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ek din... - 22nd January 2006, 07:30 PM

Zindagi ki raah mein chalte chalte,
Is bhid-bhaad se alag hatke,
Kuch waqt nikalna MERE LIYE ek din...
Aisa waqt jo ho bas mere liye...

Us din tumko ye batana chahenge,
Kitni mohobbat hai humko tumse..
Us din tum par ye jatana chahenge,
Kitni chahat hai humko tumse..

Vaada to nahi hai ki samjha payenge tumko,
Kya jagah hai tumhari, zindagi mein meri..
Vaada to nahi hai ki dikha payenge tumko,
Wo sapne jo dekhti hai ye aakhein meri..

Apni hasraton ko kaise bayaan karu lafzon mein,
Apni khwaishon ko kaise kaid karu is panne mein,
Wo tujhme kho jane ki hasrat meri...
Wo tere saath udd jane ki khwaish meri...

Phir bhi jab waqt mile aana ek din,
Kuch lamhon ko mere saath jee jana ek din,
Us din batana chahenge, tum mere kya ho...
Tumhi meri MANZIL, tumhi RAASTA ho.....


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Re: ek din... - 22nd January 2006, 09:00 PM

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Originally posted by aanchal
Zindagi ki raah mein chalte chalte,
Is bhid-bhaad se alag hatke,
Kuch waqt nikalna MERE LIYE ek din...
Aisa waqt jo ho bas mere liye...

Us din tumko ye batana chahenge,
Kitni mohobbat hai humko tumse..
Us din tum par ye jatana chahenge,
Kitni chahat hai humko tumse..

Vaada to nahi hai ki samjha payenge tumko,
Kya jagah hai tumhari, zindagi mein meri..
Vaada to nahi hai ki dikha payenge tumko,
Wo sapne jo dekhti hai ye aakhein meri..

Apni hasraton ko kaise bayaan karu lafzon mein,
Apni khwaishon ko kaise kaid karu is panne mein,
Wo tujhme kho jane ki hasrat meri...
Wo tere saath udd jane ki khwaish meri...

Phir bhi jab waqt mile aana ek din,
Kuch lamhon ko mere saath jee jana ek din,
Us din batana chahenge, tum mere kya ho...
Tumhi meri MANZIL, tumhi RAASTA ho.....

adaab aanchal ji,

bahaut hi khoob means in simple words u hv written sumthing.... very beautifuly written... keep writing dear...

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23rd January 2006, 11:33 AM

anchal ji

bohat khoob lika hei aapne.
aise hi liktey rehiye.
Aapka Shukriya

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Re: ek din... - 23rd January 2006, 03:36 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by aanchal
Zindagi ki raah mein chalte chalte,
Is bhid-bhaad se alag hatke,
Kuch waqt nikalna MERE LIYE ek din...
Aisa waqt jo ho bas mere liye...

Us din tumko ye batana chahenge,
Kitni mohobbat hai humko tumse..
Us din tum par ye jatana chahenge,
Kitni chahat hai humko tumse..

Vaada to nahi hai ki samjha payenge tumko,
Kya jagah hai tumhari, zindagi mein meri..
Vaada to nahi hai ki dikha payenge tumko,
Wo sapne jo dekhti hai ye aakhein meri..

Apni hasraton ko kaise bayaan karu lafzon mein,
Apni khwaishon ko kaise kaid karu is panne mein,
Wo tujhme kho jane ki hasrat meri...
Wo tere saath udd jane ki khwaish meri...

Phir bhi jab waqt mile aana ek din,
Kuch lamhon ko mere saath jee jana ek din,
Us din batana chahenge, tum mere kya ho...
Tumhi meri MANZIL, tumhi RAASTA ho.....
aanchal aaj pahli baar aapko padhne ka mouka mila seedhe lafjon mai kahi ye baat achhi lagi .bhuat achha laga padhkar uhi likhte rahiye.

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bas itana parha hai - 24th January 2006, 11:49 AM

Zindagi ki raah mein chalte chalte,
Is bhid-bhaad se alag hatke,
Kuch waqt nikalna MERE LIYE ek din...
Aisa waqt jo ho bas mere liye..

abhe itna hee parha aur laga aage nazm main jo bhee ho pahale in alfaz ke liye kuch kah loon bahut kboobsoorat bat hai wah sirf wah is liye kah raha hoon ke bakee sare khayal tumahre alfaz main kho gaye hain
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24th January 2006, 11:55 AM

Oh wow Aanchalji aapki itne simple alfaz mei likhi hui is Kavita/Shayri(s) ki tarrif karne k liye mere paas alfaz hi nahi hai...

I mean Dil Ko Chhu Gayi hai Kahin it's so simple but so intense I just loved it... Aisa laga jaise mere dil ki baat ko lafz mil gaye...

Zindagi ki raah mein chalte chalte,
Is bhid-bhaad se alag hatke,
Kuch waqt nikalna MERE LIYE ek din...
Aisa waqt jo ho bas mere liye...

Bahot Khoob.....

Us din tumko ye batana chahenge,
Kitni mohobbat hai humko tumse..
Us din tum par ye jatana chahenge,
Kitni chahat hai humko tumse..

Kya Baat Hai....

Vaada to nahi hai ki samjha payenge tumko,
Kya jagah hai tumhari, zindagi mein meri..
Vaada to nahi hai ki dikha payenge tumko,
Wo sapne jo dekhti hai ye aakhein meri..

Dil Ko chhu Gayi yeh lines....

Apni hasraton ko kaise bayaan karu lafzon mein,
Apni khwaishon ko kaise kaid karu is panne mein,
Wo tujhme kho jane ki hasrat meri...
Wo tere saath udd jane ki khwaish meri...

kya andaaz-e-bayan hai.....

Phir bhi jab waqt mile aana ek din,
Kuch lamhon ko mere saath jee jana ek din,
Us din batana chahenge, tum mere kya ho...
Tumhi meri MANZIL, tumhi RAASTA ho.....

Is se behtar toh kuch ho hi nahi sakta...

Aaanchalji dil jeet liya hai aapki is Peshgi ne toh... likhter rahiyega.



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dobara - 10th February 2006, 09:20 PM

dobara parhee ye racahana aaj phir main halakee see peera huyee ke bas 3-4 logon ko laga ke is par kcuh likh sakte hain bahut oonchee hai tumhree racahana kabhee kabhee kutubminar bhee nazarandz ho jatee hai
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