patjhad mey jevan beet gaya

[soniakaur]

patjhad mey jevan beet gaya
koi humsafer na meela hum ko tanha eu safer beet gaya,
vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya.
kabhi apna na bena sakey unko hum jin key devaney they,
vo dil mey bastey they humarey per hum sey anjaney they.
dil mey tasvir hai un ki ab bhi per bhuhut dur manmet gaya,
vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya.
kabhi to pigalengey hum key badal khushiya barseyngi jevan mey,
heryali cahyagi sukhi bagiya mey yea aas lagi thi men mey,
ab to pthra gai hai ahkhey bhi akeyleypen hum sey jeet gaya,
vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya.

[Kavvish]

patjhad mey jevan beet gaya
koi humsafer na meela hum ko tanha eu safer beet gaya,
vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya.
kabhi apna na bena sakey unko hum jin key devaney they,
vo dil mey bastey they humarey per hum sey anjaney they.
dil mey tasvir hai un ki ab bhi per bhuhut dur manmet gaya,
vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya.
kabhi to pigalengey hum key badal khushiya barseyngi jevan mey,
heryali cahyagi sukhi bagiya mey yea aas lagi thi men mey,
ab to pthra gai hai ahkhey bhi akeyleypen hum sey jeet gaya,
vasant ki subha na deykhi patjhad mey jevan beet gaya.

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Sonia ji

Bahut achha likha hai aapne.. daad kubool kijiye

'vo dil mey bastey they humarey per hum sey anjaney they. '
is ek line me hi aapne bahut kuchh kah diya hai...waise poori rachna bahut achhi hai..

[trufellings1]

soniaji bilkul sahi kaha aapne , bahut achhi rachna hai
khaskar ye line

kabhi apna na bena sakey unko hum jin key devaney they,
vo dil mey bastey they humarey per hum sey anjaney they.

ynhee likhte rahiye isi duao ke sath

trufellings1