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aaina mujhko dikhane aaya. - 13th July 2015, 10:21 AM

Aaina mujhko dikhane aaya
har koii dil ko jalane aaya..

kaam kuch dost naya kar jata
tu bhi rasmoN ko nibhane aaya.

baaNt na paya khushi jo meri
gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya.

kah ke apna jo gale milta hai
teer vo dil pe chalane aaya.

har kadam phool sajata tha jo
raah mein khaar bichhane aaya.

dhadkane fir se huyi bekabu
kon ye mujhko satane aaya.

kal madhu jo tere gam sahta tha
aaj vo shakhs rulane aaya.



अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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13th July 2015, 10:27 AM

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Aaina mujhko dikhane aaya
har koii dil ko jalane aaya..

kaam kuch dost naya kar jata
tu bhi rasmoN ko nibhane aaya.

baaNt na paya khushi jo meri
gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya.

kah ke apna jo gale milta hai
teer vo dil pe chalane aaya.

har kadam phool sajata tha jo
raah ein khaar bichhane aaya.

dhadkane fir se huyi bekabu
kon ye mujhko satane aaya.

kal madhu jo tere gam sahta tha
aaj vo shakhs rulane aaya.


Madhu Bala....aap to bahut acchi shayra hai ji...hame aapki yeh gazal bahut acchi lgi, sabhi sher bahut acche bane hai par yeh aik sher dil ke bahuttttttttt kareeb rha:

kah ke apna jo gale milta hai
teer vo dil pe chalane aaya.

khush rho yu hi likhti rho
pyar aur duaoN ke saath
dii


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13th July 2015, 10:30 AM

Madhu jee

Namaste

Dard ko ba khoobee se bayaan kartee aapki yeh peshkash pasand aayii... likhte rahiye aage bhee.. dil se daad

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Aaina mujhko dikhane aaya
har koii dil ko jalane aaya..

kaam kuch dost naya kar jata
tu bhi rasmoN ko nibhane aaya.

baaNt na paya khushi jo meri
gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya.

kah ke apna jo gale milta hai
teer vo dil pe chalane aaya.

har kadam phool sajata tha jo
raah mein khaar bichhane aaya.

dhadkane fir se huyi bekabu
kon ye mujhko satane aaya.

kal madhu jo tere gam sahta tha
aaj vo shakhs rulane aaya.

Kya baat hai Madhu jee bahut hi sundar rahi aapki yeh ghazal
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath


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Aaina mujhko dikhane aaya
har koii dil ko jalane aaya..

kaam kuch dost naya kar jata
tu bhi rasmoN ko nibhane aaya.

baaNt na paya khushi jo meri
gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya.

kah ke apna jo gale milta hai
teer vo dil pe chalane aaya.

har kadam phool sajata tha jo
raah mein khaar bichhane aaya.

dhadkane fir se huyi bekabu
kon ye mujhko satane aaya.

kal madhu jo tere gam sahta tha
aaj vo shakhs rulane aaya.

waah waahh madhu ji kyaa baat hai nihaaytee khoobsurat ghazal aapne bazm ko nazar kii ha is baar bhii ke iskaa lafz lafz apne dardon ko bakhubii bayaan kar rahaa hai...... jitnee bhii tareeff kii jaae kam hai is aafreen kalaam ki shaan me........ aatee rahiye, likhtii rahiye aur apne kalaam se bazm ko roshan kartii rahye........


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Bhagwaan kare tum aise hi khoobsoorti se likhti raho aur Hum wah wah karte thak jaaein.

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Aaina mujhko dikhane aaya
har koii dil ko jalane aaya..

kaam kuch dost naya kar jata
tu bhi rasmoN ko nibhane aaya.

baaNt na paya khushi jo meri
gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya.

kah ke apna jo gale milta hai
teer vo dil pe chalane aaya.

har kadam phool sajata tha jo
raah mein khaar bichhane aaya.

dhadkane fir se huyi bekabu
kon ye mujhko satane aaya.

kal madhu jo tere gam sahta tha
aaj vo shakhs rulane aaya.
Behad aacha likha hai Madhu apne, har sher muqammal aur ehsaas dil par vaar karte hue nazar aaye.

Yunhi dil lubhaate rahiye aur bazm mein aachi achi ghazalein laate rahiYe



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Aaina mujhko dikhane aaya
har koii dil ko jalane aaya..

kaam kuch dost naya kar jata
tu bhi rasmoN ko nibhane aaya.

baaNt na paya khushi jo meri
gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya.

kah ke apna jo gale milta hai
teer vo dil pe chalane aaya.

har kadam phool sajata tha jo
raah mein khaar bichhane aaya.

dhadkane fir se huyi bekabu
kon ye mujhko satane aaya.

kal madhu jo tere gam sahta tha
aaj vo shakhs rulane aaya.
Madhu ji Namskar,

Saada lafzon me khoobsurat ravaani ke saath sundar ehsaas piroye han aapne. Mujhe ehsaas mr saadgi bahut pasand hai aur aapki rachna me woh chhalak rahi hai.

Yeh do sher khaas bahut acche lage:

kaam kuch dost naya kar jata
tu bhi rasmoN ko nibhane aaya.

baaNt na paya khushi jo meri
gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya

Waah!

Meri dil se dheron daad, likhti rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye.


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Aaina mujhko dikhane aaya
har koii dil ko jalane aaya..

kaam kuch dost naya kar jata
tu bhi rasmoN ko nibhane aaya.

baaNt na paya khushi jo meri
gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya.

kah ke apna jo gale milta hai
teer vo dil pe chalane aaya.

har kadam phool sajata tha jo
raah mein khaar bichhane aaya.

dhadkane fir se huyi bekabu
kon ye mujhko satane aaya.

kal madhu jo tere gam sahta tha
aaj vo shakhs rulane aaya.




Bohot khoob Madhu ji
Waaaaah.....aapki ye peshkash bhi khoob rahi
Daad kubul farmaiyega

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Madhu Bala....aap to bahut acchi shayra hai ji...hame aapki yeh gazal bahut acchi lgi, sabhi sher bahut acche bane hai par yeh aik sher dil ke bahuttttttttt kareeb rha:

kah ke apna jo gale milta hai
teer vo dil pe chalane aaya.

khush rho yu hi likhti rho
pyar aur duaoN ke saath
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shukriya di...jo ghazal pasand aayi aapko...bas aap sab ka sath milta rahe to ye khyaal yoon hee nagme ban ke pesh hote rahenge.....
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Madhu jee

Namaste

Dard ko ba khoobee se bayaan kartee aapki yeh peshkash pasand aayii... likhte rahiye aage bhee.. dil se daad

Aapka

Dhaval
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Padhte rahiyega....koshish jari rahegi....

Khush rahein..



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Khyaal rakhiye aut likhte rahiye yun hi..

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aaina mujhko dikhane aaya
har koii dil ko jalane aaya..

Kaam kuch dost naya kar jata
tu bhi rasmon ko nibhane aaya.

Baant na paya khushi jo meri
gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya.

Kah ke apna jo gale milta hai
teer vo dil pe chalane aaya.

Har kadam phool sajata tha jo
raah mein khaar bichhane aaya.

Dhadkane fir se huyi bekabu
kon ye mujhko satane aaya.

Kal madhu jo tere gam sahta tha
aaj vo shakhs rulane aaya.
khoob hain ashaar

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15th November 2015, 02:19 PM

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Madhu tumhari tareef Mein lafz kam pad rahe hain aajkal.

Bhagwaan kare tum aise hi khoobsoorti se likhti raho aur Hum wah wah karte thak jaaein.

Kya kahun...

Maza as jata hai. Aur pata nahi kyun tumse mili nahi magar tumhare likhe Mein mujhe apna aks nazar aata hai.
Aapke pyaar aur sath ka shukriya kya karun sarika bas dua hai ye sath bana rahe....ye baat sach hai aapka likha bhi hamesha mere dil tak pahunchta hai.....jab bhi bazm me aati ho mahak uthti hai mahfil...aati rahna...aur aise hee duaon me yaad rakhna....
Apki tawajjo ka behad shukriya...

Hamesha khush raho....
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Behad aacha likha hai Madhu apne, har sher muqammal aur ehsaas dil par vaar karte hue nazar aaye.

Yunhi dil lubhaate rahiye aur bazm mein aachi achi ghazalein laate rahiYe
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Madhu ji Namskar,

Saada lafzon me khoobsurat ravaani ke saath sundar ehsaas piroye han aapne. Mujhe ehsaas mr saadgi bahut pasand hai aur aapki rachna me woh chhalak rahi hai.

Yeh do sher khaas bahut acche lage:

kaam kuch dost naya kar jata
tu bhi rasmoN ko nibhane aaya.

baaNt na paya khushi jo meri
gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya

Waah!

Meri dil se dheron daad, likhti rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye.
Ji pulkit ji...main to bas hamesha dil me aaye khayalon ko alfaaz de deti hun...aap sab ko achcha lage yahi khwahish hoti hai....
Aage bhi koshish karti rahoongi..
Sath dete rahiyega...

Takecare..
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Bohot khoob Madhu ji
Waaaaah.....aapki ye peshkash bhi khoob rahi
Daad kubul farmaiyega

Aapka apna
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Daad aur sath ka behad shukriya bhushan ji...
Aate rahiyega...

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22nd December 2015, 08:59 PM

कौन खरीदेगा अब हीरों के दाम में तुम्हारें आँसू,
वो जो दर्द का सौदागर था मोहब्बत छोड़ दी उसने.

Very nice madhu jeee....



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23rd December 2015, 03:09 AM

acchi Ghazal hi hui hai Madhu jee


mubarakbaad taleem kijiye


Allah kare zor-e-Qalam, aur ziyaada


rab raakha
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23rd December 2015, 05:35 PM

Bohat achchi Ghazal Madhu ji.

Likhti rahiye

Khaksaar
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Madhu Ji

Qaafiya / Radeef AchChhe Se Nibhaane Ki Koshish AchChhi Lagi

Khayaal Bhi Khoob Nikaale HaiN

Kaamiyaab Ghazal Huii ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
Namaskaar naresh ji...

Aap jaisi shakhshiyat se daad hasil hona..khushi ki baat hai...
Khayaalon aur ghazal ko tawajjo dene ka dil se shukriya....

Aate rahiyega..

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कौन खरीदेगा अब हीरों के दाम में तुम्हारें आँसू,
वो जो दर्द का सौदागर था मोहब्बत छोड़ दी उसने.

Very nice madhu jeee....
Bahut khoob sher kaha aru ji......

Shukriya pasand karne ka....

Takecare
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acchi Ghazal hi hui hai Madhu jee


mubarakbaad taleem kijiye


Allah kare zor-e-Qalam, aur ziyaada


rab raakha
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aapki daad hasil huyi to ghazal zaroor achchi hee rahi hogi...

nawazish ka behad shukriya..

aate rahiyega...

takecare
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kya baat hai madhu dil ke aas paas hai har sher tumhe padhnaa sunanaa dono achhaa lagataa hai

sheesha bhale dikhaa ke jataa
khud se mujhe milaa ke jataa

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Bahut din baad shayri.com par aana hua.Bahut acha laga yeh rachna parh.Keep up the good work.Dua karungi kabhi koyi aapke liye khar na bichaye aur na rulaye.Sada kush rahein.


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Bohat achchi Ghazal Madhu ji.

Likhti rahiye

Khaksaar
Praveen

Dil se shukriya praveen ji......

Aapki daad pakar khushi huyi.....

Aate rahiyega.....

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Kya khoob likhi hain madhu ji.
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kya baat hai madhu dil ke aas paas hai har sher tumhe padhnaa sunanaa dono achhaa lagataa hai

sheesha bhale dikhaa ke jataa
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khush raho
Khushi huyi..anil ji..
Bahut shukriya hausla afzai ka....

Aate rahiyega..

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Madhu Bala....aap to bahut acchi shayra hai ji...hame aapki yeh gazal bahut acchi lgi, sabhi sher bahut acche bane hai par yeh aik sher dil ke bahuttttttttt kareeb rha:

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Apna khayaal rakhiyega...

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Jinse aapne mera kalaam share kiya aur unhe pasand aaya sabhi ko shukriya kahiyega..

Aate rahein...



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bahut khoob madhu ji..
daad hazir hai qubuul kijiyega....

khaksaar,
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Vikram ji...bahut khushi huyi aapki bazm me dekhkar...

Hausla afzai ka behad shukriya..

Ummeed hai aage bhi apka sath milega..

Aate rahein...

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