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har shaksh diwana najar aata hai.......... - 19th December 2009, 05:02 PM
na jane kun jab mai maikhane se nikalta hoon,
har shaksh diwana najar ata hai.......
jis se mudaton se pehchan na thi,
woh saksh apna sa najar ata hai.......
jis subah sochata hoon alvida kah doon,
usi shaam oontho me pyala najar aatahai......
sochta hoon harpal jindgi ka nasheela ho,
par nasha kachcha hai har raat utar jata hai......
tamanna hai koi aisi pila de mujko,
jise peene nasha chala aata hai......
ab meri aarjoo tabhi poori hoti hai,
jab nasha mujhse maikhane ka pata paata hai..........

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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19th December 2009, 05:54 PM
Prem Ji........sabse pehle shayri.com parivaar mai aapka swagat hai......aapne likhne ki achi koshish ki hai......yuhi likhte rahiye.....bazm ki raunak badhate rahiye...

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Prem Ji........sabse pehle shayri.com parivaar mai aapka swagat hai......aapne likhne ki achi koshish ki hai......yuhi likhte rahiye.....bazm ki raunak badhate rahiye...

khush rahiye...
duaaon ke saath....
naresh ji apke is protsahan ke liye khardik dhanuyavad......
koshis rahegi ki mei aage se aur achchi tarah likh saku.
aapke protsahan ke liye thanks!!!!!
shayar apne sher per daad chahata hai,
muradi bas dil ki murad chahata hai.

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
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20th December 2009, 12:32 AM
premji,
aapka swagat hai..... bahut hi acchi peshkash hai.....accha laga phadke.....shabdo ki geharyi acchi lagi.....
aisi meri umeed hai...ki aap aur likhege

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20th December 2009, 01:08 AM
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premji,
aapka swagat hai..... bahut hi acchi peshkash hai.....accha laga phadke.....shabdo ki geharyi acchi lagi.....
aisi meri umeed hai...ki aap aur likhege

daad aur duae dono kabool kijiye
amitji....... aapne mujhe saraha aur protsahit kiya is ke liye thanx........
aapki ummed par khar utarne ki koshish nahi vada karta hoon

dhanyavaad...........

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
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20th December 2009, 08:34 AM
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nasha cheez hi aisi hai,sabki yehi halat karta hai jaisi aapne byan ki hai.......or ashi byan ki hai............bahut khoob.
   
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Prem ji
nasha cheez hi aisi hai,sabki yehi halat karta hai jaisi aapne byan ki hai.......or ashi byan ki hai............bahut khoob.
rajinder bhai.... jaan kar achcha laga ki aapko yeh panktikyaan pasand ayee.....
aapne saraha is ke liye thanx........
aage bhi isi tarah mera protsahan karte rahiyega
aapka ..prem anjana

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
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21st December 2009, 06:12 PM
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na jane kun jab mai maikhane se nikalta hoon,
har shaksh diwana najar ata hai.......
jis se mudaton se pehchan na thi,
woh saksh apna sa najar ata hai.......
jis subah sochata hoon alvida kah doon,
usi shaam oontho me pyala najar aatahai......
sochta hoon harpal jindgi ka nasheela ho,
par nasha kachcha hai har raat utar jata hai......
tamanna hai koi aisi pila de mujko,
jise peene nasha chala aata hai......
ab meri aarjoo tabhi poori hoti hai,
jab nasha mujhse maikhane ka pata paata hai..........
Sabse pahele to aapka sdc per swagat hai..........
phir Bewadon ki is mehfil mein aapka swagat hai.........

Aake sochne ka andaaz achcha laga kafi gehra sochte hai aap likhane ki baat ahuN to aapne aapne alfaazon ko achcha bayan kiya achcha laga padhker...........

Likhate rhaiye,
khush rhaiye..........
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Sabse pahele to aapka sdc per swagat hai..........
phir Bewadon ki is mehfil mein aapka swagat hai.........

Aake sochne ka andaaz achcha laga kafi gehra sochte hai aap likhane ki baat ahuN to aapne aapne alfaazon ko achcha bayan kiya achcha laga padhker...........

Likhate rhaiye,
khush rhaiye..........

kwahish ji ...mujhe jaan kar achcha laga ki aapko kavita pasand aayee
...........thanx...........aapka dost ..prem anjana

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
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14th January 2010, 04:42 PM
prem bhai...ek achhi peshkash par daad qubuul kijiye...
achha laga padh kar....

aapka dost,
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prem bhai...ek achhi peshkash par daad qubuul kijiye...
achha laga padh kar....

aapka dost,
vikram...
vikram bhai .........mai appko namaskaar baad me karunga..........pehle ek shikayat hai ki aapne meri yeh panktiya bahut der se padhi..............lekin aapne samay nikal kar padha to is ke liye aapko prem anjana ka namaskaar........aur ...........thanx
...................aapke sneh aur aashirwaad ke intzaar me ....................
..aapka dost ..............prem anjana.............

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
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Nice work Prem Jee............

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6th February 2010, 02:11 PM
sochta hoon harpal jindgi ka nasheela ho,
par nasha kachcha hai har raat utar jata hai......
tamanna hai koi aisi pila de mujko,
jise peene nasha chala aata hai......
ab meri aarjoo tabhi poori hoti hai,
jab nasha mujhse maikhane ka pata paata hai..........


Nice one Prem saheb,,...plzz follow the given link and try to write according to the rules....



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na jane kun jab mai maikhane se nikalta hoon,
har shaksh diwana najar ata hai.......
jis se mudaton se pehchan na thi,
woh saksh apna sa najar ata hai.......
jis subah sochata hoon alvida kah doon,
usi shaam oontho me pyala najar aatahai......
sochta hoon harpal jindgi ka nasheela ho,
par nasha kachcha hai har raat utar jata hai......
tamanna hai koi aisi pila de mujko,
jise peene nasha chala aata hai......
ab meri aarjoo tabhi poori hoti hai,
jab nasha mujhse maikhane ka pata paata hai..........

Premji, dad kubul kijiye! Bahot hi achha likha hai. Likhte rahiye. khush rahiye aur muskurate rahiyae!

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Premji, dad kubul kijiye! Bahot hi achha likha hai. Likhte rahiye. khush rahiye aur muskurate rahiyae!

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daad k liye shukriya .....aapka dost prem anjana

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na jane kun jab mai maikhane se nikalta hoon,
har shaksh diwana najar ata hai.......
jis se mudaton se pehchan na thi,
woh saksh apna sa najar ata hai.......
jis subah sochata hoon alvida kah doon,
usi shaam oontho me pyala najar aatahai......
sochta hoon harpal jindgi ka nasheela ho,
par nasha kachcha hai har raat utar jata hai......
tamanna hai koi aisi pila de mujko,
jise peene nasha chala aata hai......
ab meri aarjoo tabhi poori hoti hai,
jab nasha mujhse maikhane ka pata paata hai..........
it's your one writing?.............................
   
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it's your one writing?.............................
preemeet ji mujhe english thodi kum aati hai........
lekin lag raha hai ki aapmeri rachna ki badaai kar rahi hai
jiske liye dhanyavaad.........
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