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kasam se... - 17th January 2011, 01:21 AM

Ahle-Mahfil ko Shaad ka aadaab... lijiye fir haazir huaa hoon hoon us ehsaas ke saath jise log ishq kahte hain.. gaur kijiyega..


Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se,
Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se.

Tu hoga Girdaabe-Bewafaa* duniya ke liye,
Meri kashtee ka tu Saahil hai kasam se.

Shamaa hai Maghroor bahot tamashaai me,
Raushan tera noor Sare-Mehfil hai kasam se.

Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi,
Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se.

Tere khaamosh Lab is zulf ke Pecho-kham*,
Ye jhuktee nazar badi Qaatil hai kasam se.

Tu Maho-anjum* hai ke paikar wafaa kaa,
Meraa Ishq naa tere Qaabil hai kasam se.

BaDa yaqeen tha 'shaad' tujhe duaa pe lekin,
Khudaa bhi Tere ishq se Gaafil* hai kasam se.



Rukhsaar-- cheeks,
Girdaab-- saagar me uthne wala bhawar.
Pecho-kham-- curls of hair,
maho-anjum -- chaand taare,
Gaafil -- careless, unaware.

shaad...


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17th January 2011, 08:10 AM

Tu hoga Girdaabe-Bewafaa* duniya ke liye,
Meri kashtee ka tu Saahil hai kasam se.

Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi,
Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se.

Tere khaamosh Lab is zulf ke Pecho-kham*,
Ye jhuktee nazar badi Qaatil hai kasam se.


Very Sweet .. Very Romantic ... Very Touching ... Shaad Bhai !

Good ExpressioN .... Very Impressive Creation .... dil se daad hazir hai ... !

aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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17th January 2011, 11:05 AM

[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';420945]Ahle-Mahfil ko Shaad ka aadaab... lijiye fir haazir huaa hoon hoon us ehsaas ke saath jise log ishq kahte hain.. gaur kijiyega..


Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se,
Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se.

Nice one...................!!!
Tu hoga Girdaabe-Bewafaa* duniya ke liye,
Meri kashtee ka tu Saahil hai kasam se.

Wah, lvly..................!!!

Shamaa hai Maghroor bahot tamashaai me,
Raushan tera noor Sare-Mehfil hai kasam se.

Bahut khoob..............!!!

Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi,
Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se.

Wahhh, wahh.............!!!
Tere khaamosh Lab is zulf ke Pecho-kham*,
Ye jhuktee nazar badi Qaatil hai kasam se.

Kya baat hai.............!!!
Tu Maho-anjum* hai ke paikar wafaa kaa,
Meraa Ishq naa tere Qaabil hai kasam se.

Heart touching lines....!!!

BaDa yaqeen tha 'shaad' tujhe duaa pe lekin,
Khudaa bhi Tere ishq se Gaafil* hai kasam se.

Well, once again a superb creation,Shaad Jee.....!!! Very well written, Romantic, Nice, good..........!!! God Bless You......!!!


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17th January 2011, 01:12 PM

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Ahle-Mahfil ko Shaad ka aadaab... lijiye fir haazir huaa hoon hoon us ehsaas ke saath jise log ishq kahte hain.. gaur kijiyega..


Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se,
Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se.

Tu hoga Girdaabe-Bewafaa* duniya ke liye,
Meri kashtee ka tu Saahil hai kasam se.

Shamaa hai Maghroor bahot tamashaai me,
Raushan tera noor Sare-Mehfil hai kasam se.

Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi,
Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se.

Tere khaamosh Lab is zulf ke Pecho-kham*,
Ye jhuktee nazar badi Qaatil hai kasam se.

Tu Maho-anjum* hai ke paikar wafaa kaa,
Meraa Ishq naa tere Qaabil hai kasam se.

BaDa yaqeen tha 'shaad' tujhe duaa pe lekin,
Khudaa bhi Tere ishq se Gaafil* hai kasam se.



Rukhsaar-- cheeks,
Girdaab-- saagar me uthne wala bhawar.
Pecho-kham-- curls of hair,
maho-anjum -- chaand taare,
Gaafil -- careless, unaware.

shaad...
Ji nice one ..................



Radhika

Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye


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Tu hoga Girdaabe-Bewafaa* duniya ke liye,
Meri kashtee ka tu Saahil hai kasam se.

Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi,
Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se.

Tere khaamosh Lab is zulf ke Pecho-kham*,
Ye jhuktee nazar badi Qaatil hai kasam se.


Very Sweet .. Very Romantic ... Very Touching ... Shaad Bhai !

Good ExpressioN .... Very Impressive Creation .... dil se daad hazir hai ... !

aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !


Aadaab Naresh bhai.. aapka sath aapka pyaar aapki duaaon ka to main hamesha hi muntazir rahta hoon.. jab tak apke daad ka aapki duaaon ka haanth sar pe naa ho hamesha mujhe khali khali sa lagta rahta hai.. har baar ki tarah jo aapne meri hausla afzaai ki hai.. uske liye main aapka behad shukrguzaar hoon.. aate rahen yoonhi. duaaon me yaad rakhhen..

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Sameer Bhai.....bahut bahut bahutttttttttt accha likha hai....jitni b tareef karuN kum hai.....majja aaya romantic creation padkar....yoon hi pyar bhare tarane gun-gunate raho bazm meiN

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Ahle-Mahfil ko Shaad ka aadaab... lijiye fir haazir huaa hoon hoon us ehsaas ke saath jise log ishq kahte hain.. gaur kijiyega..


Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se,
Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se.

Nice one...................!!!
Tu hoga Girdaabe-Bewafaa* duniya ke liye,
Meri kashtee ka tu Saahil hai kasam se.

Wah, lvly..................!!!

Shamaa hai Maghroor bahot tamashaai me,
Raushan tera noor Sare-Mehfil hai kasam se.

Bahut khoob..............!!!

Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi,
Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se.

Wahhh, wahh.............!!!
Tere khaamosh Lab is zulf ke Pecho-kham*,
Ye jhuktee nazar badi Qaatil hai kasam se.

Kya baat hai.............!!!
Tu Maho-anjum* hai ke paikar wafaa kaa,
Meraa Ishq naa tere Qaabil hai kasam se.

Heart touching lines....!!!

BaDa yaqeen tha 'shaad' tujhe duaa pe lekin,
Khudaa bhi Tere ishq se Gaafil* hai kasam se.

Well, once again a superb creation,Shaad Jee.....!!! Very well written, Romantic, Nice, good..........!!! God Bless You......!!!


Kavita jee, kaisi hain aap.. is baar fir aapka ye khulooso-muhabbat bhara reply dekha.. meri aankhen purnam ho gaeen.. mere jazbaaton ki itni kadr karne ka shukriya mohtarmaa... Bas isi baat ki khushi hotee hai ki apa dost hamara aaj bhi itna khyaal rakhte hain yahaan... aati rahen aur yoonhi sath detee rahen... apna khoob khyaal rakkkhen.

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Ji nice one ..................

Ji shukriya................


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Sameer Bhai.....bahut bahut bahutttttttttt accha likha hai....jitni b tareef karuN kum hai.....majja aaya romantic creation padkar....yoon hi pyar bhare tarane gun-gunate raho bazm meiN

pyar aur duaoN ke saath
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Pyaari baaji.. aap der sse aain par durust aain.. aapko yahan dekh kar yoon lag raha hai ki bas ab kuch baaki na raha. aapka is ada se aana aur is adaa se tareef karne ke to hum kaayal hain huzoor... aati rahiyega.. aashirwad dijiyega..

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Wah Wah kya kehne...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Aapka yeh kalaam roushan-e- mehfil hai kasam se........


Aap SDC ke best shayeroN me shamil hai kasam se.......

Yuhi likhte rahiye.....shaad sahab..




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wah! kya sher nikaale hain.

matla to ek dum kaatil hai. Ye sher to haasil-e-ghazal laga:

Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi,
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Wah Wah kya kehne...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Aapka yeh kalaam roushan-e- mehfil hai kasam se........


Aap SDC ke best shayeroN me shamil hai kasam se.......

Yuhi likhte rahiye.....shaad sahab..

Zainy,

Kuch zyaada hi tareef kar dee aapne kasam se.....

main is layaq bhi nahi shayad... khair zarra-nawaazi ka behad shukriya.. aaati rahen , padhti rahen..

allah hafiz...


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matla to ek dum kaatil hai. Ye sher to haasil-e-ghazal laga:

Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi,
Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se.

Sahil bhai, kaise hain aap.. ???

Aapko mujh nacheez ka ye adna sa kalaam pasand aaya, behad mashkoor-o-mamnoon hoon aapka.. yoonhi saath dete rahiyega.. khush rahiye.

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Ahle-Mahfil ko Shaad ka aadaab... lijiye fir haazir huaa hoon hoon us ehsaas ke saath jise log ishq kahte hain.. gaur kijiyega..


Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se,
Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se.

Tu hoga Girdaabe-Bewafaa* duniya ke liye,
Meri kashtee ka tu Saahil hai kasam se.

Shamaa hai Maghroor bahot tamashaai me,
Raushan tera noor Sare-Mehfil hai kasam se.

Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi,
Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se.

Tere khaamosh Lab is zulf ke Pecho-kham*,
Ye jhuktee nazar badi Qaatil hai kasam se.

Tu Maho-anjum* hai ke paikar wafaa kaa,
Meraa Ishq naa tere Qaabil hai kasam se.

BaDa yaqeen tha 'shaad' tujhe duaa pe lekin,
Khudaa bhi Tere ishq se Gaafil* hai kasam se.



Rukhsaar-- cheeks,
Girdaab-- saagar me uthne wala bhawar.
Pecho-kham-- curls of hair,
maho-anjum -- chaand taare,
Gaafil -- careless, unaware.

shaad...
Shaad ji

ishq ki khubsurti ko itni najaakat se farmaaya hai apne ...jise padh kar laga
aaj bhi ishq dilo me basta hai khi...

tere labzoN pe aaj kayal vo kasam se .......
ishq k tere ye ahsaas bakhoob hai kasam se ...........

duaa hai dil se tere ishq ko kasam se ....
aabaad rahe tera noor har dam se.........



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Shaad ji

ishq ki khubsurti ko itni najaakat se farmaaya hai apne ...jise padh kar laga
aaj bhi ishq dilo me basta hai khi...

tere labzoN pe aaj kayal vo kasam se .......
ishq k tere ye ahsaas bakhoob hai kasam se ...........

duaa hai dil se tere ishq ko kasam se ....
aabaad rahe tera noor har dam se.........



likhte rahiyega


Aadaab, aapka reply padha behad khushi hui janakar ki aapko hamara likhna achaa laga.. jee haan is baat se main beshaq sahmat hoon ki ishq aaaj bhi dilon me bastaa tabhi to log use likhte hain aur log use padhte hain.. aapka ye tareef karne ka shayrana andaaz behad pasand aaya. aati rahen yoon hi saath detee rahen... khush rahiye.

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bhai namaste

aapki is purani GHAZAL par nazar padii. . janaab bahot hi umdaah ehsaas aur andaaZ . dil shaad shaad ho gayaa . dil se daad


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Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se,
Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se.

Tu hoga Girdaabe-Bewafaa* duniya ke liye,
Meri kashtee ka tu Saahil hai kasam se.

Shamaa hai Maghroor bahot tamashaai me,
Raushan tera noor Sare-Mehfil hai kasam se.

Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi,
Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se.

Tere khaamosh Lab is zulf ke Pecho-kham*,
Ye jhuktee nazar badi Qaatil hai kasam se.

Tu Maho-anjum* hai ke paikar wafaa kaa,
Meraa Ishq naa tere Qaabil hai kasam se.

BaDa yaqeen tha 'shaad' tujhe duaa pe lekin,
Khudaa bhi Tere ishq se Gaafil* hai kasam se.




shaad...
sameerbhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,
Dhavalbhai kii rehnumaaii se hameiN aapkee ye behad khubsurat ghazal ka lutf milaa hai.........

ise taghaful karne ke liye muaafee chahta hooN....

masha allah! kya rumani andaaz hai, janaab!...

Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se,
Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se.

kya baat hai, kya baat hai.............

jazbaatoN ki bayaanaat khub nikhar ke aayee hai...............

daad hi daad aapko, Sameerbhai............



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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता



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bhai namaste

aapki is purani GHAZAL par nazar padii. . janaab bahot hi umdaah ehsaas aur andaaZ . dil shaad shaad ho gayaa . dil se daad


duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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Dhaval bhai aadaab.... ummed karta hoon khair o barkat se honge...

aapkaa behad shukrguzaar hoon jo aapne is kalaam ko na jaane kahaan se dhuund nikaalaa... yaeen maniye main khud ise padh kar usii rang me rang gaya jo ise likhte waqt mere dil o jogar me they... ek baar fir se shukriyaa aapka dhaval bhai..... tashreef laate rahiyega

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Dhavalbhai kii rehnumaaii se hameiN aapkee ye behad khubsurat ghazal ka lutf milaa hai.........

ise taghaful karne ke liye muaafee chahta hooN....

masha allah! kya rumani andaaz hai, janaab!...

Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se,
Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se.

kya baat hai, kya baat hai.............

jazbaatoN ki bayaanaat khub nikhar ke aayee hai...............

daad hi daad aapko, Sameerbhai............

Aadeil saahab aadaab.... bahot bahot shukriyaa aapki tareef o tavajjoh kaa..

main tahe dil se mashkoor hoon aapka.... aur dhaval bhai ka aek baar fir se shukriya jo unhone is kalaam ko saamne laane me merii madad ki..

aate rahiyegaa... aur khush rahiye

Shaad.....


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kya shoiab bhai....ye nageena kahan chhipaye baithe the.........speechless....heart blowing...very very romantic.......sorry foe being late.



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thanks alot Naaz..... behad khushi hoti hai jab jab aap bazm me tashreef laatii hain.. aaapko ye andaaz ye kalam pasand aaya merii khushnaseebi hai kasamm se.....

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kya shoiab bhai....ye nageena kahan chhipaye baithe the.........speechless....heart blowing...very very romantic.......sorry foe being late.

bahot inaayat , bahot shukriyaa aapka Aru bhai... ise Dhaval bhai ki mehrbaani kahunga jo saalon puraana kalaam aap sab ke saamne laane me meri madad kii unhone... thanks for your comment my dear... aate rahna..

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[I]Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se,
Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se.

Tu hoga Girdaabe-Bewafaa* duniya ke liye,
Meri kashtee ka tu Saahil hai kasam se.

Shamaa hai Maghroor bahot tamashaai me,
Raushan tera noor Sare-Mehfil hai kasam se.

Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi,
Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se.

Tere khaamosh Lab is zulf ke Pecho-kham*,
Ye jhuktee nazar badi Qaatil hai kasam se.

Tu Maho-anjum* hai ke paikar wafaa kaa,
Meraa Ishq naa tere Qaabil hai kasam se.

BaDa yaqeen tha 'shaad' tujhe duaa pe lekin,
Khudaa bhi Tere ishq se Gaafil* hai kasam se.
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Rukhsaar-- cheeks,
Girdaab-- saagar me uthne wala bhawar.
Pecho-kham-- curls of hair,
maho-anjum -- chaand taare,
Gaafil -- careless, unaware.

shaad...

Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se,
Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se.

Waah waah kia aaghaaz e mohabbat hai mera matlb aaghaaz e kalaam hai. Puri ghazal laajawaab aaghaaz ki tarah ihtataam b sundar sher par.
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Waah waah kia aaghaaz e mohabbat hai mera matlb aaghaaz e kalaam hai. Puri ghazal laajawaab aaghaaz ki tarah ihtataam b sundar sher par.
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