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Sab = 2
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sa 1 / b_hai 2
aur jab hai 1 ho sakta hai to
b_hai = 1 bhi ho sakta hai....mai isliye kah raha hu ki bilkul strict tarah se kuch na naapa jaaye

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eid hi eid

2 2 2 1

confused nahi ho raha hai
bahut saare variation me iska wazn aa sakta hai
jaise

ei 2 / d 1 / hi x / eid x

e x / d_hi x / ei x / d 1.........aur bhi bahut combination possible hai
ek lafz aur uske combination ki koi absolute value nahi hai

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bahut saare variation me iska wazn aa sakta hai
jaise

ei 2 / d 1 / hi x / eid x

e x / d_hi x / ei x / d 1.........aur bhi bahut combination possible hai
ek lafz aur uske combination ki koi absolute value nahi hai

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2 2 1 X

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ran/gaa/shi/ki

2 2 1 X

iske shi word pe doubt hai X ho sakta hia ye ?

ran 2 / g 1 / aa 2 / shi x / ki x.....original ye hai
magar aap beher banaane ke liye
ran x / gaa 2 / shi x / ki x kar sakte hai
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ज़ुर्म मुझसे हुआ ये भी ही कैसा
jur 2 / m 1 / mujh 2 / se 1 / hu x / aa 2 / ye x / bhi x / hi x / kai 2 / saa 2

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san maa khi r

2 2 2 1.......wrong hai

sa 1 / nam 2 / aa 2 /khir 2
sa 1 / na 1 / m_aa 2 / khir 2

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laa 2 / sh1 / ap 2 / ni x / khud 2 / hi x = 212x2x
laa 2 / sh_ap 2 / ni x / khud 2 / hi x = 22x2x
laa 2 / sh1 / ap 2 / ni x / khu 1 / d_hi x = 212x1x
laa 2 / sh_ap 2 / ni x / khu 1 / d_hi x = 22x1x.........dekho ek sentence ke kitne wazn posible hai.......aur bhi combination ho sakte hai

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laa 2 / sh1 / ap 2 / ni x / khud 2 / hi x = 212x2x
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laa 2 / sh1 / ap 2 / ni x / khu 1 / d_hi x = 212x1x
laa 2 / sh_ap 2 / ni x / khu 1 / d_hi x = 22x1x.........dekho ek sentence ke kitne wazn posible hai.......aur bhi combination ho sakte hai

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ka baa o ge
122X
sahi hai par ab sirf exceptions kyu doond rahe ho?...seedha bhi to socho

kab 2 / aa 2 / 0 x / ge x
ka 1 / b_aa 2 / o x / ge x

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कांधा देने ना कोई भी आया
kaN 2 / dhaa 2 / de x / ne x / na x / ko x / ii x / bhi x / aa 2 / yaa 2

1] teen consequitive 1 (111) possible nahi hai...ye beher ka inviolable principle hai...bhale possible ho lafz ke hisaab se..jaise upar huaa hai

2] 'na' ka wazn mostly 1 bandhte hai...2 me bandha 'na' ki misaal bahut kam milengi...magar hai zarur

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kaN 2 / dhaa 2 / de x / ne x / na x / ko x / ii x / bhi x / aa 2 / yaa 2

1] teen consequitive 1 (111) possible nahi hai...ye beher ka inviolable principle hai...bhale possible ho lafz ke hisaab se..jaise upar huaa hai

2] 'na' ka wazn mostly 1 bandhte hai...2 me bandha 'na' ki misaal bahut kam milengi...magar hai zarur

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kaan/ dhaa

dhaa pe stoppage le sakte hain kya

i mean ek wajan pe ya 2 hi ayega
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1] teen consequitive 1 (111) possible nahi hai...ye beher ka inviolable principle hai...bhale possible ho lafz ke hisaab se..jaise upar huaa hai

2] 'na' ka wazn mostly 1 bandhte hai...2 me bandha 'na' ki misaal bahut kam milengi...magar hai zarur

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word ko break karne ke liye ees kaa Khayaal raKhen (yahaan usii tarah words break kiye jaa rahe.n hai.n jisse aapko samjhne mei.n aasaani ho.ngii )

1 = short

2 = long

x = flexible (1 ya 2 )

ummid kartaa huuN aap ko samjh mei.n aa gayaa ho.ngaa!

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dil = 2 / o = 1 / jaa= 2 / n =1

Di = x / lo = 2 / jaa = 2 / n = 1


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Di = x / lo = 2 / jaa = 2 / n = 1

ye sahi hai neeche wala

izaafat lagne ke baad dil-o compulsory convert ho jayega
di-lo me....wazn ho jayega

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21st August 2010, 12:32 PM

aa 2 p 1 hi x

nxt>>>>>>>>>>>> hum unhe


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aa 2 p 1 hi x
also
aa 2 / phi 2 ( but old, archaic)


nxt>>>>>>>>>>>> hum unhe
ham 2 / un 2 / he x
ha 1 / m_u 1 / nhe x


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ham 2 / un 2 / he x
ha 1 / m_u 1 / nhe x


next >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

nigaah

Ni/gaah==1/ 2

or is it

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Ni/gaah==1/ 2

or is it

ni/gaa/h==1/2/1

sahaara>>>>>>>>>>>>>>????

ni 1 / gaa / h 1
ni / gah 2
taqaaza-e-nigah karataa hai ....ghalib


sa 1 / haa 2 / raa x

next >>>>>>>>>>>>

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sa 1 / haa 2 / raa x

next >>>>>>>>>>>>

nashtar

nash/tar======= 2/2

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nash/tar======= 2/2

aur neshtar bhi...ne 2 / sh 1 /tar ...ye bhi sahi
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cheh/raa ==== 2/2 or 2/1

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Hello bhayee jaan, ghalib ki ek ghazal post kar raha huN, socha yahi hai ki aise karuN one by one, unki ghazal post, aap iske meter, ke saath iske achy pahluoN ke bare mai batayeN taaki kuch seekhne ko mile..

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This is a great thread,main to naya membr hun yahan ka aur aaj ye thrd dekha reply die bina na raha gaya kyunki isse har koi behr turant hi seekh sakta hai,kamaal ki information aur behad achi aap sabhi ki guftagu/saleeka padhkar hum takhtee ache se jaan sakte hain,Zidd saheb aap to bht snr member aur saath senior poet bhi bahut shukria aisi thrd ke lie
   
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Zidd ji a wonderful initiative and a wonderful thread.

Considering the amount of interest. I would like to request the moderators to help create a thread for learning how to read(this is also important) and write Ghazals. Starting with the basics. I believe Maikash had started similar post earlier as well. I would love to see all thiese great insights & material under one section, so that it provides easy access to all Shayri.com members. If possible create some audio/video and a list of resources - books, links etc. I am also a beginner and hence swould really appreciate if one could walk me through the basic of ghazal writing.


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Zidd ji a wonderful initiative and a wonderful thread.

Considering the amount of interest. I would like to request the moderators to help create a thread for learning how to read(this is also important) and write Ghazals. Starting with the basics. I believe Maikash had started similar post earlier as well. I would love to see all thiese great insights & material under one section, so that it provides easy access to all Shayri.com members. If possible create some audio/video and a list of resources - books, links etc. I am also a beginner and hence swould really appreciate if one could walk me through the basic of ghazal writing.
this thread is all about how to write ghazal.........
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