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Anil Ji waise to aapki kalam se nikli har ghazal, nazm dil tak pahunchti hai par phfir bhi aapki pasandida kaunsi hai inmein se vo jaanna chahta hoon aur agar usse juda koi qissa bhi ho to beshak share kijiyegaa. Aap apni in rachnaaon ka link bhi denge to humhari daad ko sabab mil jaayegaa.....

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ek nazm jo us din sunayee thee mujhe khaas pasand hai aur wo banee thee khaas sabab se

mere ek dost ko ko coldg kee sab se sundar ladakee se pyaar ho gayaa izhaar bhee kiyaa par jaisaa maloom hee thaa baat nahee banee kyon ki dono kee shkhsiyat muqtalif thee . mere dost ne us ladakee ko chandee kee ek angoothee banwaa ke dee jo us kee angulee men ek dam se fit ayee the . us ladakee ne poochaa are tumhe meree angulee kaa size kaise pataa thaa

to us ladake ne kahaa din raat ke 24 hrs men se main 16 hrs tumhe sochataa hoon to itnaa to jaan hee liyaa is gaharee soch se ki tumahree angulee kaa size kyaa hai

phir mere dost ne kaha us kee is baat par kuch likhoon aur maine ye nazm likhee ise aaj tak kaheen bhee post nahee kiyaa hai maine tumhare supurd kar rahaa hoon

mere as pas ki ahawa ka ek khas dayra hai
jismain too naheen
phir mujhe teree khusboo ka rang kyon maloom hai
kabee jane anjane na teree anguliyin ko choo saka
na hamne sath kisee bher bharee bas main safar kiya
phir mujhe ye kisne bata diya
tujhe choo lene par kaya ho sakta hai

mere ghar chandanee kab
koyee chand le ke aatee hai
phir main kaise janata hoon
too bindiaa kaisee lagatee hai

tera mahaul mujhe betahzeeb logon main ginta hai
mujh ko najren utha ke dekhne ka sawal hee kahan
phir main kaise janta hoon najren mil jane par too
kaise sharmayegee kaise ankhen jhukayegee

tere joothe pyale main chaye peene ki
khush naseebee
mujhe kahan hasil hai
phir main tere narm hothon ki
garmee se wakif kyon hoon

kyon janataa hoon tera andaje byan kaya hai
jab kee jameen asman ke darmiya
kaheen koyee jagah naheen
jahan hamne sath bat kee ho
mulakat kee ho

in sawalon par jab too nazar dalegee
e meree roohe nazm
tab samjhegee mere khayalon ne tujhe
kitnee baree kee se dekha hai
sach kahna kahen ye bhee
mera guanah to naheen


ye nazm around 34 saal pahale maine likhee thee padhane waalon men se bahut se log paida nahee huye honge

shukriyaa yaad dilaane ke liye dost ka aur us ladakee kaa naam jaan ke nahee likhaa hai yahana use chipaa hee rahane do

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Anil Ji waise to aapki kalam se nikli har ghazal, nazm dil tak pahunchti hai par phfir bhi aapki pasandida kaunsi hai inmein se vo jaanna chahta hoon aur agar usse juda koi qissa bhi ho to beshak share kijiyegaa. Aap apni in rachnaaon ka link bhi denge to humhari daad ko sabab mil jaayegaa.....

Intezaar mein....


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ek nazm jo us din sunayee thee mujhe khaas pasand hai aur wo banee thee khaas sabab se

mere ek dost ko ko coldg kee sab se sundar ladakee se pyaar ho gayaa izhaar bhee kiyaa par jaisaa maloom hee thaa baat nahee banee kyon ki dono kee shkhsiyat muqtalif thee . mere dost ne us ladakee ko chandee kee ek angoothee banwaa ke dee jo us kee angulee men ek dam se fit ayee the . us ladakee ne poochaa are tumhe meree angulee kaa size kaise pataa thaa

to us ladake ne kahaa din raat ke 24 hrs men se main 16 hrs tumhe sochataa hoon to itnaa to jaan hee liyaa is gaharee soch se ki tumahree angulee kaa size kyaa hai

phir mere dost ne kaha us kee is baat par kuch likhoon aur maine ye nazm likhee ise aaj tak kaheen bhee post nahee kiyaa hai maine tumhare supurd kar rahaa hoon

mere as pas ki ahawa ka ek khas dayra hai
jismain too naheen
phir mujhe teree khusboo ka rang kyon maloom hai
kabee jane anjane na teree anguliyin ko choo saka
na hamne sath kisee bher bharee bas main safar kiya
phir mujhe ye kisne bata diya
tujhe choo lene par kaya ho sakta hai

mere ghar chandanee kab
koyee chand le ke aatee hai
phir main kaise janata hoon
too bindiaa kaisee lagatee hai

tera mahaul mujhe betahzeeb logon main ginta hai
mujh ko najren utha ke dekhne ka sawal hee kahan
phir main kaise janta hoon najren mil jane par too
kaise sharmayegee kaise ankhen jhukayegee

tere joothe pyale main chaye peene ki
khush naseebee
mujhe kahan hasil hai
phir main tere narm hothon ki
garmee se wakif kyon hoon

kyon janataa hoon tera andaje byan kaya hai
jab kee jameen asman ke darmiya
kaheen koyee jagah naheen
jahan hamne sath bat kee ho
mulakat kee ho

in sawalon par jab too nazar dalegee
e meree roohe nazm
tab samjhegee mere khayalon ne tujhe
kitnee baree kee se dekha hai
sach kahna kahen ye bhee
mera guanah to naheen


ye nazm around 34 saal pahale maine likhee thee padhane waalon men se bahut se log paida nahee huye honge

shukriyaa yaad dilaane ke liye dost ka aur us ladakee kaa naam jaan ke nahee likhaa hai yahana use chipaa hee rahane do

Anil ji....aapki awaaz me jab ye nazm suni thi..iski roomaniyat me kho gayi thi main....aaj padh ke dubara ise mahsoos kiya....bahut pyari nazm hai... shukriya ye qissa hamse share karne ke liye..............



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ham log char bhayee bahan hain

bachpan se aaj tak gahare prem men bandhe huye hain ham sal men 1 2 baar sabhee kaa milana aho jataa hai varnaa 2 sis aksar milatee rahatee hain sharatee bahut the ham aur yaas aisaa kaisaa yug thaa ham log raat ko 8 ya 8 30 tak khel ke aate har din late ane ke karan dand khaate T V ka bas naam suna thaa pahale baar T V aur fridge meree 12 th class men ayaa aur pahalee baar cooler jab main Graduate hon wala tha tab ayaa

ek din meree aur deedee kee ladayee ho gayee us ne mujhe baingan se maraa sabzee kaat rahee thee maine rone lagaa mummy ke paas bhagaa mummy kaa bahut sar dard ho rahaa thaa sare bhayee bahano kee dande se samuhik pitaaye huyee chotaa bhayee mummy mummy kahate huye neeche se ghar ayaa use darwaje par hee ek dandaa pada wo to waisa ka waisa hee neeche bhaag gayaa bahut mazedar thaa bachapan jo haridwar men beetaa


ham charon kee tasweer bhee dal rahaa hoon


Anil ji bahut accha lga aapke bachpan ki baate sun kar aur tasveer bahut payri lagi...shukriya

mera agla sawaal

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ek nazm jo us din sunayee thee mujhe khaas pasand hai aur wo banee thee khaas sabab se

mere ek dost ko ko coldg kee sab se sundar ladakee se pyaar ho gayaa izhaar bhee kiyaa par jaisaa maloom hee thaa baat nahee banee kyon ki dono kee shkhsiyat muqtalif thee . mere dost ne us ladakee ko chandee kee ek angoothee banwaa ke dee jo us kee angulee men ek dam se fit ayee the . us ladakee ne poochaa are tumhe meree angulee kaa size kaise pataa thaa

to us ladake ne kahaa din raat ke 24 hrs men se main 16 hrs tumhe sochataa hoon to itnaa to jaan hee liyaa is gaharee soch se ki tumahree angulee kaa size kyaa hai

phir mere dost ne kaha us kee is baat par kuch likhoon aur maine ye nazm likhee ise aaj tak kaheen bhee post nahee kiyaa hai maine tumhare supurd kar rahaa hoon

mere as pas ki ahawa ka ek khas dayra hai
jismain too naheen
phir mujhe teree khusboo ka rang kyon maloom hai
kabee jane anjane na teree anguliyin ko choo saka
na hamne sath kisee bher bharee bas main safar kiya
phir mujhe ye kisne bata diya
tujhe choo lene par kaya ho sakta hai

mere ghar chandanee kab
koyee chand le ke aatee hai
phir main kaise janata hoon
too bindiaa kaisee lagatee hai

tera mahaul mujhe betahzeeb logon main ginta hai
mujh ko najren utha ke dekhne ka sawal hee kahan
phir main kaise janta hoon najren mil jane par too
kaise sharmayegee kaise ankhen jhukayegee

tere joothe pyale main chaye peene ki
khush naseebee
mujhe kahan hasil hai
phir main tere narm hothon ki
garmee se wakif kyon hoon

kyon janataa hoon tera andaje byan kaya hai
jab kee jameen asman ke darmiya
kaheen koyee jagah naheen
jahan hamne sath bat kee ho
mulakat kee ho

in sawalon par jab too nazar dalegee
e meree roohe nazm
tab samjhegee mere khayalon ne tujhe
kitnee baree kee se dekha hai
sach kahna kahen ye bhee
mera guanah to naheen


ye nazm around 34 saal pahale maine likhee thee padhane waalon men se bahut se log paida nahee huye honge

shukriyaa yaad dilaane ke liye dost ka aur us ladakee kaa naam jaan ke nahee likhaa hai yahana use chipaa hee rahane do
Anil ji us din bhi waah nikli thi aur aaj bhi waah nikli hai ise padh karke shukriyaa aapne khaaksaar ke ek sawaal pe itni tavajoo di......



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anil ji....mere aur dhaval ji ke sawaal ka jawaab nhi diya aapne....he intzaar hai..........



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anil ji....mere aur dhaval ji ke sawaal ka jawaab nhi diya aapne....he intzaar hai..........

mujeh lagata hai jsi sawal kee tum baat kar rahee ho us kaa ye ajwab maine 13 jan ko diyaa thaa agar koyee aur sawal mujh se chootaa ho to plz ek baar aur likh do

maine bahut baar asahaay mahsoos kiyaa hai khud ko maine 1990-93 tak ek bussiness kee koshish kee thee meraa partner ne mere vishwas ko chala mujhe pata hee nahee chalaa kab main 50-50 se partnership chalatee huyee 40-60 par pahucn gayee aur us ke baad main zero par hee aa gayaa

us waqt eeshwar ne mera sath diyaa aur main nirshaa se bahar ayaa aur dobara jeewan aur kavitaa men man lagayaa mujhe bahut thes is baat se lagee ki jise bhayee kee tarah mana jahan dastakhat mange ankh band kar ke maine kiye us ne hee itnaa bada chal kiyaa un dino mujhe laga tha kavitaa kavi sab chale jaate hain in kaa koyee mooly nahee aur maine likhaa thaa

yoon nahee kavitaa ki tujh se pyar nahee rahaa
yoon bhee nahee ki pahale sa khumaar nahee rahaa
toone duniyaa ko badalane kee kasam khaayee thee
bas teree kasam pe ab aitbaar nahee rahaa[/QUOTE]





agar ham sahee nahee pakade hain ek baar dobraa sawal bata do plzz


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anil ji...bahut saralta se aap aabhi sawalon ke jawaab de rahe hain...aap se mil ke bhi aisa hee laga ki aap kafi saral swabhav ke dhani hain...

Par main poochna chahoongi..kya koi aisi baat hai jis par aapko gussa aata ...
Kabhi aisa hua hai ki gusse me kahi huyi baat ya faisle par aapko afsos karna pada ho...



Sawaal fir se post kiya hai anil ji...maaf kijiyega..aapko pareshan kar rahi hun.....



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Anil ji bahut accha lga aapke bachpan ki baate sun kar aur tasveer bahut payri lagi...shukriya

mera agla sawaal

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SDC ke kaun se aise member hai, jinse aap miley nahi hai par aapki icsha hai ki aik baar jaroor mila jaye

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waise haal hee men madhu sarika praveen jee mast in sab se bhee mialanaa huyaa waise delhi walon ko apas men milawane kee ya dlhi men sab ko milawane kee pooree zimmedaree pulkit ne lee huyee hai


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anil ji...bahut saralta se aap aabhi sawalon ke jawaab de rahe hain...aap se mil ke bhi aisa hee laga ki aap kafi saral swabhav ke dhani hain...

Par main poochna chahoongi..kya koi aisi baat hai jis par aapko gussa aata ...
Kabhi aisa hua hai ki gusse me kahi huyi baat ya faisle par aapko afsos karna pada ho...



Sawaal fir se post kiya hai anil ji...maaf kijiyega..aapko pareshan kar rahi hun.....
gussasa bahut see baaton par ataa hai par mafee mang lene men galatee maan lene men kabhee chichak nahee hotee gusse men bhee kisee ko apmanait nahee kar pataa main par haan kabhee bachhon par zyda gussa kar jaoon to dukh hotaa hai kisee bahut achhe se dost ko kuch kah jaoon to man hotaa hai main mere shabdon ko palat sakoon par zyada gussa mujhe logon ke shadyantron par ataa hai doston ke beech politics chalane lage tab aataa hai koyee gusse men saste alfaaz oistemal kare to ataa hai


sab se zyada gussa tab ataa hai jab k kisee ko koyee ise galee detaa hai ya amanit kartaa hai ki jise apmanit kiyaa jaa rahaa hai wo kamzor insaan hai badale men kcuh kah naee sakegaa


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26th January 2016, 08:36 AM

shukriyaa mahu meree sadaa see zindgee kee sadaa see baaton ko padahne ke liye samajahne ke liye


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27th January 2016, 11:08 AM

namaskaar anil ji......

sdc ki baat karein to roz yahaan kai member judte hain jinhe shayri padhne aur likhne ka shauk hota hai..aap un naye members se kuch aisa kahna chahenge jo unke liye ek seekh ho ya jise aap shayri me aage badhne ka moolmantra maante hon....



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namaskaar anil ji......

sdc ki baat karein to roz yahaan kai member judte hain jinhe shayri padhne aur likhne ka shauk hota hai..aap un naye members se kuch aisa kahna chahenge jo unke liye ek seekh ho ya jise aap shayri me aage badhne ka moolmantra maante hon....
madhu kayee log shayari ko tareef ke liye fashion ke liye apanate hain aur wo log to is lalach men doosre kee shayari bhee apane naam se sunaa jaate hain to meraa kahanaa ye hai shayari se prem aap shayari kar ke nahee jataate hain balki use padh ke bhee jataate hain

aap achee shayari ko us ke shayar ke nam se bhee sunayenge to wah wah uatnee hee milegee aur jo log shayari karanaa chahte hain to kisee ne kabhee kaha thaa mujh se ki aap ek sher likhane se pahale sou sher padho jitnaa zyadaa padhoge utnaa zyadaa hee seekhoge aur jab likho khud kee dhadakano ko follow karo kisee kee nakl nahee karane kee zaroorat saflataa zaroor milegee agar gazal kaa shouk hai to bahr kafiyaa in sab ko seekhane kee koshish bhee lazmee hai

aur haan dil men kisee ke liye nafarat rakkhe bina alikho shayari prem kee paribhashaa hai bas


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madhu kayee log shayari ko tareef ke liye fashion ke liye apanate hain aur wo log to is lalach men doosre kee shayari bhee apane naam se sunaa jaate hain to meraa kahanaa ye hai shayari se prem aap shayari kar ke nahee jataate hain balki use padh ke bhee jataate hain

aap achee shayari ko us ke shayar ke nam se bhee sunayenge to wah wah uatnee hee milegee aur jo log shayari karanaa chahte hain to kisee ne kabhee kaha thaa mujh se ki aap ek sher likhane se pahale sou sher padho jitnaa zyadaa padhoge utnaa zyadaa hee seekhoge aur jab likho khud kee dhadakano ko follow karo kisee kee nakl nahee karane kee zaroorat saflataa zaroor milegee agar gazal kaa shouk hai to bahr kafiyaa in sab ko seekhane kee koshish bhee lazmee hai

aur haan dil men kisee ke liye nafarat rakkhe bina alikho shayari prem kee paribhashaa hai bas
shukriya aapke jawab k liye anil ji...sahi kaha aapne..shyri k liye apna prem use chura se apne naam se kahne me nahi hai....iske aur bhi kai sammmanjanak tareeke hain....

aur ek sachche kalakar ka dil bhi sachcha hota hai isme koi do rai nahi hai....

ummeed hai is baat ko naye sdasya zaroor samjhenge....

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30th January 2016, 09:36 PM

Anil ji yeh ek mahina khatam hone aaya par dil mein abhi bhi sawaal khatm hone ka naam hi nahi le rahe....Mujhe is interview ke zariye aapke aur kareeb aane ka mauka mila hai. Yeh shayad aapke seedhe aur sacche jawaabon ke bina mumkin nahi ho paata, isliye aapka dil ki gehraaiyon se shukriya adaa karna chahuga aur jaate jaate aapse ek aakhri sawaal bhi karnaa chahugaa...

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shukriya aapke jawab k liye anil ji...sahi kaha aapne..shyri k liye apna prem use chura se apne naam se kahne me nahi hai....iske aur bhi kai sammmanjanak tareeke hain....

aur ek sachche kalakar ka dil bhi sachcha hota hai isme koi do rai nahi hai....

ummeed hai is baat ko naye sdasya zaroor samjhenge....

shukriya aapka..
shukriyaa bahut bahut dil se meree baat ko samjhaa samman kiyaa us kaa achhaa lagaa


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mere aise kuch doston ne bahut badhawa diyaa hai jo bahut shayaranaa bhee naheen hain bahut shukr gzaar hoon unka

waise main Sahir ko meraa ustaad manataa hoon un kee nazmaon ne mujhe likhanaa sikhayaa unhe padhane ke baad hee maine likhanaa shuroo kiyaa hai un ke alwaa bashir badr mujhe hameshaa ahsaas karate rahe hain ki gazal kee nazukee kyaa hotee hai

mujhe yahan bulaane ke liye itnaa pyaar dene ke liye sab kaa bahut bahut shukriyaa


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na jaane kitane nama choot jaayen phir bhee jo yaad hain batta hoon Pukit Shalini kunal paras jee manoj kureel sakhi ghayal rajbeer shradhha in se baar baar milanaa huyaa hai meraa jin se milaa nahee par lagataa hai milaa hoon aur milane kaa man hai wo hain meena jee aap maykash jee

waise haal hee men madhu sarika praveen jee mast in sab se bhee mialanaa huyaa waise delhi walon ko apas men milawane kee ya dlhi men sab ko milawane kee pooree zimmedaree pulkit ne lee huyee hai


Anil ji, aapne mere sawaal ka aadha jawaab diya hai, maine yeh bhi kaha hai ki jinse aap mil chuke hai unke bare mein thoda thoda jaroor bataye ki aapko wo kaise lge, jaise aapne unki shayri padkar unke bare meiN soch rakha tha bilkul vaise ya kuch alag

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Anil ji, aapne mere sawaal ka aadha jawaab diya hai, maine yeh bhi kaha hai ki jinse aap mil chuke hai unke bare mein thoda thoda jaroor bataye ki aapko wo kaise lge, jaise aapne unki shayri padkar unke bare meiN soch rakha tha bilkul vaise ya kuch alag

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aapse baat-cheet karke accha lga.

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main yahan jin se bhee milaa wo ab sab dil ke kareeb hain Manoj kureel shayari men garmee hai par bahut narm inaan hain kunaal kabhee bahut aggrassive thaa ab waqt ke sath bahut mature bhee ho gayaa achaa hayar bhee ban gayaa hai sharadhha apnee shayari jaisee hee emotional magar bahut suljhaee huyee paras jee se kisee kee tulanaa nahee ho saktee wo apane jaisee hee hain na duniyaa jaisee naa shayari jaisee shalini mujhe shuroo men akdoo see lagee par she is so sweet madhu sarika jee ko milane ke baad hee un kee shayari ko padhaa dono apne alfaaz jasee hain apanee awaaz jaisee hain meena jee se na mil ke bhee lagataa hai milaa hoon bahut bahut nek nazuk sa man hai hai un kaa rajveer ke sath us kee dagee men punjab bhee bahut ghoomaa un ke ghar bhee rukaa kamal kaa insaan hai

praveen jee barson naam hee sunataa thaa jab milaa to lagaa jaane kyaa haasil ho gayaa aur pulkit apnee shayari jaisaa hee simple aur us pariwaar ko ek dor men bandhe huye pulkit jee tusee grt ho jee sakhi ek dam simple see

aur aap se phone pe baat huyee hai aap apnee shayari jaise hee khulaa dil din men bahut saa pem izzat aur mukaan bhee aur kyaa kahoon aap se aur meena jee se milane kaa man hai dekhen kab mumkin hotaa hai

kayee naam yadashat ke karan ya zaldee men choote honge mafee managataa hoon un lgon se


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main yahan jin se bhee milaa wo ab sab dil ke kareeb hain Manoj kureel shayari men garmee hai par bahut narm inaan hain kunaal kabhee bahut aggrassive thaa ab waqt ke sath bahut mature bhee ho gayaa achaa hayar bhee ban gayaa hai sharadhha apnee shayari jaisee hee emotional magar bahut suljhaee huyee paras jee se kisee kee tulanaa nahee ho saktee wo apane jaisee hee hain na duniyaa jaisee naa shayari jaisee shalini mujhe shuroo men akdoo see lagee par she is so sweet madhu sarika jee ko milane ke baad hee un kee shayari ko padhaa dono apne alfaaz jasee hain apanee awaaz jaisee hain meena jee se na mil ke bhee lagataa hai milaa hoon bahut bahut nek nazuk sa man hai hai un kaa rajveer ke sath us kee dagee men punjab bhee bahut ghoomaa un ke ghar bhee rukaa kamal kaa insaan hai

praveen jee barson naam hee sunataa thaa jab milaa to lagaa jaane kyaa haasil ho gayaa aur pulkit apnee shayari jaisaa hee simple aur us pariwaar ko ek dor men bandhe huye pulkit jee tusee grt ho jee sakhi ek dam simple see

aur aap se phone pe baat huyee hai aap apnee shayari jaise hee khulaa dil din men bahut saa pem izzat aur mukaan bhee aur kyaa kahoon aap se aur meena jee se milane kaa man hai dekhen kab mumkin hotaa hai

kayee naam yadashat ke karan ya zaldee men choote honge mafee managataa hoon un lgon se
hame bhi aapse milkar bahut achcha laga anil ji....

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