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masoom baaaten karegaa to pyaare - 23rd January 2015, 07:10 AM

ansoo me kaise wo patthar taregaa
tum sochate ho muhabbat karegaa?

rag rag men meree wahee to basa hai
main gar mara to wo bhee maregaa

likhtaa hoon main yoon tere waaste par
khat kab padhe the jo gazalen padhegaa

meraa pyar kya hai koyee ik nashaa hai
jo uatarane se pahale to poora chadhegaa

aayaa hai dukh bhee dobara se dene
sookhe kuyen men too paanee bharegaa

mujhe kya pataa teraa pyaar aa ke
jawaanee ko meree kahaanee karegaa

masoom baaaten karegaa to pyaare
koyee pyaar ko yaan pe kab tak padhegaa?


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kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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ansoo me kaise wo patthar taregaa
tum sochate ho muhabbat karegaa?

rag rag men meree wahee to basa hai
main gar mara to wo bhee maregaa

likhtaa hoon main yoon tere waaste par
khat kab padhe the jo gazalen padhegaa

meraa pyar kya hai koyee ik nashaa hai
jo uatarane se pahale to poora chadhegaa

aayaa hai dukh bhee dobara se dene
sookhe kuyen men too paanee bharegaa

mujhe kya pataa teraa pyaar aa ke
jawaanee ko meree kahaanee karegaa

masoom baaaten karegaa to pyaare
koyee pyaar ko yaan pe kab tak padhegaa?

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23rd January 2015, 09:52 PM

bahut bahut shukriya sameer padhane ke liye pasand karane ke liye


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3rd February 2015, 08:34 PM

Bohot umdaa jenab.. Baarha paDhne ko jee kar raha hai.
Har ek sheyr lajawaab, lekin quoted sheyr dil ke qareeb raha.


likhtaa hoon main yoon tere waaste par
khat kab padhe the jo gazalen padhegaa

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ansoo me kaise wo patthar taregaa
tum sochate ho muhabbat karegaa?

rag rag men meree wahee to basa hai
main gar mara to wo bhee maregaa

likhtaa hoon main yoon tere waaste par
khat kab padhe the jo gazalen padhegaa

meraa pyar kya hai koyee ik nashaa hai
jo uatarane se pahale to poora chadhegaa

aayaa hai dukh bhee dobara se dene
sookhe kuyen men too paanee bharegaa

mujhe kya pataa teraa pyaar aa ke
jawaanee ko meree kahaanee karegaa

masoom baaaten karegaa to pyaare
koyee pyaar ko yaan pe kab tak padhegaa?
Behad Umdaa bhai - ek arse baad aapko padhne ka mauka milaa hai aur kya khoob baat kahi hai aapne..yun to har sher bahut nayaab laga par is ek sher ki baat aur thi...

meraa pyar kya hai koyee ik nashaa hai
jo uatarane se pahale to poora chadhegaa


Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa..



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4th February 2015, 06:38 PM

bohut khoob........................

shayad phli bar padaa apko aur yakeen maniye bohut acha laga.

jis sher na dil ko choo liya woh tha

rag rag men meree wahee to basa hai
main gar mara to wo bhee maregaa

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Bohot umdaa jenab.. Baarha paDhne ko jee kar raha hai.
Har ek sheyr lajawaab, lekin quoted sheyr dil ke qareeb raha.


likhtaa hoon main yoon tere waaste par
khat kab padhe the jo gazalen padhegaa



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bohut khoob........................

shayad phli bar padaa apko aur yakeen maniye bohut acha laga.

jis sher na dil ko choo liya woh tha

rag rag men meree wahee to basa hai
main gar mara to wo bhee maregaa

wah wah!
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ansoo me kaise wo patthar taregaa
tum sochate ho muhabbat karegaa?

rag rag men meree wahee to basa hai
main gar mara to wo bhee maregaa

likhtaa hoon main yoon tere waaste par
khat kab padhe the jo gazalen padhegaa

meraa pyar kya hai koyee ik nashaa hai
jo uatarane se pahale to poora chadhegaa

aayaa hai dukh bhee dobara se dene
sookhe kuyen men too paanee bharegaa

mujhe kya pataa teraa pyaar aa ke
jawaanee ko meree kahaanee karegaa

masoom baaaten karegaa to pyaare
koyee pyaar ko yaan pe kab tak padhegaa?
Namaskaar Anil ji..........kya khoob gazal kahi hai aapne, sabhi sher aik se badkar aik hai...yeh 2 sher muje behaddddd pasand aaye.

rag rag men meree wahee to basa hai
main gar mara to wo bhee maregaa

likhtaa hoon main yoon tere waaste par
khat kab padhe the jo gazalen padhegaa


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ansoo me kaise wo patthar taregaa
tum sochate ho muhabbat karegaa?

rag rag men meree wahee to basa hai
main gar mara to wo bhee maregaa

likhtaa hoon main yoon tere waaste par
khat kab padhe the jo gazalen padhegaa

meraa pyar kya hai koyee ik nashaa hai
jo uatarane se pahale to poora chadhegaa

aayaa hai dukh bhee dobara se dene
sookhe kuyen men too paanee bharegaa

mujhe kya pataa teraa pyaar aa ke
jawaanee ko meree kahaanee karegaa

masoom baaaten karegaa to pyaare
koyee pyaar ko yaan pe kab tak padhegaa?
waaah waaaah ...

kia kehne saahab ..... bohat khoob..

daad haazir hy sir..

likhte rahiye ..


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Waaaaaah.....sabhi ashaar ek se badhkar ek...

likhtaa hoon main yoon tere waaste par
khat kab padhe the jo gazalen padhegaa

meraa pyar kya hai koyee ik nashaa hai
jo uatarane se pahale to poora chadhegaa....

Bahut bahut khooob...



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