaise ban sakta tha phir yadgar
Mere pyar ka woh pur sukoon junoon
Tera shabnam ke katre sa woh masoom pyar
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Mere kadmon ke naksh sahil kee ret par bakaya to hain
In ko sizda na kar ibadat se inka rishta naheen hai
Inke peeche gayee too to milegee bas ek bhatkan
too jan le meree rahguzar kisee manzil se wabasta naheen hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Too bahut udas hai mujh ko kho kar maine mana
Meree hokar bhee soch to yahan kya badal jata
Meree bastee main zindgee kuch yoon jeete hain log
Tera pyar khudkashi karta tera husn dhal jata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Aj teree palkon pe mera kajal to nazar ata hai
Tab shayad tere khayalon main mera aks bhee na rahata
To mujhse is andaz main miltee ki kho jatee mujhse
Tere wazood pe kaheen mera naksh bhee na rahata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Udas kyon hai tujhe koyee taj mahal na somp saka
Pyar kewal yadgar ho jaye kafee naheen
Khusboo kee tarah har taraf faile to pyar kahiye
Tere gesoo orh ke agar so jaye kafee naheen
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Taj mahal kaya hai ek shanshah ka junoon
Tera aur mera is junoon main koyee hissa naheen hai
Kal zinadgee kaya thee ek kahanee thee
Aj hayat hayat hai koyee kissa naheen hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Too kisee aur kee anjuman main hai hai to sahee
Too kisee aur kee nazar main hai hai to sahee
Tajmahal main naheen to na sahee itna hee bahut hai
Too kisee ghar main hai hai to sahee
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Tujhe ek imarat naseeb ho gayee warna
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe ghar naheen milta
Too game zindgee se ghabra ke chahe to mar bhee saktee hai
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe zahar naheen milta
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Tajmahal ek kafas(pinzara) hai tera ghar tera nigehban
Phir kis khayal main kho gayee too kis liye mayoos hai
Too yahan kaid naheen mumtaz kee rooh ki manind
too yaha rahtee hai too yahan mahfoos(safe) hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Muhabbat yadgar hai ki naheen sochne ka waqt kahan
Aj mahfoos hona hee masala e hayat hai
Mian naheen tere hamrah to kya itna hee bahut hai
Koyee tere sath hai too kisee ke sath hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar
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Re: Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar - 22nd March 2006, 07:21 AM

anil ji
ek galti anjaane mai ki aur galtion ka karavan ban gaya ,
jane kaise choti si ek baat ka fasana ban gaya
gunah ka ban gayi tab ye choti si galti meri ,
tjb ek mandir pyar ka galti se dhah gaya .

Aaj aapne mujhe maaf kiya aur fir se kuch likha hai uske liye dil se aabhari hoon
ab aapki is kalam par kuch kahna chahti hoon


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bahut dard main raha hoon aur kayee din tak kuch post nahee kiya. is site pe ane ke baad pahale baar huya tha ki itne din main alag raha bas parhta raha par kewal parhte rahane bhee achha laga

aaj apne pinzre ko khud hee tor ke ek nazm laya hoon jo parhnege ise batayenge bhee mujhe kaisee kahee hai aisee ummed hai mujhe agar bata diya to eeenam mera hoga na bataya to shikayate nahee par aise main udas rahoonga ummeed karata hoon udas hone ka haq nahee cheena jayega pichle 15 dino main pahlee nazm
Anil




Na tujhe hee raha yad maine bhee bhula diya
Too hee kah de kaise ban sakta tha phir yadgar
Mere pyar ka woh pur sukoon junoon
Tera shabnam ke katre sa woh masoom pyarRahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

sach ka ek aur roop yaha par ,pyar yyaadgar ---------

Mere kadmon ke naksh sahil kee ret par bakaya to hain
In ko sizda na kar ibadat se inka rishta naheen hai
Inke peeche gayee too to milegee bas ek bhatkan
too jan le meree rahguzar kisee manzil se wabasta naheen hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

peeche jane se kaha rok paya hai pyar kabhi khud ko ----------

Too bahut udas hai mujh ko kho kar maine mana
Meree hokar bhee soch to yahan kya badal jata
Meree bastee main zindgee kuch yoon jeete hain log
Tera pyar khudkashi karta tera husn dhal jata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

pyar se husan sanvarta hai par aaj aapne husan ko sanvarne ke liye pyar ka tyaag dekhkar --------------------------

Aj teree palkon pe mera kajal to nazar ata hai
Tab shayad tere khayalon main mera aks bhee na rahata
To mujhse is andaz main miltee ki kho jatee mujhse
Tere wazood pe kaheen mera naksh bhee na rahata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

sire aisa koi bhaut chahne wala hi kahe sakta hai --------------

Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

sach kahe rahe hain ghronde yaado ke taajmahal kaha saahil ki ret par --------------- ek ek sabad jaise lakho baaten kahata hua


Udas kyon hai tujhe koyee taj mahal na somp saka
Pyar kewal yadgar ho jaye kafee naheen
Khusboo kee tarah har taraf faile to pyar kahiye
Tere gesoo orh ke agar so jaye kafee naheen
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Taj mahal kaya hai ek shanshah ka junoon
Tera aur mera is junoon main koyee hissa naheen hai
Kal zinadgee kaya thee ek kahanee thee
Aj hayat hayat hai koyee kissa naheen hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

pyar junun hi hai wo shanshah ka ho yaa kisi aur ka --------------------------------haan tajmahal banan itna aasan jo nahi

Too kisee aur kee anjuman main hai hai to sahee
Too kisee aur kee nazar main hai hai to sahee
Tajmahal main naheen to na sahee itna hee bahut hai
Too kisee ghar main hai hai to sahee
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Tujhe ek imarat naseeb ho gayee warna
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe ghar naheen milta
Too game zindgee se ghabra ke chahe to mar bhee saktee hai
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe zahar naheen milta
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Tajmahal ek kafas(pinzara) hai tera ghar tera nigehban
Phir kis khayal main kho gayee too kis liye mayoos hai
Too yahan kaid naheen mumtaz kee rooh ki manind
too yaha rahtee hai too yahan mahfoos(safe) hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Muhabbat yadgar hai ki naheen sochne ka waqt kahan
Aj mahfoos hona hee masala e hayat hai
Mian naheen tere hamrah to kya itna hee bahut hai
Koyee tere sath hai too kisee ke sath hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar
Anil


har ek sher apne mai bhaut kuch sikha gaya ,
pyar ki nayi manjilen bana gaya
kisne kaha har aashiq taajmahal nahi bana sakta
aaj aapne likhkar ek ankho tarika sikha diya
pyar mai junun ho ye to jariri tha
par aaj is junnun ne pyar ko naya aakash dikha diya

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22nd March 2006, 09:13 AM

bahut hi khooooooooooob bahut hi accha likha hai bhai............


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na khata na mafi - 22nd March 2006, 09:45 AM

kuch chubhata raha kuch din par woh meree apnee chubahn thee. tum ne kya galtee kaee koyee nahee to mafi kee baat kahan atee hai tum ne bahut man laga ke parha meree is nazm ko achha laga aur bahut detail main kaha is ke liye woh bhee achha laga . ye anzm bahut dil se dalee thee dil ke dard wale section main dobara shukriya ki tum ne parha is ko
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22nd March 2006, 09:46 AM

namsakar anil ji..........

iske bare mein kya kahu.......itni khubsurat hai ki sab kuch is ke samane fika sa nazar aata hai..ek , ek line pad ke us mein dub jane ko dil hota hai.......bahut dino se aapki har nazm
ko pada hai aur sabko ek dusre se behtar paya hai.........


Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

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shukriya meena g - 22nd March 2006, 09:51 AM

tabiyat kaisee hai aap kee? meree is nazm ko parhne ka shukriya achha laga aap ka ana is kalam par
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shukriya mehul - 22nd March 2006, 09:53 AM

mehul bahut bahut shukriya mujhe ek baar phir bahut dil se parhne ke liye
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shukriya ranju - 22nd March 2006, 09:56 AM

ye meree nazm bhee mere dil ke kisee bahut nam hisse se ayee hai aur sab se achee baat ye hai ki is main bhee jo asahar mujhe sab se zyada ache lage tum ne dobara likhe sar jhuka ke shukriya karata hoon meree shayree ko bahut apana pan dene ke liye

sar jhuka ke shukriya karata huya
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Re: Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar - 22nd March 2006, 12:56 PM

Quote:
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bahut dard main raha hoon aur kayee din tak kuch post nahee kiya. is site pe ane ke baad pahale baar huya tha ki itne din main alag raha bas parhta raha par kewal parhte rahane bhee achha laga

aaj apne pinzre ko khud hee tor ke ek nazm laya hoon jo parhnege ise batayenge bhee mujhe kaisee kahee hai aisee ummed hai mujhe agar bata diya to eeenam mera hoga na bataya to shikayate nahee par aise main udas rahoonga ummeed karata hoon udas hone ka haq nahee cheena jayega pichle 15 dino main pahlee nazm
Anil


Na tujhe hee raha yad maine bhee bhula diya
Too hee kah de kaise ban sakta tha phir yadgar
Mere pyar ka woh pur sukoon junoon
Tera shabnam ke katre sa woh masoom pyar
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Mere kadmon ke naksh sahil kee ret par bakaya to hain
In ko sizda na kar ibadat se inka rishta naheen hai
Inke peeche gayee too to milegee bas ek bhatkan
too jan le meree rahguzar kisee manzil se wabasta naheen hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Too bahut udas hai mujh ko kho kar maine mana
Meree hokar bhee soch to yahan kya badal jata
Meree bastee main zindgee kuch yoon jeete hain log
Tera pyar khudkashi karta tera husn dhal jata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Aj teree palkon pe mera kajal to nazar ata hai
Tab shayad tere khayalon main mera aks bhee na rahata
To mujhse is andaz main miltee ki kho jatee mujhse
Tere wazood pe kaheen mera naksh bhee na rahata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Udas kyon hai tujhe koyee taj mahal na somp saka
Pyar kewal yadgar ho jaye kafee naheen
Khusboo kee tarah har taraf faile to pyar kahiye
Tere gesoo orh ke agar so jaye kafee naheen
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Taj mahal kaya hai ek shanshah ka junoon
Tera aur mera is junoon main koyee hissa naheen hai
Kal zinadgee kaya thee ek kahanee thee
Aj hayat hayat hai koyee kissa naheen hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Too kisee aur kee anjuman main hai hai to sahee
Too kisee aur kee nazar main hai hai to sahee
Tajmahal main naheen to na sahee itna hee bahut hai
Too kisee ghar main hai hai to sahee
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Tujhe ek imarat naseeb ho gayee warna
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe ghar naheen milta
Too game zindgee se ghabra ke chahe to mar bhee saktee hai
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe zahar naheen milta
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Tajmahal ek kafas(pinzara) hai tera ghar tera nigehban
Phir kis khayal main kho gayee too kis liye mayoos hai
Too yahan kaid naheen mumtaz kee rooh ki manind
too yaha rahtee hai too yahan mahfoos(safe) hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Muhabbat yadgar hai ki naheen sochne ka waqt kahan
Aj mahfoos hona hee masala e hayat hai
Mian naheen tere hamrah to kya itna hee bahut hai
Koyee tere sath hai too kisee ke sath hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

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shukriya - 22nd March 2006, 01:55 PM

tum meree nazm tak aueen shukriya bahut achha laga tumhe yahan dekh ke
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Bahut khoob.masoomshayer sahab - 22nd March 2006, 04:43 PM

nazro ke raaste dil se guzarte rooh ko cchoo gayi aapki nazm...bahut khoob likha hai aapne...


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shukriya - 22nd March 2006, 06:31 PM

mer shayree aap ke dil ko choo gayee mujeh bahut achha laga kabhee kabhee parhte rahiyega mujhe
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Re: Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar - 22nd March 2006, 08:25 PM

Dear bhai

subah se ishse padh raha hu bar-2 samjh nahi aa raha ki padhta hi raahunga to reply kab dunga...sach mein

itne dino baad aapne ye nazm post ki lekin shayad ishme bhi koi raaz hai...tabhi har sabad itna pyara hai ki jaise aapne itne dino tak uski pooja ki ho

Batane k liye koi aesi line nahi jo sabse pyaari lagi ho....poori hi bohat hi khoobsurat hai

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bahut dard main raha hoon aur kayee din tak kuch post nahee kiya. is site pe ane ke baad pahale baar huya tha ki itne din main alag raha bas parhta raha par kewal parhte rahane bhee achha laga

aaj apne pinzre ko khud hee tor ke ek nazm laya hoon jo parhnege ise batayenge bhee mujhe kaisee kahee hai aisee ummed hai mujhe agar bata diya to eeenam mera hoga na bataya to shikayate nahee par aise main udas rahoonga ummeed karata hoon udas hone ka haq nahee cheena jayega pichle 15 dino main pahlee nazm
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Na tujhe hee raha yad maine bhee bhula diya
Too hee kah de kaise ban sakta tha phir yadgar
Mere pyar ka woh pur sukoon junoon
Tera shabnam ke katre sa woh masoom pyar
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Mere kadmon ke naksh sahil kee ret par bakaya to hain
In ko sizda na kar ibadat se inka rishta naheen hai
Inke peeche gayee too to milegee bas ek bhatkan
too jan le meree rahguzar kisee manzil se wabasta naheen hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Too bahut udas hai mujh ko kho kar maine mana
Meree hokar bhee soch to yahan kya badal jata
Meree bastee main zindgee kuch yoon jeete hain log
Tera pyar khudkashi karta tera husn dhal jata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Aj teree palkon pe mera kajal to nazar ata hai
Tab shayad tere khayalon main mera aks bhee na rahata
To mujhse is andaz main miltee ki kho jatee mujhse
Tere wazood pe kaheen mera naksh bhee na rahata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Udas kyon hai tujhe koyee taj mahal na somp saka
Pyar kewal yadgar ho jaye kafee naheen
Khusboo kee tarah har taraf faile to pyar kahiye
Tere gesoo orh ke agar so jaye kafee naheen
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Taj mahal kaya hai ek shanshah ka junoon
Tera aur mera is junoon main koyee hissa naheen hai
Kal zinadgee kaya thee ek kahanee thee
Aj hayat hayat hai koyee kissa naheen hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Too kisee aur kee anjuman main hai hai to sahee
Too kisee aur kee nazar main hai hai to sahee
Tajmahal main naheen to na sahee itna hee bahut hai
Too kisee ghar main hai hai to sahee
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Tujhe ek imarat naseeb ho gayee warna
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe ghar naheen milta
Too game zindgee se ghabra ke chahe to mar bhee saktee hai
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe zahar naheen milta
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Tajmahal ek kafas(pinzara) hai tera ghar tera nigehban
Phir kis khayal main kho gayee too kis liye mayoos hai
Too yahan kaid naheen mumtaz kee rooh ki manind
too yaha rahtee hai too yahan mahfoos(safe) hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Muhabbat yadgar hai ki naheen sochne ka waqt kahan
Aj mahfoos hona hee masala e hayat hai
Mian naheen tere hamrah to kya itna hee bahut hai
Koyee tere sath hai too kisee ke sath hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar
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Re: Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar - 22nd March 2006, 08:40 PM

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aaj apne pinzre ko khud hee tor ke ek nazm laya hoon jo parhnege ise batayenge bhee mujhe kaisee kahee hai aisee ummed hai mujhe agar bata diya to eeenam mera hoga na bataya to shikayate nahee par aise main udas rahoonga ummeed karata hoon udas hone ka haq nahee cheena jayega pichle 15 dino main pahlee nazm
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Na tujhe hee raha yad maine bhee bhula diya
Too hee kah de kaise ban sakta tha phir yadgar
Mere pyar ka woh pur sukoon junoon
Tera shabnam ke katre sa woh masoom pyar
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Mere kadmon ke naksh sahil kee ret par bakaya to hain
In ko sizda na kar ibadat se inka rishta naheen hai
Inke peeche gayee too to milegee bas ek bhatkan
too jan le meree rahguzar kisee manzil se wabasta naheen hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Too bahut udas hai mujh ko kho kar maine mana
Meree hokar bhee soch to yahan kya badal jata
Meree bastee main zindgee kuch yoon jeete hain log
Tera pyar khudkashi karta tera husn dhal jata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Aj teree palkon pe mera kajal to nazar ata hai
Tab shayad tere khayalon main mera aks bhee na rahata
To mujhse is andaz main miltee ki kho jatee mujhse
Tere wazood pe kaheen mera naksh bhee na rahata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Udas kyon hai tujhe koyee taj mahal na somp saka
Pyar kewal yadgar ho jaye kafee naheen
Khusboo kee tarah har taraf faile to pyar kahiye
Tere gesoo orh ke agar so jaye kafee naheen
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Taj mahal kaya hai ek shanshah ka junoon
Tera aur mera is junoon main koyee hissa naheen hai
Kal zinadgee kaya thee ek kahanee thee
Aj hayat hayat hai koyee kissa naheen hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Too kisee aur kee anjuman main hai hai to sahee
Too kisee aur kee nazar main hai hai to sahee
Tajmahal main naheen to na sahee itna hee bahut hai
Too kisee ghar main hai hai to sahee
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Tujhe ek imarat naseeb ho gayee warna
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe ghar naheen milta
Too game zindgee se ghabra ke chahe to mar bhee saktee hai
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe zahar naheen milta
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Tajmahal ek kafas(pinzara) hai tera ghar tera nigehban
Phir kis khayal main kho gayee too kis liye mayoos hai
Too yahan kaid naheen mumtaz kee rooh ki manind
too yaha rahtee hai too yahan mahfoos(safe) hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Muhabbat yadgar hai ki naheen sochne ka waqt kahan
Aj mahfoos hona hee masala e hayat hai
Mian naheen tere hamrah to kya itna hee bahut hai
Koyee tere sath hai too kisee ke sath hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar
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yuhi apna dard hamesha bantna.mein nahi janti apke dukh ka karan lekin bas yhi kahugi aap jaldi se khush ho jao apko deroin khushiya mile.
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kaise ho diggaj - 23rd March 2006, 05:19 AM

bahut bahut bahut achha laga ki tum ne bar bar parha warna varee nazm hai kayee log aisee anzom ko itna bharee man lete hain ki kulee lene chale jate hai uthwane ke liye apane zehan pe nahee uthate

shuriya diggaj bahut dil se pasand karne ke liye is nazm ko aur sada khush bhee rahana aur pyra pyar likhte bhee rahna
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bahut achha laga - 23rd March 2006, 05:24 AM

sakhi tumhara ana meree shayree ke liye khas bat hotee hai kyon ke tum bahut dino baad site pe atee ho jab bhee atee ho meree kisee na kisee nazm se baat kartee ho bahut achha lagata hai tumhara meree shayree ke liye kcuh kahana apana aur meree shayree ka yoon he ekhayal rakhana
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23rd March 2006, 05:55 AM

Anil ji,

Padha aur acha laga.. aapne title hi kuch aisa diya tha ki padhna hi tha,.... yeh ek rachna ki khoobi hoti hai... aur yeh rachna kaafi achi thi... isne woh baatein kahin ,... jo shayad shabdon mein kehna aasan na hota.. magar aapne kahi..... acha laga padh kar..

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shukriya rohin - 23rd March 2006, 09:04 AM

tum ko nazm achee lagee bahut achha laga aur us ke title achha laga aur achha laga kyon ke wahee is nazm kee rooh hai. bahut dino baad tumahree aur meree nazm kee baatcheet huyee hai achha laga kabhee kabhee aa ke mil liya karo hosla barhta hai
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Re: Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar - 23rd March 2006, 11:33 AM

mohtaram anil saheb
agar yeh kahun ki aapne "tajmehal" kaagaz par taamir kar liya hai to shayad galat na hoga...aapki is imarat (nazm) mein bhi wohi pyar hai jo Shahjahan ki imarat mein hai,,,mohabbat ki wohi khushboo aur kasak basi hai jo sangemarmar ke taj mein hai,,farq bas itna hai wo pathar ka tajmehal hai aur aapne kagaz par ise banaya hai,,, magar rooh dono ki ek hgi hai...!!
bahoot purasar kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne...aapke jazbaat bahoot baakhubi se jaahir ho rahe hai aapke kalaam mein aur haqeeqat ko ek aam insaan ki nazron se dekh kar pesh kiya hai aapne...
meri dil se nikli daad kuboool kijiye...likhte rhaiye..apna khayl rakhiye
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23rd March 2006, 12:23 PM

anil mere bhai

aap ne ek bohat pecheeda nazm ek aazmooda shayer yah philospher ki tarjumaani kerte hue likhi hai.
aap ki kaawish qaabil e satayesh hai.
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Re: Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar - 23rd March 2006, 03:13 PM

Too bahut udas hai mujh ko kho kar maine mana
Meree hokar bhee soch to yahan kya badal jata
Meree bastee main zindgee kuch yoon jeete hain log
Tera pyar khudkashi karta tera husn dhal jata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Aj teree palkon pe mera kajal to nazar ata hai
Tab shayad tere khayalon main mera aks bhee na rahata
To mujhse is andaz main miltee ki kho jatee mujhse
Tere wazood pe kaheen mera naksh bhee na rahata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Too kisee aur kee anjuman main hai hai to sahee
Too kisee aur kee nazar main hai hai to sahee
Tajmahal main naheen to na sahee itna hee bahut hai
Too kisee ghar main hai hai to sahee
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar


Anil Ji,
Wakayee dil se likhi hui rachna ko salaam!
...Kya kahun, bezubaan hokar padna accha laga, kaash meri bezubaani iski tareef ke bol bhi bol jaye...
Khyal jo dil ki gehrayee se sidha kagaz par utar aaye hain...aisi expressiveness GOD gifted hai, is gift ko humare saath share karte rahiye


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manoj bhai - 23rd March 2006, 03:15 PM

mera chota bhai manoj jab parhta hai mujhe bahut pyar se parhata hai aur mujhe us ke remarks main bahut details miltee hain meree apnee hee shayree kee . par maoj par kya guarztee hogee jab romatic shayree se alag rahne wale insan ko romance parhna parata hai bahut bahut skukriya meree shayree ko pyar dene ke liye
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musharraf bhai - 23rd March 2006, 03:17 PM

bahut bahut shukriya mujeh bahut apane pan se parhne ke liye aur bahut kcuh samjhane ke liye aap ke alfaz bahut keemtee hain mere liye
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shalini - 23rd March 2006, 03:20 PM

shalini tum jantee ho? nahee jantee kasam se tum apnee kalam ka jadoo nahee janteen tum meree shayree par jo bhee lafz bikhertee ho tayar ho ajne ke bad parfume chirakne ajise hote hain meree shayree aur sanwar jatee hai. par sach main tum nahe ejanteen tumhre alfaz kee taqat tabhee to kam likhtee ho bahut bahut shukriya meree is nazm ko bahut sara pyar dene ke liye
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Too kisee aur kee anjuman main hai hai to sahee
Too kisee aur kee nazar main hai hai to sahee
Tajmahal main naheen to na sahee itna hee bahut hai
Too kisee ghar main hai hai to sahee
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Tujhe ek imarat naseeb ho gayee warna
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe ghar naheen milta
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ना तुझे ही रहा याद मैने भी भुला दिया
तू ही बता कैसे बन सकता था फिर यादगार
मेरे प्यार का वो पुरसुकून जुनूँ
तेरा शबनम के कतरे सा वो मासूम प्यार
रहने दे ज़िद मुझे मैं कोई शाहजहाँ ना तलाश कर

मेरे क़दमों के नक्श साहिल की रेत पैर बाकाया तो हैं
इन को सज़दा ना कर इबादत से इनका रिश्ता नहीं है
इनके पीछे गयी तू तो मिलेगी बस एक भट्कन
मेरी रहगुज़ार किसी मंज़िल से वाबस्ता नहीं है
रहने दे ज़िद मुझे मैं कोई शाहजहाँ ना तलाश कर

तू बहुत उदास है मुझ को खो कर मैने माना
मेरी होकर भी सोच तो यहाँ क्या बदल जाता
मेरी बस्ती में ज़िंदगी कुछ यूँ जीते हैं लोग
तेरा प्यार ख़ुदकुशी करता तेरा हुस्न ढल जाता
रहने दे ज़िद मुझे मैं कोई शाहजहाँ ना तलाश कर

आज तेरी पलकों पे मेरा काजल तो नज़र आता है
तब शायद तेरे ख़यालों मैं मेरा अक्स भी ना रहता
तो मुझसे इस अंदाज़ मैं मिलती की खो जाती मुझसे
तेरे वाज़ूद पे कहीं मेरा नक्श भी ना रहता
रहने दे ज़िद मुझे मैं कोई शाहजहाँ ना तलाश कर

एक उदासी से पलकों पे आसूं कब ढहरते हैं
एक ग़म के सावन से आँखों मैं बादल नहीं बनते
साहिल की रेत पैर कुछ घरोंडे बनाए हमने काफ़ी है
साहिल की रेत से कभी ताज महल नहीं बनते
रहने दे ज़िद मुझे मैं कोई शाहजहाँ ना तलाश कर

उदास क्यों है तुझे कोई ताज महल ना सॉंप सका
प्यार केवल यादगार हो जाए काफ़ी नहीं
खुसबू की तरह हैर तरफ़ फैले तो प्यार कहिये
तेरे गेसू ओढ़ के अगर सो जाए काफ़ी नहीं
रहने दे ज़िद मुझे मैं कोई शाहजहाँ ना तलाश कर

ताज महल क्या है एक शांशाह का जुनूँ
तेरा और मेरा इस जुनूँ मैं कोई हिस्सा नहीं है
कल ज़िंदगी क्या थी एक कहानी थी फक़त
आज हयात हयात है कोई क़िस्सा नहीं है
रहने दे ज़िद मुझे मैं कोई शाहजहाँ ना तलाश कर

तू किसी और की अंजुमन में है है तो सही
तू किसी और की नज़र में है है तो सही
ताजमहल मैं नहीं तो ना सही इतना ही बहुत है
तू किसी के घर मैं है है तो सही
रहने दे ज़िद मुझे मैं कोई शाहजहाँ ना तलाश कर

तुझे एक इमारत नसीब हो गयी वरना
यहाँ वो भी जी रहे हैं जिन्हे घर नहीं मिलता
तू ग़मे ज़िंदगी से घबरा के चाहे तो मर भी सकती है
यहाँ वोह भी जी रहे हैं जिन्हे ज़हर नहीं मिलता
रहने दे ज़िद मुझे मैं कोई शाहजहाँ ना तलाश कर

ताजमहल शहन्शाह का कफस(पिंज़ारा)
तेरा घर तेरा निगेहबान है
फिर किस ख़यल मैं खो गयी तू किस लिये मायूस है
तू यहाँ क़ैद नहीं मुमताज़ की रूह की मनींद
तू यहा रहती है तू यहाँ महफूज़ है
रहने दे ज़िद मुझे मैं कोई शाहजहाँ ना तलाश कर

मुहबत यादगार है की नहीं सोचने का वक़्त कहाँ
आज महफूज़ होना ही मसला-ए-हयात है
में नहीं तेरे हमराह तो क्या इतना ही बहुत है
कोई तेरे साथ है तू किसी के साथ है
रहने दे ज़िद मुझे मैं कोई शाहजहाँ ना तलाश
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Na tujhe hee raha yad maine bhee bhula diya
Too hee kah de kaise ban sakta tha phir yadgar
Mere pyar ka woh pur sukoon junoon
Tera shabnam ke katre sa woh masoom pyar
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Mere kadmon ke naksh sahil kee ret par bakaya to hain
In ko sizda na kar ibadat se inka rishta naheen hai
Inke peeche gayee too to milegee bas ek bhatkan
too jan le meree rahguzar kisee manzil se wabasta naheen hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Too bahut udas hai mujh ko kho kar maine mana
Meree hokar bhee soch to yahan kya badal jata
Meree bastee main zindgee kuch yoon jeete hain log
Tera pyar khudkashi karta tera husn dhal jata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Aj teree palkon pe mera kajal to nazar ata hai
Tab shayad tere khayalon main mera aks bhee na rahata
To mujhse is andaz main miltee ki kho jatee mujhse
Tere wazood pe kaheen mera naksh bhee na rahata
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
sahil kee ret par kuch gharonde banaye hamne kafee hai
Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Udas kyon hai tujhe koyee taj mahal na somp saka
Pyar kewal yadgar ho jaye kafee naheen
Khusboo kee tarah har taraf faile to pyar kahiye
Tere gesoo orh ke agar so jaye kafee naheen
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Taj mahal kaya hai ek shanshah ka junoon
Tera aur mera is junoon main koyee hissa naheen hai
Kal zinadgee kaya thee ek kahanee thee
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Too kisee ghar main hai hai to sahee
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Tujhe ek imarat naseeb ho gayee warna
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe ghar naheen milta
Too game zindgee se ghabra ke chahe to mar bhee saktee hai
Yahan woh bhee jee rahe hain jinhe zahar naheen milta
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Tajmahal ek kafas(pinzara) hai tera ghar tera nigehban
Phir kis khayal main kho gayee too kis liye mayoos hai
Too yahan kaid naheen mumtaz kee rooh ki manind
too yaha rahtee hai too yahan mahfoos(safe) hai
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar

Muhabbat yadgar hai ki naheen sochne ka waqt kahan
Aj mahfoos hona hee masala e hayat hai
Mian naheen tere hamrah to kya itna hee bahut hai
Koyee tere sath hai too kisee ke sath hai
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Ek udasee se palkon pe ansoon kab thaharte hain
Ek gam ke sawan se ankhon main badal naheen bante
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Sahil kee ret se kabhee taj mahal naheen bante
Rahne de zid mujhe main koyee shahjahan talash na kar
Anil

Anil ji...........aapki kalam jab chalti hai to har baat saaf saaf likhti jaati hai...aapka likhne ka yeh alag andaaz hame behadd pasand hai...bazm meiN phir se lout kar aayeiye, es bazm ko aapka intezaar hai.

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Ye ek baat aapki poori nazam ko kehti hai.. aur poori nazam is ek baat ka intzaar karti hai.. bohay bhadiya..

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