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Dil se mere kiyon jaataa nahi hai... -
19th September 2009, 10:46 PM
Aaj-kal woh nazar aataa nahi hai
Dil se mere kiyon jaataa nahi hai... Dard ke baadlon se gheera baitha hu Shakal meri koi pehchaantaa nahi hai... Khamosh padi hai ghar ki deewaare Aake mujhe tu ab hansaataa nahi hai... Mere saamne rakkhi hai tasveer uski Sukhi aankhon ko maazi rulaataa nahi hai... Dastak dey ke gai hogi hawa shaayad zara Mujhe uske hone ka ehsaas deelaataa nahi hai... Judaai ka aalam aur kitni dair tak rahega "Naresh" ko waqt yeh samjhaataa nahi hai...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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20th September 2009, 08:54 AM
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20th September 2009, 09:15 AM
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Naresh ji..............namaste waise toh aap ki sabhi poetries achchi hai par har nayi ghazal mein kuch alag ehsaas hota hai.....yeh ghazal mujhe behadh pasand aatyi esp yeh sher.... Judaai ka aalam aur kitni dair tak rahega "Naresh" ko waqt yeh samjhaataa nahi hai... behatreen rachna hai yeh aap ki daad qabul kare Regards  _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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20th September 2009, 01:39 PM
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hamesha ki taraha aap ka saath milta rahega.....toh kuch aur bhi achha shaayad likh saku......koshish toh kar hi raha hu.... intna sammaan aur hausla afzaai ke liye aapka dhanybaad..... aap hamesha khush rahe..... aur apna khayal rakhna.... mujhe aapki nayi peshkash ka bahut intezaar hai...... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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20th September 2009, 05:11 PM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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20th September 2009, 05:37 PM
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Sahab aapki rachnaye bahut nikhar gayi hai aab shayad aapko zyada rehnumai ki zarurat nahi hai aap aab ek behtar lekhak ban gaye hai but is per hi na ruke aur aage badhiye abhi aapko bahut sikhana hai... Highligted sher achche lage .. Likhate rahiye Khush rahiye.. Khuda Hafez... 
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20th September 2009, 10:14 PM
" na malum meri palko ko kiya huaa hai
sote-sote sapne mai khud hi bheeg jaati hai.... " YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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20th September 2009, 10:22 PM
Naresh ji aur ek mast gazal kahi hai apne muze pasnd aai aise likhte rahiye.
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20th September 2009, 11:06 PM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st September 2009, 07:09 AM
Sabhi SDC ke dosto ko EID MUBAARAK...!!! YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st September 2009, 06:13 PM
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Sameer ji.......Eid Mubaarak......kaise hai aap......aap se itni ijazat afzaai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya....... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st September 2009, 10:15 PM
" maiN jaise jaise tumhari chaahat meiN kho raha huN toh khul rahe hain hazaar dar mujh pe teri meharbaani ke ..." ---nm-- YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st September 2009, 10:27 PM
[B]Mere saamne rakkhi hai tasveer uski
Sukhi aankhon ko maazi rulaataa nahi hai... Naresh bhayee bahut hi kamaal ka khyaal aur uskaa byaan hai bahut hatke ... soch ko do rahe pe le jata hai aise hi likhte raho ... |
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22nd September 2009, 04:59 AM
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Aage bhi aapse housla afzaai milti rahe....yehi dua hai.... khush rahiye.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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22nd September 2009, 09:23 AM
" Kiske Khayaalon mai baithi hai woh shaam se aake chupke se haathon mai mehndi laga gaya koi..." YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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22nd September 2009, 06:36 PM
Hassan ji.....koi baat nahi ....aap aaram se aur ache se lahore time guzariye....bas aapse baat karne ka dil kar raha tha......so hamne likh diya......Eid ache se man gai na.....khush rahiye......aur apna khayal rakhiyega.....
Jab aapke paas waqt ho .....Hassan ji is Ghazal ko padhke bataiyega...... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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23rd September 2009, 12:43 AM
" Yeh na koi itefaaq tha na koi khushfemi thi ishq-e-nazar thi meri isliye tum zara sehmi thi..." YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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23rd September 2009, 08:20 PM
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" Din toh guzar jayega, kiya hoga jab shaam hogi YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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23rd September 2009, 11:26 PM
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" Mere zakhm abhi itne bhi hare nahi huye YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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24th September 2009, 09:26 AM
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" Chhu ke gai thi tere jisum ki mehak aaj mujh ko YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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24th September 2009, 01:03 PM
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bahut accha lagta hai jab aapki koi shayri padhte hain ... aap aise hi likhte raha kijiye ... tk cr... |
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24th September 2009, 01:57 PM
Ise aur accha likha jaa sakta tha ..
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24th September 2009, 06:58 PM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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24th September 2009, 10:57 PM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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25th September 2009, 11:20 PM
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Peechhe mud ke dekhaa jo maine Kiya pata thaa woh shakss saamne aa jaayega...... Daal par baithe parinde ko tu pathar na maar Udd ke na malum kaha chala jaayega.......... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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26th September 2009, 12:25 AM
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bahot acha laga hume, shoots straight to the nerve. keep writting chota sa dil Love like you have never been hurt, and Dance like no one is watching." "Janee kya likha hai us Rub ne apne kismat par, roz hathon ko dekh kar unee parne ke koshish karthe hai" |
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26th September 2009, 05:30 PM
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Shukriya........aapne humari koshish ko padha.....aur acha laga....aise hi saath dete rahiye....khush rahiye..... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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26th September 2009, 06:53 PM
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Naa yeh hume gawaraa hoga, honto pe tere hansi na aaye Phoolon ko bhi sochna hoga, surkh labon ki pankhriya na murjhaaye.. YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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27th September 2009, 07:45 PM
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Khafaa na honaa agar ba.D ke thaam luu.N daaman ye dil fareb Khataa jaan kar nahii.n hotii tumhaare aane talak ham ko hosh rahataa hai phir usake baad hame.n kuchh Khabar nahii.n hotii --Sahir-- YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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28th September 2009, 08:40 PM
to.Do dil meraa shauq se to.Do chiiz merii nahii.n tumhaarii hai YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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29th September 2009, 08:33 AM
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aapki zarara nawazi hai.....aise hi saathe dete rahiye....khush rahiye..... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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29th September 2009, 09:26 PM
jazbaat kii kaliyaa.N chunanaa hai aur pyaar kaa tohfaa denaa hai logo.n kii nigaahe.n kuchh bhii kahe.n logo.n se hame.n kyaa lenaa hai ye Khaas ta'alluq aapas kaa duniyaa kii nazar me.n aam sahii YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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30th September 2009, 09:15 AM
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dil vo hai ki fariyaad se labrez hai har vaqt ham vo hain ki kuchh muunh se nikalne nahin dete YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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30th September 2009, 08:05 PM
Deep ji....kaise ho....Are u busy ? Ye deepak hai aapka jab kahon jal jayega, ye who suraj nahi jo shamm ko dhal jayega.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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