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ik kaidi .........(pinjar ka tota) - 27th November 2010, 01:02 PM

kuch sabdo ke saath mai aap sabhi k beech upasthiti banane ki chesta kar raha hoon.....apne vichar jaroor batiyega........aapka prem anjana


mai pinjar ka tota
udta tha mai neel gagan mein
apne pankh pasare
madhur geet mai gata tha
apne pritam ke dware
jane kaun ghadi mein kisne
kaisa jaal bichaya
pal bhar mein na der lagi
khudko pinjar mein paya
ab...........mai pinjar ka tota
log dekhkar mujhko kehte
kitna pyara gata hai
sone ke pinjar mein dekho
sare sukh pata hai
pathik magar tum apne antar ke
antarpat ko kholo
mere in madhu geeton ko
tum virah baat se tolo
kyunki .......mai pinjar ka tota.
sone ke yeh dar darwaje
mere kahatir dhela hai
shan-o-shaukat, rishte nate
mere khatir mela hai
"anjana" kab kaun musafir
mujhko le jayega
na jane kab pinjar tota
neel gagan payega
ab to hoon.........mai pinjar ka tota


anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.

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28th November 2010, 02:08 AM

Wah wah mere bhai kya baat hai............aapne badi saral bhasha me kya kamaal kiya hai. Bohat bohat khoobsurat aapki yeh kavita too good.

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achi kavita hai. padh kar achaa lagaa. thanks for sharing.


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4th December 2010, 10:34 AM

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Wah wah mere bhai kya baat hai............aapne badi saral bhasha me kya kamaal kiya hai. Bohat bohat khoobsurat aapki yeh kavita too good.

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anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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Love 8th December 2010, 12:02 PM

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kuch sabdo ke saath mai aap sabhi k beech upasthiti banane ki chesta kar raha hoon.....apne vichar jaroor batiyega........aapka prem anjana


mai pinjar ka tota
udta tha mai neel gagan mein
apne pankh pasare
madhur geet mai gata tha
apne pritam ke dware
jane kaun ghadi mein kisne
kaisa jaal bichaya
pal bhar mein na der lagi
khudko pinjar mein paya
ab...........mai pinjar ka tota
log dekhkar mujhko kehte
kitna pyara gata hai
sone ke pinjar mein dekho
sare sukh pata hai
pathik magar tum apne antar ke
antarpat ko kholo
mere in madhu geeton ko
tum virah baat se tolo
kyunki .......mai pinjar ka tota.
sone ke yeh dar darwaje
mere kahatir dhela hai
shan-o-shaukat, rishte nate
mere khatir mela hai
"anjana" kab kaun musafir
mujhko le jayega
na jane kab pinjar tota
neel gagan payega
ab to hoon.........mai pinjar ka tota
bahut bahut khoob prem bhai...
bahut achhi hai aapki ye kavita, mujhe behad pasand aayee...
aisi hi aur kavitaoN ke saath jaldi jaldi sdc pe aate raha kareN...

aapka,
vikram


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27th December 2010, 04:13 PM

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bahut bahut khoob prem bhai...
bahut achhi hai aapki ye kavita, mujhe behad pasand aayee...
aisi hi aur kavitaoN ke saath jaldi jaldi sdc pe aate raha kareN...

aapka,
vikram
vikram bhai ko naman !!
aapki koshish se ab sab theek hai.........
meri is choti si koshish ko aapne pasand kiya jiske liye thanx....


anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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achi kavita hai. padh kar achaa lagaa. thanks for sharing.
mittal pali ji kavita pasand karne k liye thanx!!!
apna khyl rakhiye..........


anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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kuch sabdo ke saath mai aap sabhi k beech upasthiti banane ki chesta kar raha hoon.....apne vichar jaroor batiyega........aapka prem anjana


mai pinjar ka tota
udta tha mai neel gagan mein
apne pankh pasare
madhur geet mai gata tha
apne pritam ke dware
jane kaun ghadi mein kisne
kaisa jaal bichaya
pal bhar mein na der lagi
khudko pinjar mein paya
ab...........mai pinjar ka tota
log dekhkar mujhko kehte
kitna pyara gata hai
sone ke pinjar mein dekho
sare sukh pata hai
pathik magar tum apne antar ke
antarpat ko kholo
mere in madhu geeton ko
tum virah baat se tolo
kyunki .......mai pinjar ka tota.
sone ke yeh dar darwaje
mere kahatir dhela hai
shan-o-shaukat, rishte nate
mere khatir mela hai
"anjana" kab kaun musafir
mujhko le jayega
na jane kab pinjar tota
neel gagan payega
ab to hoon.........mai pinjar ka tota
achha likha hai prem ji aapne.........................................


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achha likha hai prem ji aapne.........................................
rashmi ji pranaam..............
aapne kavita ko pasand kiya jiske liye thanx.................

aapka prem anjana.........


anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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