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Mujhko tum tishnagi me rahne do... - 1st December 2015, 11:15 PM

Mujhko tum tishnagi me rahne do
Kuch kami zindgi me rahne do..

Rahmatein uski na kabhi bhuluun
Isliye bandgi me rahne do..

Kisko fursat hai kon dekhega
Haan mujhe sadgi me rahne do..

Har nazara lage bada dlkash
Bas mujhe bekhudi me rahne do..

Rah liye sari umra sanjeeda..
Dil 'madhu' dillagi me rahne do..

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Mujhko tum tishnagi me rahne do
Kuch kami zindgi me rahne do..

Rahmatein uski na kabhi bhuluun
Isliye bandgi me rahne do..

Kisko fursat hai kon dekhega
Haan mujhe sadgi me rahne do..

Har nazara lage bada dlkash
Bas mujhe bekhudi me rahne do..

Rah liye sari umra sanjeeda..
Dil 'madhu' dillagi me rahne do..

madhu

waaahhh madhu saahiba.... kamaal ki ghazal goii na nazaara pesh kiyaa hai aapne is baar.... bahut hi aalaaa aur dilkash kalaam... merii daad qubool kijiyegaa... aur aisaa hi achaa achaa likhtii rahiyegaa.... meri agar personal baat kahun to behad hi zyaada taraqqee paaii hai aapne apne hunar me... aapke har kalaam me wo asar dikhtaa hai....... salaamat rahen....

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waah waaah waah.................................

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Mujhko tum tishnagi me rahne do
Kuch kami zindgi me rahne do..

Rahmatein uski na kabhi bhuluun
Isliye bandgi me rahne do..

Kisko fursat hai kon dekhega
Haan mujhe sadgi me rahne do..

Har nazara lage bada dlkash
Bas mujhe bekhudi me rahne do..

Rah liye sari umra sanjeeda..
Dil 'madhu' dillagi me rahne do..

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3rd December 2015, 08:39 AM

Dear Madhu Bala
bahut khoobsurat likhti ho tum...sabhi ashiyaar khoobsurat rhe yeh 2 sher muje khaas pasand aaye.

Rahmatein uski na kabhi bhuluun
Isliye bandgi me rahne do..

Kisko fursat hai kon dekhega
Haan mujhe sadgi me rahne do..

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waaahhh madhu saahiba.... kamaal ki ghazal goii na nazaara pesh kiyaa hai aapne is baar.... bahut hi aalaaa aur dilkash kalaam... merii daad qubool kijiyegaa... aur aisaa hi achaa achaa likhtii rahiyegaa.... meri agar personal baat kahun to behad hi zyaada taraqqee paaii hai aapne apne hunar me... aapke har kalaam me wo asar dikhtaa hai....... salaamat rahen....

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shukriya shaad ji...aapko pata hai..kai baar yun lagta hai ki kuch likhne kabil hain hee nahi abhi ham...fir khud ko ye bharosa dilati hun ki ek na ek din to kuch achcha niklega is kalam se aur isi aas ko jab aap jaise hunarmand doston ka sath milta hai to hausla dugna o jata hai....fir jo ban padta hai vo samne hai.....
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aate rahiyega...
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Mujhko tum tishnagi me rahne do
Kuch kami zindgi me rahne do..

Rahmatein uski na kabhi bhuluun
Isliye bandgi me rahne do..

Kisko fursat hai kon dekhega
Haan mujhe sadgi me rahne do..

Har nazara lage bada dlkash
Bas mujhe bekhudi me rahne do..

Rah liye sari umra sanjeeda..
Dil 'madhu' dillagi me rahne do..

madhu



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Bohat umda kalaam madhu ji. Bas maqte ka doosra misra pehle misre se aur behtar rabt meinN aa jaaye to aur maza aa jaaye.

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waah waaah waah.................................

Madhu this was superb piece of art. beautiful.

haaye main rep nahi de sakti ye meri mazboori hai.

de sakti to 5-7 de deti iske liye.
thank u sarika...
.tumhari daad apne aap me rep hee hai...
.bahut hausla milta hai...

aati rahna..

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Mujhko tum tishnagi me rahne do
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Rahmatein uski na kabhi bhuluun
Isliye bandgi me rahne do..

Kisko fursat hai kon dekhega
Haan mujhe sadgi me rahne do..

Har nazara lage bada dlkash
Bas mujhe bekhudi me rahne do..

Rah liye sari umra sanjeeda..
Dil 'madhu' dillagi me rahne do..

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Kisko fursat hai kon dekhega
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Har nazara lage bada dlkash
Bas mujhe bekhudi me rahne do..


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Rahmatein uski na kabhi bhuluun
Isliye bandgi me rahne do..

Kisko fursat hai kon dekhega
Haan mujhe sadgi me rahne do..

Har nazara lage bada dlkash
Bas mujhe bekhudi me rahne do..

Rah liye sari umra sanjeeda..
Dil 'madhu' dillagi me rahne do..

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