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Love uljhan - 6th October 2003, 10:23 AM

Uljhanon ko zindagi ki suljane nikli thi
raaste mein chalte chalte tera saath mil gaya
laga ye uljanen na hi suljhe to kitna acha ho
safar rahega to kam se kam tera saath to rahega

tera haath thaam kar aage aage badhti rahi
gam mein khushi mein dono mein hansti rahi
ye samajh na paayi uljhanon se nikal rahi thi mai
ya aur aur uljhanon ke andar chalti chali gayi

raaste mein toofan aaye, dhoop padi, baarish huyi
tere kandhe ka sahara paaya,tere palkon ki chaav mili
pahad, nadi, parvat, jharne sabko hanskar jhel gayi
teri aakhon mein apna chehra paya to jeevan ko nayi muskan mili

phir samne do raaste aaye saath hamara chooth gaya
laga ek pal baithkar sochu tere saath ne mujhko kya diya
uljhanon ko zindagi ki suljhane nikli thi
mallom chala ek nayi uljhan lekar apne saath chali........


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6th October 2003, 11:56 AM

Aanchal Jee, dilko choo gaya yeh dilka kalam. Bohot achha likhhe hein aapne. Aise hi likhte rahiyega. Sukriya.
Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.

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6th October 2003, 06:59 PM

Aanchal ji aapne jo likha hai,uski kya tarif karun,lafj hi nahi mil rahe hain mujhe,well its wonderfull,keep it up,


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6th October 2003, 07:08 PM

Sagar Jee, welcome to shayri forum. Nice name.
Waise naam aapka kisne rakhha hein? Mujhe bohot achha laga ish liye poochliya. I hope you didn't mind.
Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless.
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7th October 2003, 02:59 PM

Hi shimul ji,shukria,vaise naam to ghar walon ne hi rakha hai,thanks.


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7th October 2003, 03:26 PM

Thanks. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless.


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7th October 2003, 03:34 PM

hello aanchal
really a nice one...bahut hi acha likha hai aapne..dil ko choo gaya aapka kalam.keep writing n take care.


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