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Katoonga/काटूंगा - 15th May 2015, 11:17 PM

mujh ko shab bhar ye raat kaategee
uff main kaise ye raat katoongaa?

log kahate hain too farebee hai
main bhee kis kis kee baat katoongaa

ab to mujh men nahee hoon main bakee
zindgee kis ke sath katoongaa

jo bhee man men hai us ko likhata hoon
man rukegaa jo hath kaatoonga?

mujh se milane too sub ko aayegee
tujh ko lagata hai raat katoongaa?

मुझ को शब भर ये रात काटेगी
उफ्फ मैं कैसे ये रात काटूंगा?

लोग कहते हैं तू फरेबी है
मैं भी किस किस की बात काटूंगा

अब तो मुझ में नही हूँ मैं बाकी
ज़िंदगी किस के साथ काटूंगा

जो भी मन में है उस को लिखता हूँ
मन रुकेगा जो हाथ काटूंगा?

मुझ से मिलने तू सुब को आयेगी
तुझ को लगता है रात काटूंगा?


mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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16th May 2015, 01:16 AM

sada se lafzon meiN ek nazuk sa khayal ...

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16th May 2015, 08:43 AM

dard ke ehsason se pur Bahu khoob ghazal anil jii..

अब तो मुझ में नही हूँ मैं बाकी
ज़िंदगी किस के साथ काटूंगा
Bahut khoob...



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17th May 2015, 07:10 AM

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sada se lafzon meiN ek nazuk sa khayal ...

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man se shukriyaa sadgee ko sada se mans e samhajhane ke liye


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dard ke ehsason se pur Bahu khoob ghazal anil jii..

अब तो मुझ में नही हूँ मैं बाकी
ज़िंदगी किस के साथ काटूंगा
Bahut khoob...
dil eke gaharayee se shukriyaa achaa lagaa aap aaye yahan


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17th May 2015, 08:42 AM

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mujh ko shab bhar ye raat kaategee
uff main kaise ye raat katoongaa?

log kahate hain too farebee hai
main bhee kis kis kee baat katoongaa

ab to mujh men nahee hoon main bakee
zindgee kis ke sath katoongaa

jo bhee man men hai us ko likhata hoon
man rukegaa jo hath kaatoonga?

mujh se milane too sub ko aayegee
tujh ko lagata hai raat katoongaa?

मुझ को शब भर ये रात काटेगी
उफ्फ मैं कैसे ये रात काटूंगा?

लोग कहते हैं तू फरेबी है
मैं भी किस किस की बात काटूंगा

अब तो मुझ में नही हूँ मैं बाकी
ज़िंदगी किस के साथ काटूंगा

जो भी मन में है उस को लिखता हूँ
मन रुकेगा जो हाथ काटूंगा?

मुझ से मिलने तू सुब को आयेगी
तुझ को लगता है रात काटूंगा?
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shukriyaa janaab yunhi likhte rahiYe aur humhe aise nayaab ashaar milte rahe..isi dua mein..



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17th May 2015, 04:09 PM

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log kahate hain too farebee hai
main bhee kis kis kee baat katoongaa


mujh se milane too sub ko aayegee
tujh ko lagata hai raat katoongaa?

Waaah.... Kya baat hai.
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Bohot khoob ehsasaat aur bayaanagi huyi hai jenab.
Dil se daad qubool farmaayeiN.
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