aap jab bhi kuchh likhte hai bas padhte rehne ko dil karta hai. shayri to hajaro log likhte hai lekin rythem me aa sake aise kalam bahot kam hote hai. magar aap me wo khubi bahot umda hai...
waqt-e-nizaa itni tassalli to thii dil ko
tum be-wafaa hue to hue , HUM nibhaa chale
usne hamaari khwaahisheN pairoN tal'e rauNdiiN
har ik razaa pe jiski hum gardan jhukaa , chale
this sounds so touchable. bahot hi jiyada unselfish,dedicated and secrificed words. bahot bahot bahot khoob likha hai. hope to hear next soon
bye and take care
sanam
taqdeer ne kya kam sataya hua tha
jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye
logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main
aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye
-> SaNaM