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पानी पानी करो/ panee panee karo - 2nd May 2015, 06:51 AM

दूध का दूध पानी का पानी करो
मेरे मुन्सिफ ज़रा मेहरबानी करो

नींद आये मुझे भी कोई एक शब
मेरी खारों को तुम रातरानी करो

लिख के लब से लबों पे करो दस्तख़त
हर सही बात को ना ज़ुबानी करो

अपने किस्से भी कह दो सच की तरह
औ हक़ीक़त को मेरी कहानी करो

खताएं अभी तक थीं मेरी फक़त
हुई जो हुई आनी जानी करो

मेरे तो अदब में ये आता नही
चाहो जिसे पानी पानी करो

रातरानी या बन के कोई चाँद तुम
बाम पे आ के शब ये सुहानी करो

बचपाना ही नही छोड़ती प्यार में
तुम मेरी जवानी सयानी करो

मासूम जी खारे सागर में हो
पानी में रहो पानी पानी करो

doodh kaa doodh panee kaa panee karo
mere munsif zaraa meharbaanee karo

neend aaye mujhe bhee koyee ek shab
meree khaaron ko tum raat raanee karo

likh ke lab se labon pe karo dastkhat
har sahee baat ko na zubaanee karo

apne kisse bhee kah do sach kee tarah
au haqeeqat ko meree kahanee karo

khatayen abhee tak theen meree faqat
huyee jo huyee aanee jaanee karo

mere to adab men ye aataa nahee
chaaho jise paanee paanee karo

raat rani ya ban ke koyee chaand tum
baam pe aa ke shab ye suhaanee karo

bachpana hee nahee chodatee pyar men
tum meree jawaanee sayaanee karo

masoom jee khaare sagar men ho
paanee men raho panee panee karo


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दूध का दूध पानी का पानी करो
मेरे मुन्सिफ ज़रा मेहरबानी करो

नींद आये मुझे भी कोई एक शब
मेरी खारों को तुम रातरानी करो

लिख के लब से लबों पे करो दस्तख़त
हर सही बात को ना ज़ुबानी करो

अपने किस्से भी कह दो सच की तरह
औ हक़ीक़त को मेरी कहानी करो

खताएं अभी तक थीं मेरी फक़त
हुई जो हुई आनी जानी करो

मेरे तो अदब में ये आता नही
चाहो जिसे पानी पानी करो

रातरानी या बन के कोई चाँद तुम
बाम पे आ के शब ये सुहानी करो

बचपाना ही नही छोड़ती प्यार में
तुम मेरी जवानी सयानी करो

मासूम जी खारे सागर में हो
पानी में रहो पानी पानी करो

doodh kaa doodh panee kaa panee karo
mere munsif zaraa meharbaanee karo

neend aaye mujhe bhee koyee ek shab
meree khaaron ko tum raat raanee karo

likh ke lab se labon pe karo dastkhat
har sahee baat ko na zubaanee karo

apne kisse bhee kah do sach kee tarah
au haqeeqat ko meree kahanee karo

khatayen abhee tak theen meree faqat
huyee jo huyee aanee jaanee karo

mere to adab men ye aataa nahee
chaaho jise paanee paanee karo

raat rani ya ban ke koyee chaand tum
baam pe aa ke shab ye suhaanee karo

bachpana hee nahee chodatee pyar men
tum meree jawaanee sayaanee karo

masoom jee khaare sagar men ho
paanee men raho panee panee karo
Wah Wah Anil ji kya khoobsurat andaaz-e-bayaan laaye hai aap. kya rawaangi this is kalaam mein mazaa aa gaya har sher umdaa hua hai. Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa aur aate rahiYeGaa



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दूध का दूध पानी का पानी करो
मेरे मुन्सिफ ज़रा मेहरबानी करो

नींद आये मुझे भी कोई एक शब
मेरी खारों को तुम रातरानी करो

लिख के लब से लबों पे करो दस्तख़त
हर सही बात को ना ज़ुबानी करो

अपने किस्से भी कह दो सच की तरह
औ हक़ीक़त को मेरी कहानी करो

खताएं अभी तक थीं मेरी फक़त
हुई जो हुई आनी जानी करो

मेरे तो अदब में ये आता नही
चाहो जिसे पानी पानी करो

रातरानी या बन के कोई चाँद तुम
बाम पे आ के शब ये सुहानी करो

बचपाना ही नही छोड़ती प्यार में
तुम मेरी जवानी सयानी करो

मासूम जी खारे सागर में हो
पानी में रहो पानी पानी करो

doodh kaa doodh panee kaa panee karo
mere munsif zaraa meharbaanee karo

neend aaye mujhe bhee koyee ek shab
meree khaaron ko tum raat raanee karo

likh ke lab se labon pe karo dastkhat
har sahee baat ko na zubaanee karo

apne kisse bhee kah do sach kee tarah
au haqeeqat ko meree kahanee karo

khatayen abhee tak theen meree faqat
huyee jo huyee aanee jaanee karo

mere to adab men ye aataa nahee
chaaho jise paanee paanee karo

raat rani ya ban ke koyee chaand tum
baam pe aa ke shab ye suhaanee karo

bachpana hee nahee chodatee pyar men
tum meree jawaanee sayaanee karo

masoom jee khaare sagar men ho
paanee men raho panee panee karo


Namaskaar Anil ji....behad khoobsurat aur kuch bade romantic sher pesh kiye aapne, accha lga padkar.

regards


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Namaskaar Anil ji....behad khoobsurat aur kuch bade romantic sher pesh kiye aapne, accha lga padkar.

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3rd May 2015, 09:24 AM

Masoom bhaiya

Pranaam

Kaise hain aap

Bahot khoob koshish hamesha ki tarah.... aapko bazm mein dekh kar bahot hi khushi huii...aate rahiye bazm men

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दूध का दूध पानी का पानी करो
मेरे मुन्सिफ ज़रा मेहरबानी करो

नींद आये मुझे भी कोई एक शब
मेरी खारों को तुम रातरानी करो

लिख के लब से लबों पे करो दस्तख़त
हर सही बात को ना ज़ुबानी करो

अपने किस्से भी कह दो सच की तरह
औ हक़ीक़त को मेरी कहानी करो

खताएं अभी तक थीं मेरी फक़त
हुई जो हुई आनी जानी करो

मेरे तो अदब में ये आता नही
चाहो जिसे पानी पानी करो

रातरानी या बन के कोई चाँद तुम
बाम पे आ के शब ये सुहानी करो

बचपाना ही नही छोड़ती प्यार में
तुम मेरी जवानी सयानी करो

मासूम जी खारे सागर में हो
पानी में रहो पानी पानी करो

doodh kaa doodh panee kaa panee karo
mere munsif zaraa meharbaanee karo

neend aaye mujhe bhee koyee ek shab
meree khaaron ko tum raat raanee karo

likh ke lab se labon pe karo dastkhat
har sahee baat ko na zubaanee karo

apne kisse bhee kah do sach kee tarah
au haqeeqat ko meree kahanee karo

khatayen abhee tak theen meree faqat
huyee jo huyee aanee jaanee karo

mere to adab men ye aataa nahee
chaaho jise paanee paanee karo

raat rani ya ban ke koyee chaand tum
baam pe aa ke shab ye suhaanee karo

bachpana hee nahee chodatee pyar men
tum meree jawaanee sayaanee karo

masoom jee khaare sagar men ho
paanee men raho panee panee karo
Bohut khoob! Pani Ki tarah freely flowing.

Daad kabool karein.


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4th May 2015, 12:50 PM

raat rani ya ban ke koyee chaand tum
baam pe aa ke shab ye suhaanee karo

bachpana hee nahee chodatee pyar men
tum meree jawaanee sayaanee karo


Masoom Shayar saahab ...

Adaab ....

Pehli dafa aap ka kalaam phad raha hooN,,
aur yakeen janiye dil khush ho gaya lafz lafz phad kar .....

aap ne meHfil ko bohat hiii aala darjy kii ghazal inayat kii hy...

beshumar daad haazir hy .. qabool kejiye ga!


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bahot khub, Massomji

dhero daad hamaari jaanib se

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Bohut khoob! Pani Ki tarah freely flowing.

Daad kabool karein.
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kyaa baat hai anil bhai...... aapne to chand lafzon ko jaise zubaan de di ho... har lafz kuch kahtaa ho jaise...... aapko arse baad padhnaa bahot accha laga.... aate rahiye... likhte raiye........

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waah bahut achha laga aapko padhna anil jii...
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kyaa baat hai anil bhai...... aapne to chand lafzon ko jaise zubaan de di ho... har lafz kuch kahtaa ho jaise...... aapko arse baad padhnaa bahot accha laga.... aate rahiye... likhte raiye........

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waah kya baat hai...kamaal ke ehsas lage mujhe.....daad kubul karein.



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