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Tasweer pe Tahreer - February 2016 - 4th February 2016, 10:58 PM

Pyaare doston,

Chaliye to doston February ki TPT tasveer lekar haazir hoon, umeed hai aap sab is baar ki tasveer pasand aayegi...

Rules to aap sab ko pata hi hain, magar phir bhi main aap sabki aasani ke liye ise ek bar fir se chaspaa kar raha hoon.. agar isme kuch raddo badal karne ki gunjaaish huee to ittelah kar doonga .....

Rules kuch is tarah se hain, yaani ki hame neeche likhi baaton ko gaur kar ke apne kalaam likhne honge...

1) aapke khayaalaat tasweer se milte hon, dhyaan rakhiye khayaal tasweer ke jitne nazdeeq honge, kalaam utnaa hi sabko attract karegaa....

2) Kalaam khud kaa likhaa huaa ho.. ham maazrat ke saath kahnaa chahenge ke kisii aur ka likha hua kalaam hame na bhejen, warna use is muqaable me shaamil na kiyaa jaaegaa.... as per the rules of TPT.

3) aapkaa kalaam kisii aur website, Facebook ya personally kisii ko bhii share naa karen, jo aap TPT me dene waale hain... aapke kalaam me takhallus ya shaayar ka naam bhi shaamil na kijiyegaa...

4) ek member ek hi post hame bhej sakta hai...... agar us kalaam me kuch mistakes ho gayee hon to wo sudhaarii jaa saktee hain...par kalaam change nahi kiya ja sakega...

5) isme Behar ki koi bandish nahii rakhii jaa rahii hai so that any one can take part.. lekin jo behar me likhnaa jaante hain wo iska istemaal kar sakte hain....


6)apne kalam aap sirf aur sirf mujhe pm karenge yani mast ko...
ji haan pm ke zariye bheji gayi entries ko hee qubool ki jaaengii is baat ka dhyaan rakkhen....

7) aap sab apne apne kalaam mujhe 20 February ke pahle bhej den, hamne 15 din ka waqt kalaam likhne ke liye aur 10 din ka samay voting ke liye diyaa jaayega... voting ki dates aage aapko sab ko ittellah ki jaegi...

8) being as a coordinator main is competition me hissa nahi le sakunga... aur baaki sabhi mods isme hissa le sakte hain, submission aur voting dono me...

9) apne kalaam kisi aur mod se bhi saajha na karen.. sirf apni pratiyaan mujhe bhejen....

main sabhi ko ek baar fir se badhaai doonga aur aap sab ke saath aur sahyog ki kaamna karta hoon..... aur ummeed karta hoonjald se jald aap sabke khoobsurat kalaam mujhe milenge.....







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5th February 2016, 10:26 AM

bahut pyari tasweer pesh ki hai mast ji.....ummeed hai sabhi dost is par apni tahreer jald se jald aapko bhejenge.........aur silsile ko kamyaab banayenge..........




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jaldi jali apni tahreer mast ji ko pm karein doston..............................



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9th February 2016, 11:05 AM

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bahut pyari tasweer pesh ki hai mast ji.....ummeed hai sabhi dost is par apni tahreer jald se jald aapko bhejenge.........aur silsile ko kamyaab banayenge..........

Shukriyaa Madhu aapke saath ka umeed hai aur doston ko bhi tasveer pasand aayi hogi, aap sab ki tehreer ke intezaar mein....



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apni apni tahreer jald se jald pm karein doston........



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11th February 2016, 06:22 AM

bahut acchii tasweer pesh ki hai aapne mast sahab....
ummeed karta hoon is baar bhi hame behad ache ache kalaam padhne milenge....

doston jald se jald apni tahreer mast saahab ko pm par bhej den... shukriyaa

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bahut acchii tasweer pesh ki hai aapne mast sahab....
ummeed karta hoon is baar bhi hame behad ache ache kalaam padhne milenge....

doston jald se jald apni tahreer mast saahab ko pm par bhej den... shukriyaa

Shaad.......
Shaad bhai shukriya humhe to aapke kalam se nikli tehreer ka intezaar hai umeed hai jald khatam hoga.....



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13th February 2016, 08:39 PM

doston..apni apni tahreer mast sahab ko zaroor pm karein......



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16th February 2016, 08:50 PM

Doston,

4 din bache hai aur aapki tehreer ka besabri se intezaar ho raha hai....



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17th February 2016, 04:10 PM

wahhhh es baar bachpan yaad dila rhe ho apni tasveer ke zariye....bahut khhob...sabhi likhne waloN ko shub-kaamnaye.


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18th February 2016, 10:15 AM

Doston do din baaki hai aur aabhi tak sirf 1 entry hi mujh tak pahunchi hai, aapse guzaarish hai ki apni tehreer jald se jald mujh tak pahuchaaye.



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Bahut hi afsoos ke saath mujhe kehna pad raha hai ki is baar ki TPT ko kam entries ki wajah se radd karna pad raha hai. Is baar ki tasveer par sirf 1 entry aayi hai.

Doston se main guzaarish karna chahunga ki agar aapka TPT ko lekar koi sujhaav ya feedback hai to vo mods tak zaroor pahunchaaye.

Ye zaahir si baat hai phir bhi kehna zaroori lag raha hai, mods kaafi mehnat karte hai aap sab tak yeh pratyogitayein laane ke liye aur agar aap sab hi us mein participate nahi karenge to humhari mehnat viphal hai....




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Bahut hi afsoos ke saath mujhe kehna pad raha hai ki is baar ki TPT ko kam entries ki wajah se radd karna pad raha hai. Is baar ki tasveer par sirf 1 entry aayi hai.

Doston se main guzaarish karna chahunga ki agar aapka TPT ko lekar koi sujhaav ya feedback hai to vo mods tak zaroor pahunchaaye.

Ye zaahir si baat hai phir bhi kehna zaroori lag raha hai, mods kaafi mehnat karte hai aap sab tak yeh pratyogitayein laane ke liye aur agar aap sab hi us mein participate nahi karenge to humhari mehnat viphal hai....

mujhe hairani bhi hai aur afsos bhi ki is baar aap sab doston ka sath hame nahi mila...itni khoob tasweer pe aap sab ne apne khayaal hare sath nahi share kiye...koi vajah zaroor hogi...ham janna chahenge doston....ki TPT me kya badlaaw dekhna chahte hain aap....



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